DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- DELETED- AN- PAGE 1- PLS READ - Page 24

nice update thanku for pm i really love ur style of writing n i m eager for swasan track in story

RES - sneaked time from office work to read 😊

Shru. I'll reply to all three chapters in one go! Sorry couldn't reply to them before. You've been too fast this weekend😆. So here goes Chapter 2-
Ragini having the Veena and Swara with the Sitar was a good change. The fact that Swara is equally talented if not more, was something I wanted to see. It appeared as if she's playing through her heart. Being a music lover, I can say that the best notes escape the mouths when sung by heart.When you are totally lost into the divinity of music, that is when you dislay all the elation of your heart and the song becomes so pure and mesmerizing by the same. This is what I felt by reading Swara's performance as I could imagine the same and her notes and music was so beautiful and pleasing to the years that even Sanskaar seemed affected. That was my most favourite part.

I knew it! Lakshya fill definitely find Swara more attractive and will fall for her. This had to happen. I'm sure Annapurna's always preference of Ragini over Swara will fall soon. And Shru, I don't know what is our lanning but please don't let Swara fall for Lakshya like she did in the show. That is just what I thought, now it's your wish! Anyways now coming to Sanskaar!

Durga Prasad is very horrible I tell you. He kept his own lad imprisoned for years and brutally lashed and whipped him day and night. He's Gadha Prasad!😡😡 Sanskaar is such a hero😳. He is so amazing. He was such a devotee towards his family and was such an able warrior. I'm so proud of him!😳
Loved Chapter 2! Commenting on the other 2 now!

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb update.. 👍🏼

Thank you Sneha:)

Originally posted by: KawalArora

nice update thanku for pm i really love ur style of writing n i m eager for swasan track in story

Thanks Kawal, the SwaSan track will be quite soon. Just have to deal with the next bit about their history before it starts as a plot around them:)

Amazing woow..no words..sry for late comments...but yaar no words...plzz update soon...aww sanskar aldready has feelings for swara..but not recognising.. And swara has doubts about sanskar..and the way you showed between janki and shomi amazing..draupadi and subadhra.. What an analogy awesome..and poor kavitha was betrayed by laksh.. Is it really laksh or any other plzz update soon..loved it

Now with Chapter 3-

Woww!! This chapter revealed so much! Sanskaar was never wrong! He'd been brutally and inhumanly punished for the sin he never committed. And I think even Lakshya isn't a traitor. I don't know why, maybe I'm wrong but I feel that even Lakshya din't betray him, it's someone else. That is to wait and watch! Kavita and Sanskaar interaction was more like adolescent lovers you know. I hope I'm not taking it wrong. Like a teenage infatuation. This Kaveri seems to be the main villain.
Will be waiting for SwaSan love story to start!😳

Coming to the present! I didn't get why is Sanskaar acting like mad here? Is it for coming in the Maheshwari Palace from the inhuman prison he was in? He has suffered too much for the mistakes him never did. I feel so bad for him. *praying that Swara falls for Sanskaar* To right something so brutal really requires that imagination. Shru, you wrote it so well. Sanskaar's pain goes straight through the heart, thus showing how brutally yet beautifully you wrote it. Fab job!👏

Lakshya is too immature just like the show. He doesn't realise the difference between love and attraction. Ragini's jealouy was obvious. And she ain't wrong here. Her fiance giving a flower to her sister would be such a painful stab! Lakshya is soo stupid!

That fountain incident was unexpected! Lakshya is soo chhichhora! Eyeing to be saaliji like that. As if his eyes are gonna pop out!😡 My jaan, do wrap up Swa----Lak soon ok?? I trust you! Love ya🤗

Here goes Chapter 4-

I knew it! Lakshya was totally and absolutely immature just like any teenage guy who takes haste decision without thinking about anyone else. That's what he's doing. He fell in love with Swara in just a day or two and wants to marry her now!😡 Idiot!

I loved the relationship between Janki and Sharmishtha! No negativity. And Janki seems really a beautifully lady at heart who's quite understanding and mature. She loves Swara and Ragini eqully and has no typically soutans wali problem with Shomi. This positivity is something that I wanted.

Ragini's gonna go evil I'm sure. Poor girl. I do feel bad for her bcuz she has had much wrong but she hasn't done any. Similarly Swara, who's being forced to marry to keep the honour of the her parents.

Sanskaar inside feels pity for Swara but still wants this havoc for hsi revenge and is thsu making himself steel. Will be waiting for SwaSan confrontation regarding this!

I know the reply is short, but I gotta go and I'm really sory for the delay in reply!

I have woken to some lovely replies and will be responding as soon as I can but please bear with me whilst at work:). Thank you all so much, so grateful! X

awesome update