SwaSan Drabble: 'Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnu' - Page 10

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Viji 🤗 This is awesome!!

I hav stopped watching the episodes since maasi's jiji's khush nahi hai. I go by WU. But I dont know if they would show something so nuanced, heart felt and sensible. I loved it. For once, I want swara to be selfish and find her happiness. Swasan should go honeymoon-ing and let the elders of the deal with the situation.

I loved the mehendi scene. Her thinking about Sanskaar and him coming to see her. There is some cosmic force binding them. I know

I loved Sharmista. She respect fully gave it back to Shekar.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Unresed in page 4 darling!

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Viji,

This is amazing.Sweet and nice update 😊

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Viji
This was grt dear.
Sharm ista standing against Shekhar was very much needed.
Loved it very much

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Hey Di...it was amazing...woow loved how mishty stood for swasan.. Hope we will get to see this in serial but we know it is not possible...u expressed swara's thoughts with clarity.. Amazing continue such...

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Viji🤗 wonderful as always... Shekhar😡😡😡 Akal hai nahi, jhaadne chala hai😡😡 Seriously, what did Shomi see in him🤢🤢 But, she absolutely stole the show in this piece.. The clarity with which she showed Shekhar the mirror abt his hypocrisy was awesome! He realised she could possibly leave him if he keeps up with this tamasha.. Good for him..Anyways, he's just a waste of space IMO.. Glad swara took a stand and decided to leave with sanskar... Wish this happens in the show too.. Today's precap was.. Waise swara did in a way conjure sanskar there😉 Itne shiddat se yaad kiya that he felt her pain resonate with his, aur use aana hi pada... Uska pyaar use kheech le hi aya😃 So filmy na😆😆 Love this romantic melodrama😛😛 Loved this one too😃.

Akshata😊

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Unreserved on 1

Originally posted by: rithika2015

unres on page 3

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey Viji.. 🤗

So here I am finally commenting on your fine work.. It was plain beautiful Viji.. Where do you summon such talent and flair with words and situations.. I'm yet caught up with your drabble the words yet roaming in my head..

Swara's monologues were very very crisp and well written by you and they depicted her state of mind after her separation from her husband perfectly.. I love the marriage flashback that you wrote when Sanskaar ties the mangalsutra round Swara's neck and being the naughty man he is he couldn't resist teasing her even at the mandap in the midst of their marriage.. Bada mazakiya hai woh.. And the visual effects of the mangalsutra tying scenes were well depicted too loved it.. 😃

I love it when Sanskaar comforts Swara there is immense care even his rebuke.. Uska pyaar toh pyaar hai par uske gusse main bhi pyaar hai Swara ke liye.. Loved his dialogues which he said to Swara about her tears being unbearable to him *sigh* I want a guy like Sanskaar as my life partner..

The straightforwardness with which he told Shekhar that he had full rights to meet his lawfully wedded wife and that Swara had full rights to decide for her future and not him was absolute love for me and Swara didn't fail him by lending him her full support and chose to go back to him.. I like the calm with which Swara dealt with the situation..

But the best was yet to come in the form of Sharmishtha, wow..!! She hit the bull's eye when she spoke today.. Showing Shekhar the mirror today and forcing him to think about his actions and the repercussions of those actions.. Just loved the fact that she put her foot down and rooted for the happiness of her daughter and son in law.. 👏

The slight teasing by Sanskaar in the end was nice, the man has a great sense of humor and is witty too and like such guys.. Sigh wish bhagwaan meri sunle aur mujhe Sanskaar jaisa kabhi Sanskaari aur kabhi Asanskaari pati de.. I'd love it.. 😆😳

But yet again over all great writing Viji.. I was lost in the aura tat you created in this piece of work of your's.. Fab.. 👍🏼

Thank you so much for the pm..

Love,

Kashmi 🤗

Hey Kashmi 🤗 🤗 🤗

Such a pleasure to hear from you, sweetheart. I am really super happy you loved this drabble OS.

Thanks for saying you loved the portrayal of Swara's emotions, her yearning for her husband when she is being kept away from him for no fault of theirs. I loved writing that marriage flashback, Sanskaar's little bit of masti when he clasps the mangalsutra around Swara's neck. 😳 😉 He certainly is a big mazaki, and an even bigger romantic hubby. No wonder Swara blushes so prettily when he's next to her, isn't it? 😉

Oh you described that so well dear...that there is such immense love for Swara even in his rebuke. He can't bear to see her in tears...and though she's crying because she is pining for him so much, Sanskaar still feels upset at her tears. I'll certainly pray that you get a guy like Sanskaar for your life partner! 😆 🤗

I really wanted to show that grounded, calm, confident and composed side of Sanskaar. He doesn't want to be ruse with Shekar, so he tells him respectfully but very firmly, that he has every right to meet his lawfully wedded wife, and Swara has every right to decide where she wants to go. It is their decision as a married couple, Shekar cannot attempt to force his misguided decision down their throats.

And Swara too, while being very polite and loving with her Dad, conveyed very calmly that she didn't agree with his decision. What was her and Sanskaar's fault after all? Why should they be asked to renounce each other? Makes no sense!!

Thanks for saying you loved Shomi's portrayal---I really wanted to show her as a strong mom, standing firmly in support of her daughter's happiness. She really showed the mirror to Shekar about how selectively he's been acting!

I was going all 🤣 at this line from your comment ""bhagwaan meri sunle aur mujhe Sanskaar jaisa kabhi Sanskaari aur kabhi Asanskaari pati de"""

Sanskaar certainly has a wonderful sense of humor...but you too have one my dear! 😆 I do hope you get your wish, and land a wonderful pati just like Sanskaar. 😉 And may he adore you as much as Sanskaar adores Swara! 🤗

Lots of Love,

---Viji