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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Awesome update.

Really loved the conversation between sanlak.

Waiting for your next update

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

wen will dey meet ??
m waiting for deir meet ..
Laskh awww poor guy , still cudnt admit his feelings huh egoistic..
Thnkww for pm.

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana
wen will dey meet ??
m waiting for deir meet ..
Laskh awww poor guy , still cudnt admit his feelings huh egoistic..
Thnkww for pm.

They'll meet of course but you see...when ..

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alisha17

@alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Superb update

Can't wait to see what swara says about ragini

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950660

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

loved it !!
waiting for next part :)
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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Hello Fellows!!!!!
Today not in a mood to give the thank you speech so just continuing it...
Chapter 7..
ReCaP: Ragini n Laksh missing each other. ..Sanskar explained Laksh his mistake. ..Laksh denying his love towards Ragini. ..

Now

They are missing each other. ..Ragini knows that..she knows that she is missing Laksh. .but mr Laksh Maheshwari is as always denying it...yes, it is natural... if you always felt that you hate someone, although it was always a love which you thought is hatred, you never can admit that you are missing him, you are crying for that person you always hated..you think him a traitor who ruined your life, separated you from your first love... you just will hate him..
But first love is not always the true love..n love happens once...if you literally loved someone then you ll never be able to love anyone else. .this is the case of Ragini...but Laksh has a different situation.. his life sucks...his first love, which he called as, was actually an infatuation. .he was in love with the feeling of being in love. .he, may be, loved Ragini more than Swara but he said Ragini wasn't his types. ..he was attracted to Swara bcuz she was jz like the girls he always used to roam with..he kissed, he shared bed with...Swara was modern n yet she was nice..a kind of girl anyone would want as a girlfriend..she is much more mature now n of course that's why a good wife..but of SANSKAR..n Ragini...she was boring.. a sweetheart but yet she was not to be fun around...she could be a good daughter-in-law.. a good sister-in-law ..a good wife for anyone but a good wife for lucky..naah!! The answer was an absolute no...she was sanskari... he could not ask her to go to a date with him..she was a *namastey types* n lucky...oh ..he was a kissing greeting types...they were poles apart...how come in this world he could accept a girl like her...she was a good friend..his best friend..a very good human..who cared for his mad brother without asking anything in return... but not suited for lucky. ..
He thought Swara turned that jerk, lucky to a responsible Laksh Maheshwari but is it actually truth? May be no n may be yes...Swara was the one he wanted badly..at any cost.. he can't deny that he loved Swara but that love was jz a friendship..may be more than friendship but not love...he felt so good with Ragini ...it was a pleasure to him whenever Ragini helped him...he had fallen for that girl..yes he had...but this Ragini.. who went beyond every damn limit to get him is not the one he loved...she was someone else.. one who seeks revenge.. who want to force a relationship on him...

In these thoughts, somehow, he falls asleep. .there Ragini also falls asleep...
Laksh is dreaming about Ragini...he is running after Ragini..Ragini is laughing
Laksh: "Ragini wahin ruko..dekho ruk jaao" Ragini: "nahi Laksh, hum nahi rukenge"
Laksh: "Ragini dekho woh meri bohot important file hai"
Ragini: "toh sambhal kar rakhna chahiye thi na.."
the file was actually of divorce papers...he didn't want her to read it..
Laksh:"achha baba sorry..aage se sambhal kar rakhoonga.. plz dedo. .
Ragini: toh aayiye...le lijiye..
She is running still...Laksh finally reaches her...he takes a hold on her...then pulls her close to himself... he can feel her rising heart beats..
Laksh: mere paas aate hi dhadkanein itni badh gyi..
Ragini: Laksh chhod dijiye na...plz...maa aa jaayengi..
Laksh: toh aa jaane do...main darta thodi hoon..
Ragini: par hum darte hai Laksh..
Laksh: mujhse masti kar rhi thi na tum...ek kaam karo kiss me..
Ragini: laksh aap kuchh bhi bole jaa rahe hain..hum aapko kiss...no!!
Laksh: achha!! Kiss nhi toh kam se kam. .
He points to the bed...
Ragini: chhi Laksh!!! Aap ladko ko aur kuchh soojta nhi hai kya? Hum aapke saath aisa kuchh nhi krne waale. ..Laksh: achha toh main kar deta hoon...
He brings his lips closer to hers..
Ragini: papa ji woh hum bas...
Laksh immediately stopped...he is shocked n embarrassed...
Laksh: papa woh bas ...Ragini ki aankhon.mein...
He looks at the door n no one is there..Ragini pushes him n starts laughing. ..
Laksh: you!!!
She suddenly kisses his cheek leaving him in surprise.. a genuine smile comes on his face...
Suddenly everything turns dark(it was a dream) ...he can see only Ragini ..
Ragini is smiling...n she starts waving her hand n steps backwards...
He tries to stop her...but she goes n slowly n slowly disappears...

He wakes up.
Laksh: Ragini!!!!
He starts sweating...

Ragini is having the same dream as she always has...
Laksh speaking out her sweet sour words ..
"U don't deserve anyone's love Ragini, ""I hate u""I love Swara" "you are my best friend Ragini" ...suddenly the voice changes...n a blur image comes..."tum ya woh?"
She wakes..
Ragini: woh!!
She is also sweating. ..

Somehow the night passes...

Next morning. .
MM
Shekhar: humein chalna chahiye durga prasad ji...
DP: Sanskar aapko chhod dega...jaao Sanskar...
Dadi maa: na na...durga prasad ji..hum chale jaavenge. ..
DP: nhi nhi kaaki sa...
Sanskar: haan dadi, baba...aap log chaliye mere saath...
Swara, shekhar, shomi, dadi maa n Sanskar head towards baadi...
Swara is shocked...she doesn't know how will she react to the situation. ..today they will come to know that Ragini is dead...how will she be able to face them...
Sanskar: Swara are you fine..?
Swara: yes Sanskar. .
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They reach baadi..
Dadi maa: laado! Laado!
Dada ji comes: woh yahaan na hai...
Sanskar: papa...woh aapke pass nhi hai? Woh tph yahin aayi thi...
Swara knows everything... she knows that she didn't come here not she'll come again later. .she has gone. ..forever. ..
Everyone get tensed...
Swara: baba...haan yaad aaya...kal mujhe Ragini ne phone kiya tha..
Shomi: kya!! Kya kahaa usne.?
Swara: maa she said k she needs time. ..she did so many evils so she wants to go..she needs some loneliness for a lil...toh woh kahin gayi hai..usne kahaa kuchh dino mein aa jaayegi...
Laksh was standing on the door listening it. .

PreCaP..
An unfold truth to come out...Everyone gets to know Ragini is dead...

I know horrible update..but m feeling drowsy. ..badly.. m half asleep...so sorry..for this bad n short update.

Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago

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@rbb1

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Neha love you, great upstate so he is dreaming of her that is good finally he is learning to over her or miss her. Poor Ragini she has such a nightmare it's not nice she if fighting this loneliness all by herself. Please post the enact part soon I can't wait to see Laksh's reaction when he finds out Ragini is dead

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Great update radz
Mr laksh as i say is dumb
Dreaming bout sme1 bt telling to sanskar no bhai i dn't love her. Tubelight kahinka
Zat comparison between swaragini was fab
Wa8ing 4 the death part to be revealed
Laksh is gonna go bonkers 4 a long time with guilt
Hpe this time he doesn't blame on ragini as if she deserved it
Fanx 4 pm sis n cntinue soon

Edited by awe10some - 9 years ago