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Pearl

@pearl.16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very very interesting !!

Loved it !!

PM me please !!

Update soon...

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice os.

You beautifully portrayed the thoughts and emotions of sanskar.

Waiting for your next update

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soumi gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

I will update it by tomorrow...thnx for liking it...

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 9 years ago

Soumi it fair hey...another cliff hanger but loved the short start if the story...

Poor sanskaar seems like he just cannot catch a break..

Looking forward to the next part..

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

dear u always ive us in cliff hanger this is not good . niceos

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey soumi
awesome start
update soon n thanx sree for d pm

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow really nice start, i really want to see a Swasan centric track and definately not kavshi centric one. But i am glad to have writers like you to focus on Swasan instead of Mask and kavshi.

Loved it dear👏, Do continue soon. I rather want to know what happens next in your OS then tomorrow episode.

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Tapathi

@Tapathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Errr...! soumi...what is this u planed to spoil my sleep...now i wont get sleep to i want to knw swara"s expression after listing that sanskar didnt reached home...why you stoped there...😡 i will give my hair oil massage to you...😉coutinue soon...soon...soon...very soon...😊

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start 👏
Update soonish please

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KostinsQueen

@KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Soumi...tell me where is sanskaar ? I can't hold curiosity for much time...please do update soon...

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