SwaSan Drabble: 'Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnu'

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
ow..this was beautiful

Thanks so very much Prachi my dear. 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Viji...
Fantastic updates... i loved all ur drabbles series...going to comment on each one...few sentencess but will definetely comment...

Im lazy bone when it comes to typing...

But i just love ur writing... immensely...

Love u...
Loads of hugs ..kisses
Talia

Thanks so much, Talia sweetheart. 🤗 🤗

So happy to hear you loved this OS as well the other ones. That really made my day.

No worries, do comment when time permits.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Unres page 7

Thanks V my dear pal 🤗

Replied on that just a little while back.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
brilliant...

Thanks so very much. 🤗

Glad you loved it.

Cheers

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

But he is doing exactly that Viji. He is learning from his daamaad! Just like him he is thick skinned, brainless, shameless, stupid, wussy. You see Swara isnt really his daughter so Sanskaar is not his daamad. His daughter is Ragini & he is copying Laksh magnificently👏

^^^^ Shruti...too good, too good!! 🤣 🤣

The only problem which will confound Shekar now is, Lakshya is no longer his daamaad. 😆 He is Kavya's pati dev! Aaaooowww Gaaawwwddd, when I saw them both swaying and drunk yesterday, I didn't know whether to ROFL or weep at the sheer inanity of the portrayal! Awful, just awful!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: bones123

@Bold : 🤣 2.5 times !!! I think Sanskaar and Swara have to be married at least 42 times to get 'universal' approval !!

Man any pregnancy track will be the worst...they've already near absolved Ragini of any previous wrong doings...with baccha that will surely go out of the window !! That character needs a redemption track not a victim track !! They will theb appeal to Lakshya's inner Shekhar and woo his big laado for arrival of his small laado...*may as well gouge my eyes out*

P.S. : Love how Shruti (Lannister) says Shekhar learns from his damaad Lakshya...satyavachan !!

Pri...😆 Yup, I think in the "real world" SwaSan have been married 2.5 times. 😉 The first sindhoor marriage was of course so resonant, so goosebump inducingly magnificent, but those Gandharva rites ain't legally sanctioned anymore. 😆 It would still have tremendous social value though, so let's count it as a half marriage!

Their next two marriages are perfectly binding, of course, and they never really got validly divorced after the second one. So 2.50 times in the real world, (whichever real world such cuckoo happenings in MM house are tolerated, BTW 😆) . In SR serial land, they are now married 1 time (since apparently merely signing a divorce paper means the couple is legally divorced in SR land! So 1.50 marriages before the divorce 🤢 and 1 after!)

Complicated ho gaya, nai? 😉

Shekar and Lakshya are peas in a pod. No wonder he approved of him initially for his laado. And no wonder Ragini fell for Lakshya so bad--isn't it said, that any girl looks for traits of her father in her husband? I think that appealing trait in this case, was a rash impulsiveness unencumbered by judgement, a jelly like spine, weak knees, and a distinct lack of guts. 😆 😉

I very much fear, Pri, that we are in for a Ragini pregnancy track. She would be carrying Lakshya's baby...and we would get to see high drama about how Lakshya initially believes she is faking it, and then slowly starts building an attachment to his unborn chirag. Kavya will be fretting an fuming, and will ultimately align with Kavita and Kaveri, to wreak havoc on the Maheswaris. 🤢

Let's hope this never happens---but I do fear it will!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: amimus
At Last got the time to read this.. Absolutely marvelous. Oh how I wish this to happen in actual in SR but as we know it will not happen.
I so loved Sharmishta in this , gave it right back to Shekhar he so deserved it. Its time someone made him realise that Swara has suffered the most but she never gave up and has always fought back.

Hey Amina sweetie 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton yaar, so very happy to hear you loved this Drabble OS.

I don't expect this would happen in the serial, either. 😆

But I would dearly love to see SwaSan politely but very firmly telling Shekar that they love each other, and are lawfully married, so there is no reason whatsoever of keeping them apart.

