|| Care & Cure|| A Swasan OS - Page 5

nice chapter Soumi.
a cliffhanger.
Waiting fro more.😃

thnk u so much fr ur lovely feedbacks guys...

soumi🤗🤗

nice update. continue soon dear😃

bus ek kami h ki RS k jaise last moment pr lakrstory end kr deti h

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font size="2">Hey Soumi...🤗 🤗

Great work, yaar. You have conveyed the sheer agony Sanskaar is feeling now...He feels so upset that Swara has a doubt he might still have feelings for Kavita. But its not that at all; as he thinks to himself, the fact is that he is so full of anger against Kavita for becoming this selfish, wicked person plotting to take the life of the person who means the most to Sanskaar!

Sanskaar has realized that what he used to feel for Kavita was an intense infatuation, a youthful fancy, nothing more. Not like the pure, devoted love he and Swara have for each other.

And Swara too, felt so concerned for her prince, when she realized he was not at Maheshwari House, and had not returned after leaving the baadi. She regretted that harsh words she had spoken to him, she hadn't really meant to hurt him at all, they had just slipped out in her insecurity and frustration. He means so much to her, just the thought of losing him makes her feel shaky and fearful.

Her sheer terror and pain, on finding the empty car next to the PCO, with Sanskaar's phone lying on the front seat, was very moving to read. I do hope it was Sanskaar who had grasped her shoulder then. These two soulmates need to understand each other and resolve all the small issues...

Thanks for the PM, waiting for the next part.

Love,

--Viji
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Viji thank u so much for a sweet analysis for my writings.its always good to have a reader like you who actually understands the flavour with that much clarity.

Originally posted by: manisha.8148

soumi🤗🤗

nice update. continue soon dear😃

bus ek kami h ki RS k jaise last moment pr lakrstory end kr deti h

Rs bolke insult mat kar.to phir swara k kandhe pe haat rakhne waalon ko patali devi bana dungi... 😆😆

wow dear..its awesome...&&& thanks for the pm

soumii
nice chapter...and thanx for pm...
update the second part soon dear
love
simi

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Soumi 🤗
Amazing re. 👏
You beautifully described the pain and agony of Sanskar. His fear of losing Swara.. How much he was hurt by her words..
He felt his love for Swara is so pure and much strong and mature.. Kavita was a mere infatuation..
How badly he wanted to remove Kavita's name from his past..
Just superb!
In oyher hand Swara understood her mistake and foolishness..
She only wants Sanskar now.. When she couldn't find him in the car She get so much tensed and concerned..Nice ..
Really wanna read more..
Lots of love ❤️