|| Care & Cure|| A Swasan OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello guys...i am soumi...I am here again to do all of ur bheja fry by my extra ordinary writings 😆 guys prev week and present week will may be full of kavshi torture and rarely we will see some swasan scenes...so here is my imaginary story of what will happen aftr swara snapped at sanskar at temple.. i will promise that this will be emotional, romantic and hillirious too. though its a OS... i will upload it in single single parts...as i am using a phone.Pms will sent by My dear sree... do read and share ur view herr i go...

Care & Cure

Sanskar is driving his car holding a bottle of vodka in his hand...peaked up in high speed he is crying, sad and heartbroken thinking about the ongoing events in his life.From the very day of Kavita leaving all this mess hs started.He used to be very happy with his life before that.May be swara is nt in love with him that time but they were happy...and nthing like this happened then why now????He loves swara madly...more than his life and he knows and swara feels the same for him too. But her repeatative attempts of querying whether he is able to forget kavita or not???From that day when he confessed his feelings for her till now his love for swara only develops.He really loves her and her only with every fiber of his being...swara got strangled in jungle that day and yesterday he got a doll with swara's face which head was broken...He is literally shaken and terrified with these.All the time the fear of loosing swara haunts him everywhere...But swara!!!!she cant see his panic and concern for her all she can see in him taking kavita's name...
Infact today morning at temple also she questions him the same.He was so surr about Kavita's presence at that temple.He seen her.He cant be this much wrong.But no use, because he dnt have evidence swara is nt believing him.What can be more worse than this???All this thoughts just jammed his mind and out of frustration he stopped his car with a jerk!!!!!!
He is standing outside of badi...yes!!!accidently he reached at badi but he has no intention to come to badi as he is very much upset with swara's accusation but how he ended up here is beyond his explanations.
He came out from his car and entered at badi's corridor to the main door of swara's house.He come to the wide spaced corridor where he can see maasi is talking over phone to someone and dadi is reading a geeta... he thought in his mind "are wah is dadi abhi apne khatu shyam ji ko yaad kar rahi he...great"...he thought once to cross the doorstep and talk to swara.
But he stopped there and gave a quick look to ownself...He is drunk and nt able to stand properly and its swara's house means his in-law's house and moreover that shomi is unwell these days.These random thoughts make him withdraw his deceision and he comes out from bari.
He sits on the bonet of the car and drinks from the bottle.He is looking at the window of swara's room, its open but swara dnt comes once till now.its been near about one hour he is sitting there. Its almost 11 at night and his mobile rings...he sees an incoming call from home..its his mom for sure as he dont even have his dinner till.But he is in no mood to go back or talk.He cuts the call and switched off his mobile.

AT BADI
Swara is giving medicines to her mom...but in a absence mind.she is holding a capsule in her hand but its nt the medicine which is to be given to Shomi at night.Shekhar noticed his daughter's mind turmoil and says in soft voice , "shona yewaali dawai nahi deni he misti ko...kya baat he???tum to aisi ghalti nahi karti"... swara suddenly comes out from her deep thoughts and fumbled..She ignores Shekhar's question and takes out the proper medicine from box.
Shomi takes the medicine and heading for sleep.Shekhar wish them a goodnight and ask shomi is signs to know what happened to swara???shomi nodded a yes and he leaves.
Swara is preparing her side and ask shomi to lay down.
Shomi holds her hand and asks "ki hyeche shona??? why you are looking so tensed and lost"??? she is stunned by this question of shomi...as she is never ever able to say a lie to her mom. Byt she pretends like nothing happened to her...Shomi is about investigate her more swara's mobile rings...Swara in her mind thought it was sanskar.She picked the call and says, "sanskar bohot raat ho gayi he...i'm very tired...abhi baat karne ka man nahi he".she is just about to cut the call uttara shouts from other end, "bhabi bhai apke sath nahi he??voh abhitak ghar nahi lote he"..she cried.
TO BE CONTINUED...

INDEX
Part 2 at Page 5

Part 3 at Page 11

Part 4 at Page 17
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey soumii... Nice not very Goood awesome OS...

Sanskaar drunk state... Swara in turmoil... Dadi... Remembering Thakur shaam ...

Leaving us in cliffhanger... 😡 ...not nice...


... Kamila...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Soumi it's very interesting
Please continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sampriti.

Soumi it's very interesting

Please continue soon😳


special thnx to u re pubi.
Edited by soumi93 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey soumii... Nice not very Goood awesome OS...

Sanskaar drunk state... Swara in turmoil... Dadi... Remembering Thakur shaam ...

Leaving us in cliffhanger... 😡 ...not nice...


... Kamila...



Intezar ka fal mitha hota hein kamila... thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting strt.
why u stop thr??cntu soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

interesting strt.

why u stop thr??cntu soon.



I will resume soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow soumi
I always look forward to your work it always interesting and grabs my attention
Continue please ...

❤️

Zainab
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Soumi waiting for the remaining part dear. Update karna soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

Wow soumi
I always look forward to your work it always interesting and grabs my attention
Continue please ...

❤️

Zainab


Thnk u so much... i forget to pm u about my ff.did u read that or else i'll pm u tomorrow.

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