DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- DELETED- AN- PAGE 1- PLS READ - Page 10

Originally posted by: _akaur_

SwaSan's first meeting, even if not face to face but with some distance...

Lakshya is getting married to Ragini...

Shekar has twovives, Shomi and Jhanki, both alive..

Liked how you have shown that Swara is closer to Jhanki and Ragini to Shomi... And also Lakshya to Sujata and Sanskaar to Annupurna..

Ragini is irritated by Swara even here.. :(

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Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: simsen23

Shruti
chapter ~1 is very interesting.. 😊
you have involved both janki and sharmistha..
Annapurna's character is well defined
i love the way you have described the first meeting of swasan...
Waiting for the next one
love
simi 😊

Originally posted by: KawalArora

chap 1 is brilliant. i liked it specially the way u introduced the characters n wat connection u showed between swasan in first meeting it was awesum. superb part n as always loved ur writing

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

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Finally read the latest update! I was so eager to read it since yesterday and the wait was unnerving but SO worth it!

Wow Shru this chapter! 👏👏 I have no words at all, everything is so perfect. And your imagery girl, its fabulous.👏 And so we have the entry of the Gadodias. First of, I love AP's character, she seems very perceptive. She's truly Sanskaar's soul mother. And her presence is so strong that she just owns the scene if she's in it. She's a pleasure to read.👏 And Ugh Sujata is the same. 🥱😆 Now coming to the Gadodias, cant say much about Shekhar but yes I loved how you brought out the characters of his wives and the difference between Shomi and Jhanki. 👏 And I liked Ragini's description too, it perfectly fit the setting. So Ragini already has some resentment towards Swara? Hmm..She showed signs of irritation..could it be that she already dislikes her sister? Does it have something to do with their mothers? God I'm so intrigued :OO

And Swara! Haha I loved how you described her, it's just SO Swara 😆. Complete contrast to Sanskaar, isn't she? 😉 At least for now she is. And you've shown that in the scene too. Loved how you showed her exuberance. 👏👏 And also, was my guess right then? Sanskaar isn't insane, that was all an act? :O I loved his parts, they were short but it was so good to read and know more about this Knight of ours. 😳

And now for my favorite part, SwaSan's cosmic connection. Wow I just loved this scene, we're in for a great ride. Keep giving us more scenes like this Shru. ❤️

Now I could see this whole scene play out before my eyes and I LOVED what I saw. For some reason I kept seeing Jodhaa Bai's Amer fort palace from the movie Jodhaa Akbar when I read this scene, maybe because of the Rajputi connection? They way you've described it is just as surreal and regal. ⭐️

As I've already told you 😆, I LOVE anything related to history and all this just exudes a different aura which is so strong and enchanted and I''m so thrilled by this FF I just can't stop gushing over this amazing backdrop you've chosen and the amazing description, you've seriously bewitched me with all this. 😲❤️

Eagerly waiting for the next update! Can't get enough of this gorgeous piece! 🤗

Lots of love,

Yukthi.

PS -

Okay I couldn't help myself from adding these 😆 This is what I was talking about.

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Lovely introductory start this part 1 dear Shruti...so it was mainly to bring the Gadodias to the Maheshwaris...I like the way you have drawn a character sketch of each one of them...Sujata will be Sujata lol!!! Also the stark difference between both Swara and Ragini...wow so we have Janki alive in this one...she seems really nice in this in fact more than Sharmistha I feel

Sanskaar is celled up in his own house too?? He seems mentally okay by his thought processes but burning in some sort of revenge plan sply against his own brother!! Laksh apparently is going to fall head over heels with Swara right so will this sanskaar create a DEMON of an already serious Ragini???

Can't wait to see where this will go!

Thanks for the pm dear...love Tas

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Hey Shruti

The story is just awesome as soon as I got a pm of prologue I was very eager to read but then the net in my campus went haywire and rest is a history

So then I had to wait till I reached home and no electricity...means no wifi and then I had to wait more and finally I am commenting

The story is just magical I have a special liking for historic stories...the sets...the glamour... the dressing styles... the language makes it more dramatic...

Sanskar was in prison and was tortured and Annapurna took almost 2 years to free him...

Part 1:

I liked the entry of Gadodiyas

So Janki and Sharmista are both there in the story

Janki I find her kind and her bond with Swara will also be I believe more strong then that with Ragini

Ragini is the typical good girl the haanji haanji types but who are angels from their looks are a sure demon from inside

I have a feeling that she has some negatively for Swara from her behavior

Sujata can never change and she is more close to Lakshya is interesting... So when Lakshya will be hurt by Sanskar it will be worth seeing her plight

Sharmista I don't quite understand her character...but I believe with the story proceeding it will be clear

Please don't make Swara the weak types please that people can throw shit at her...please make her strong

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon