Calypso : SwaSan (Complete) - Page 12

Originally posted by: simsen23

sakura... 🤗
Calypso back again..this time with Honour..
Omg so many secrets ...He was his own father by blood but not by heart
and She was his mother by heart but not by blood..
#respect for annapurna...and how pathetic it must be for her to betray her soul son.
Durga Prashad was a snail as you said...
and sanskar ,thats why so much pain was their in his heart.
realy buddy you always maintain the charm in the story.
well next one #Love ...it must be on my casper and sk...
I am totaly excited for that...plz dear update soon...
love,
simi 😊

Originally posted by: Sanya17

hats off to u d way u shwd their thoughts its mindblowing hw u always manage to write so perfectly

i hate durgaprasad he hated sanskar ever since he was brn he hates ap fr bringing him he wantd to destroy bth of them their relation this prt was heart wrenching i felt so bd fr sanskar i am nt being able to see d victory of a evil like dp he alwys wntd to brk d bond of sanskar n ap i nvr wntd dp to knw dat ap hd chose sanskar in d end bcz he might kill ap if he gt to knw dat bt aftr rdng dis prt i think he need to knw dis he need to feel d sm betrayal he hd md sanskar go through he nd to feel his defeat cmpltly
i wish we gt a prt where dp will gt to knw dat ap chose sanskar in d end, d end victory of sanskar will remain incomplete without durgaprasads cmplt defeat n we being unable to feel his defeat cmpltly
plz plz plz write a prt on dis if possible it will be a true pleasure fr us if we gt to see durgaprasad losing cmpltly
one prt pleezzz 😊 i lv dis story a lot i wnt to see him defeated

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Haha yeah. Like the bird of fire ;) Or you know the one in my ss :)

Originally posted by: 7APK

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Mind Blowing Update
Loved It
</font><font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thanks for the PM</font></font>
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Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Superb update!!

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sakura, you are embarrassing me☺️I am the one eager to read your stories - and you want to know my thoughts☺️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Saku...I will un res my spot for a comprehensive comment tomorrow morning. But I just wanted to say: I was so tremendously moved by the snippet of the Annapurna ---Sanskaar interaction. 👏👏👏

SO VERY powerful my dear...the update itself had amazing insights into the psyche of all 3: Durga Prasad, Annapurna and Sanskaar. I found the psychological profiles you'd assiduously built, so very fascinating, for all 3. And like I said, that mother--son snippet you showed, just stole my heart. Awesome. I adored it.

More tomorrow in my detailed revert.

Love,

Viji

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

He he...I was referring to him only...the mysterious dude playing the violin hauntingly behind a closed door at the end of a deserted corridor...but who wanders around the home through a secret passage at night.😉Very very phantom of the opera-ishly tantalizing.😉

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice...

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update Sakura

I loved the way in this story you described Sanskar's relationship with Durga Prasad and Annapurna

Both are poles apart

I know I couldn't comment on your stories from a long time

Sorry was caught up with lots of issues but I will surely try to comment if not a long one just few words of appreciation

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon