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Hello friends. ..
This is my first short Story ...I hope u like it...
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Part 1
So the story starts 3 days after the night of RagLak romance. .actually happens what that...
No no
let's begin from the beginning
3 Days before
It is KavSan engagement...sanskar sings Manchala for his love, kavita thinks its for her but Swara n everyone including Ragini knows this is for swara...Ragini is really sorry for her sister's condition..
Ragini(thinks): Swara chahe hum tumse kitne bhi naaraz hai...tum humse kitni bhi ruthi ho par...hain toh hum behanein hi na...aur tum..tum toh woh ho jiske liye hum jaan dete the...aur tumhari hi jaan leneki humne koshish ki..kis mitti ki bani ho tum..badla lene ke baare mein..ek baar tak nhi socha...sharm aati hai hume khud par...
Sanskar sings: man chalaa manchala teri or..
Swara now can't resist herself..she runs to sanskar n hugs him..
Swara: sanskar I ..I love u..please ek baar kehdo that u love me..
Sanskar hugs her back: I love Swara(crying)
Oh!! Shit this was swara's dream..
Back to reality
Poor Swara...really really feeling bad for her...
She again, this time in reality, runs to sanskar but suddenly she stops her feet..wait, something happened ...kavita hugged sanskar. .
This time Swara...Swara was broken. ..she remembers her words to sanskar "main kya sochti hoon kavita kya sochti hai..duniya kya sochti hai isse koi farq nhi padta. ..tum kya sochte ho maayne yeh rakhta hai"...
She steps back ...
And in the crowd only one person can notice it...neither sanskar nor Laksh..the one is RAGINI. ..
Ragini can feel swara's pain...she also suffered..she knows how it feels when your love is being someone's in front of your eyes...
Tear drops from her eye..she touches it...she is shocked..
Ragini: kya humare yeh aansoon Swara ke liye hai?
Finally engagement is done..Swara is broken Sanskar is broken and shockingly Ragini is also broken...
At night..
Ragini was in her room...
She walks thinking what all happened today should have not happened.. suddenly her ankle twists n she falls..but a hand on her waist saves her at time. .this was Laksh..
Laksh: sambhal ke..
Ragini stands n starts to go but cannot again balance herself because of the pain..
Laksh picks her up in his arms.. she is just looking in his eyes thinking what is wrong with laksh. .he hated her so much n now he's someone else..
He makes her sit on the couch..
Laksh: dhyaan kahaan rehta hai tumhara..
He couches and holds n check ragini's ankle..
Ragini: Laksh yeh kya kr..
Laksh interrupts: shhh
He checks n twists her ankle.. she screams
Ragini: ouch..
Laksh: ab theek hai? Tumhe pata hai aise pair ki moch theek krna mujhe bachpan mein papa ne sikhaya that..aur pata hai..
Ragini: aap aisa kyon kr rhe hai Laksh..itni chinta kyon kar rahein hai aap humarai..aap toh humse nafrat..
Now laksh interrupts: pyaar..nafrat nahi pyaar karta hoon tumse main..meri wajah se tum meri Ragini se..Swara ki Ragini se..kuchh aur hi ban gyi...galti toh meri thi na toh tumhe main kaise sazaa de sakta hoon..
Ragini cannot not believe on her ears ..what she heard was that true? Does he really love her? Suddenly powers go..
Laksh: offo yeh lights..tum ruko main abhi aaya..
He goes..ragini is in a shock..what happened in last 1 minute ..was it real or her dream..
He comes back..in the dark Ragini is just able to hear is footsteps..
He lights a candle.. n then all n keep them in the room ...suddenly his hand burns..
Laksh: aa(a lil scream)
Ragini goes running to him..
Ragini: Laksh dhyaan se
She holds his hand..in the dim candle light they can see each others face..Laksh saw how beautiful she actually is..he admires her eyes..her lips..her cheeks..
He plants a kiss on her baby soft cheek..Ragini in surprise looks at him..
He gives her a naughty smile..he brings his lips closer to ragini's..but suddenly she screams .her saree catches fire .
Laksh immediately starts extinguishing it with his hand..then thanks to him fire extinguishes..
His hands are red now..
Ragini: Laksh aapki problem kya hai..aapko kuchh ho jaata toh..
Laksh: tumhe kuchh ho jaata toh.
Ragini looks at him with questioning eyes..
There is a cute eye lock between them..
He picks her in his arms and moves to the bed..he puts her on the bed..unbuttons his shirt..and finally kisses Ragini.. ragini's eyes get wide..he slowly falls on the bed..but Ragini gets up and goes to the window.. he smiles and goes to her...he wipes his hand slowly from her shoulder to her wrist..n then kisses her neck..
Ragini now starts feeling uncomfortable..
She moves away: abhi nahi Laksh...
Laksh: par Ragini tumhi humare rishte ko aage badhaana chahti thi..
Ragini: haan Laksh par iss samay jo ghar ke haalaat hai usmein..
Laksh(thinks): yeh haalaat tumhari wajah se hi toh hai Ragini..
Laksh: haan par Ragini hum abhi aage badh sakte hai..
Ragini: hum zaroor badh sakte hain par nahi badhenge Laksh..
Laksh: pakka?
Ragini: hmm..
He smiles and plants a kiss on her forehead..
Laksh: par kya tum meri ek baat maanogi?
Ragini: haan Laksh kahiye..
Laksh: tum phir wohi kapde pehna karo na jo pehle pehanti thi..mujhe biohot achhi lagti thi unn lehngo mein..
Ragini: ji..
3 Days later (present)
There is a pooja in their house tomorrow ..everyone has come except dadaji ..he is actually not well..
Scene
I. the kitchen
Ragini is making dinner for everyone when she hears some sounds..
This is kavita talking to a lady..that is her mother?!!!!!
What!!! Shocking right?
Kavita: maa humara plan kaam kr rha hai..sanskar mujhse shaadi krne wala hai..bas ek baar main iss ghar ki bahu ban jaaun..phir Ragini se bhi badtar haalaat kar doongi main inn sab se..5 saal pehle ka badla. .main inki properties lena chahti thi..
Kaveri: ek minute. ..tu toh sanskar se pyaar krti thi na..
Kavita: lagta hai aapko main us'se pyaar karoongi..Woh toh bas naatak tha..
Ragini covers her mouth in shock...
Kaveri: waah re!! Tu toh humse bhi tez nikli..
Kavita: maa aap kisike bhi saamne mat aana. .baar baar aapki bail nhi karwa paaungi main..ab jaao...
They both go on their way..suddenly kavita turns around the kitchen. .Ragini hides at right time..
Ragini: hume Swara..nhi Swara ko lagega hum use gumrah kar rahein hain...toh ab kya..Laksh..Laksh humari madad karenge..
She goes to the room..where Laksh is talking to ragini's photo. .
Laksh: badla toh lekar rahunga Ragini main tumse..tumne nark banaa diya hai meri life ko..meri family ke saath aisa sab krne ki tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui..ab tumhe tumhari hi nazro mein gira doonga..tum kisiko mooh dikhane ke qaabil nhi rahogi... kya karogi jab...
He stops when hi looks at the door..Ragini was standing listening everything. .tears were flowing continuously without a break from her eyes..
Laksh: Ragini Woh...
She runs from there..
Laksh: Ragini ruko please..
But she is continuously running.. she is about to fall from the stairs when Laksh balances her..he helps her to stand..he was holding her arm..
They both recall the time b4 their marriage when Laksh came to baadi. N was about to fall from the doorstep n Ragini holds him..
Ragini is looking in his eyes ..her own eyes were full of tears.. she rises her hand and loosens laksh's fingers' grip from her arm..Laksh looks at her hand..n then again into her eyes..
She runs downstairs crying. .Swara is also lost in sanskar thoughts..she looks at Ragini from the window of her room..
She comes out of her room
Swara in loud voice: Ragini tum kahaan jaa rhi ho aur ro kyon rahi ho..
Everyone hears Swara.. they come in the hall(both maheshwaris n gadodias)...
Shomi: shona kya hua?
Swara: maa Woh Ragini..
Sujata: ab ke kiya iss chhori ne..
Ragini was still..
Swara: maa yeh kahin jaa rahi hai..
Kavita is in her room..she didn't come because she isn't interested in the boring family drama..
Swara: Ragini bataao na kya hua..
Ragini: kuchh nhi Swara ..sochlo humein humare paapo ki sazaa mili hai..
She looks at Laksh..
Swara: par hua k..
She understands there's a problem between RagLak..
Swara: Laksh batao tumne kya kiya
Ragini: nhi Swara inhone kuchh nhi...
Laksh: oh plz ragini..stop all this non sense. .tumhare saath bilkul sahi kiya maine..tumhe realize toh karwana tha jo tum nahi jaanti...tumhe kya pata ki dil tootna hota kya..dhokha milta hai toh kaisa lgta hai..
Ragini: hum nahi jaante Laksh. ..bachpan se lekar aaj tak hume sirf dhokha hi toh mila hai..maa(jaanki) gayi toh kahaa gya ki Woh naanimaa se milne gyi hai..aa jaayengi..humne vishwaas kiya..par haan mil Woh gyi...(looks at shomi)..aapse humara rishta hua. Aapne mana kiya..phir chhat par aakar sorry maanga tab bhi humne vishwaas kiya .phir se aapne mana kr diya.. aur hume nhi pata dhoka kya hota hai..aapne humse phir sagai ki..phir tod'di..aur humein nhi pata dil tootna kya hota hai..aapne phir hume kaha k aapke bhai ka hum dhyaan rakhein..humne rakha...isliye nahi k hum mahaan the par isliye kyonki hume unme sachcha dost dikhta tha. .hum unhe maasoom samajhte the...humein pasand tga jab Woh hume Ragini dost kaha karte the..hume laga kisiko toh humari zarurat hai.par phir unhone humein humari behan ke khilaaf kar diya...aur aap kehtein hai hume nhi pata dhoka kya hota hai.. humein aakhir tak yeh umeed di gyi k aap humse pyaar krte hai par aap toh humse expect krte the k hum aap aur Swara ko milaayein aur humein nhi pta dil tootna kya hota hai.. hum bure ban gye .kyonki hum pehle dil se sochte the par aapne dil ke itne tukde kar diye k Woh hume chubhne lga..isliye humne deemag se faisle lene shuru kiye.. humne aap par vishwaas kiya aur aapne humaei jaan lene ki koshish ki..par humein aapse nafrat nhi hui..hum achhe ho gye the..par hume humari dadi maa ne nafrat ke jaal mein phirse dhakel diya. .
Dadimaa regrets.
Ragini: aur aap kehte hai hume nhi pata dhokha hone par kaisa lagta hai..aur abb phir aap par vishwaas kiya aur aapne phir tod diya.. aur hume nhi pata dil tootna kya hota hai. ..
She goes to Swara
RAGINI: Swara hume tumhe kuchh batana hai..(she tells kavita's truth to her..) aur hume maaf kr do Swara humari galtiyon ke liye..par ab rumhe apna pyar paana hoga .use bachaana hoga..
She is resisting her tears.they both look at each other
Slow music (suro se saji hai Swara
Raago se rachi hai Ragini)
But Swara immediately hugs her..both burst out in tears
(Swaragini swaragini swaragini swaragini)
She moves to the door .
Shomi: tu jaa kahaan rahi hai Ragini?
Ragini: maa baadi
Sanskar: tumhe main chhod'du Ragini..
Ragini: nahi sanskar hum chale jaayenge..
She goes.. but Swara follows her..
She goes to the same bridge where first Swara n then Laksh was fallen. .
Swara was quite far from her.
Ragini:(to herself) Swara humne tumhe yahaan se dhakka diya tha an humari baari..
She jumps
Swara: RAGINI!!!!!
Police searches for her but she is not being found.. she is declared dead..
But actually some banjaare finds her...
Ramdas(one of them):beta tumhara naam kya hai.?
Ragini: baba Ra..
She stops..thinking if she tells her identity her family will find her
Sushila (his wife): Ra? Aage
Ragini: ji Radha..
This was it..I know it is stupid.. but it is my first SS..
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