SwaSan Drabble: 'Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnu' - Page 8

Originally posted by: _Esha_

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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome my friend.

You beautifully said the feelings of swasanians.

After knowing the news about shekhar's reaction towards sanskar I also felt the same.

How can Shekhar do like that. I know it is difficult for him

Ragini is shattered because of laksh and he was insulted.

But sanskar is innocent. He loves his love and he supported swara in thick and thin.

For laksh's mistake punish sanskar is really unfair.

After so many hurdles swasan reunited. After the wedding like any other they will also had dreams about their life .but it was ruined in seconds.

The decision of swara is right. The reply of sharmista was also nice.

But what will happen in the story, it is own the hands of Cv's.

Thanks for giving a positive hope for me.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: muktai

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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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Originally posted by: Sree8410

Viji 🤗

Loved it.. I wish for something similar in SR though I know in my heart it's not going to happen. This has lifted my spirits up again giving some strength to go through with this serial.

I'm happy to see Shomi taking a stand for Swasan. Trying to knock some sense into her ... Husband. God that... Well I'm not going to use words for him. How can that pathetic man punish Swasan for Ragini's misdeeds? Where was he when chose the wrong path? He is a pathetic excuse for a father when it comes to Swara. I have always wondered what did Shomi actually see in this one to fall in love with him.

Laksh what he has done is not right and I'm not supporting him. But I feel Ragini deserves what she got. Has he not taken their relationship forward I would have supported him whole heartedly, but not here. Some one needs to show these two the difference between right and wrong. Their actions always ends up at the cost of other's happiness.

Love

Sree

Originally posted by: rithika2015

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hi vijji

that was a superb drabble.. loved it..

i just loved this swara of yours. i hope it was the same in the show but cv's can never give us.

i loved the way u described her feelings at that moment. she was married to the love of her life and the soulmate after so many hurdles yet her share of happiness was still far away from her because of someone else's sins.

i just loved the way u described her imaginations and the cute and short romance between swara and sanskaar in the mandap. the tieing of mangalsutra around a girl's neck is the most important and unforgettable moment in any girls life and the cute romantic gesture of our sunny boy was like cherry on the top.😉😳

i just loved that swara tried to explain her point to her father rather than keeping mum and bowing down for his stupid decisions. she chose to stand for her love and for her husband just like her hubby who always stands by her. sangat ka asar i feel.

sanskaar as usual cared for his wifey and came to check upon her. i just loved the way he shot back to mr.brainless egoist who can never be rational when it comes to his daughters. sanskaar though knew swara's love for her father still he made his point clear and claimed his right on his wife.and to his surprise even she was with him.

i loved the way shomi made her points calmly yet sternly that even made Mr. Brainless to think for a moment and act little wisely. for dadi no comments. she can never think beyond her ladoo and will never try to go beyond that too..

i just loved the way swara calmly left with sanskaar to the place where she rightly belongs to even when her father was not willing to send her as she knew that he was wrong this time. im finally happy that swara is realistic who can think and differentiate between right and wrong unlike the show one who can give up on her hubby for anything and everything and be with her undeserving baba and sissy for ever.

finally the mantras u added in the drabble made me get goosebumps when i was reading the whole drabble in a flow.. these mantras which are the soul of the marriage will really have a great effect on the couple who are binded by it. though i have no experience of it till now i have seen many of my friends change for better after they get married and i guess swara madam too had that effect on her.

i can understand that u have tried to vent out ur anger on shekar with the help of this drabble and believe me i used to do the same and do it till now and that is why in my ss swara will reject to forgive her father after the truth is out..

waiting for ur next work..

with love

rithu.

Originally posted by: piccola1

Beautiful and just SO RIGHT !

Viji, love you for this !🤗

Res till i get home

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb..
Shekhar's behaviour is unbearable..
Swara's inner turmoil well penned..
Sanskar answer back to Shekhar..nd swara supporting sanskar..is nice
Shekhar's reality check by Shomi..is great 😊

Originally posted by: khushi_shankar

Very very well written!

Originally posted by: soapbubble

Oh good! How cathartic is this drabble!!

In my heart there was a good tongue lashing still due to Shekhar and your Shamishta has provided that...

He's an absurd idiot - always ineffectual when needed and moronic when you most need sense out of him. 🤢😡