And I would SO want to see Shomi standing very strongly in support of Swara and Sanskaar's happiness. She needs to show the mirror to Shekar, as to how selective he has been in discharging his paternal duties towards Swara.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

I loved this drabble. Very apt for the situation in the show. I wish it would play out this way but we know it won't. I do hope Swara and Sanskar will get their chance at happiness which they sorely deserve. Thank you for the PM and I do apologise for the late comment. Do keep writing...you always have happy stories 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: taniks
Wow ,wow, wow x 10000tyms👏👏 there's no way anybody reading this can not have hearty clap for this work. Mindblowing dialogues through out the story.that's it, I just wish I had the power to fire the CVS just for one episode and give u the job of writing to swara back to her husband, powerful emotions there, viji. Swaras pain was heart wrenching her longing to be with her love after fighting so many obstacles to their relationship only now to be blocked by ur own flesh and blood is nothing less than criminal.in her pain and sadness she is nvr without her soulmate , her pillar of strength and his love is so pure nothing like ego , pride,anger or fear taints it , he knows he needs to be with her that all DAT matters everything as no place in his heart when it comes to swara. That scene when he comes to baadi for swara was mindblowing,in two ways it brought abt a smile of sheer happiness to face off his wife and the contrasting shrieks from dadi and shekar , then da showdown of words from shomi , omg if I could I would hug u for this scenario I would , strong , firm shomi fighting for her daughters happiness in da face off a selfish, egoistic father , that was magnificent. Viji I loved that u write like he feared losing shomi ,more thanfreely wanting to give swara her happiness cos to me in da serial is just shomis husband NVR acted as swaras father he only pulls out the father card when he wants stand his ground or disowe her, he is was and seem to continue to in the role of a dead beat father to swara. I loved da part of swara holding her mangalsutra and remembering sanskaar , their symbol of their love , bond and commitment to each other. Beautiful scene and so apt for newly wed bride deprived off the most special time with her husband.u do my heart good in ur portrayal of sanskaar so witty , wise , mature and responsible he is made only for swara ,he is Gods gift to her for having such useless father figures in her life. Thank you for giving swara the voice to stand up for her husband and his right over her against this overbearing ma beta combo.as I always complain that swara takes sanskaar for granted i loved that part a lot. I don't have to say it but another brilliant work from u , u really do set the bar high for itself and as yet u NVR fail to deliver.I applaud ur writing skills and imagination .great stuff viji

Hey Sabarshni... 🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much, dear. I always look forward to your comments because they are so very insightful and analytical. I always feel tremendously touched and humbled by your warm words. It really motivates me to write more, the very best I can.

I wanted to portray that pain and anguish in Swara's heart, when she is separated from her husband through no fault of theirs. They have both fought through so many tribulations, surmounted so many obstacles to be together, but now she has to endure all this yearning and pain. So happy that you liked this portrayal.

Of course Sanskaar, her soulmate, her love, her husband arrives at the baadi to take her back with him. As you said, he is such a calm, reassuring person, filled with a wry wit, and very mature and resolute in this commitments and actions. Truly, he and Swara are made for each other---they complete and complement each other so very well; they are literally two halves of a seamless whole.

I wanted to show Swara as well as Sanskaar being quite respectful, but firm with Shekar. They are lawfully man and wife, they love each other completely and irrevocably. What possible justification is there to keep them apart?

Likewise, I wanted to show Shomi being a very strong and determined mother. She needs to tell Shekar in no uncertain terms, that they cannot take away one daughter's happiness in a futile, misguided attempt to avenge the other daughter's pain. Swara or Sanskaar did not play any role, in what Lakshya did to Ragini, after all...

Thanks once again for your exceedingly warm words

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
I loved this drabble. Very apt for the situation in the show. I wish it would play out this way but we know it won't. I do hope Swara and Sanskar will get their chance at happiness which they sorely deserve. Thank you for the PM and I do apologise for the late comment. Do keep writing...you always have happy stories 😊

Thanks so very much, Sagarika. 🤗 🤗

Yeah, I do wish we would see this on the show, but I fear we won't---not for quite a long time, at least. Let's hope! 😉

You're absolutely welcome about the PM, and please don't say Sorry; that's a rule for all SwaSan pals. 😆 I always say there's nothing like a "late" comment; I just want my buddies to read when convenient and let me know what they thought.

I hope to keep writing on SwaSan. 😊

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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