Dil Rota Hai-RagLak SS(chap up 26/11)

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Famishah

@Famishah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

poor ragini i just love her, people around her bring to evil and now all blames only her. thanks for writing this

Edited by Famishah - 9 years ago

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Nice update👏 You updated after a long time ..

Waiting for next part 😳

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Lubly..
FB was soo adorable..
Waitinng for Laksh Realisation...
Thnkww for pm.

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Hello friends!!! So I am glad to...okay okay...m not gonna give my pakaau bhashan today..happy?
So here we come to
CHAPTER 6
ReCaP...Ragini n Laksh met again but because of Ragini's veil he could not recognize her but yet felt her presence..they both remembered the good times spent together when they were best friends. ..

NOW

Laksh's room..
Laksh to himself: sab khatam kar diya tumne Ragini...sab kuchh...kitni achhi thi tum...woh tumhara maasoom chehra...tumhari nasheeli par bholi si aankhen...tumharitumhari bachchon jaisi muskaan(a smile comes on his face while remembering it)..tumhara mujhe muskura ke, aankhen neeche karke lakLaksh kehna..nhi pehle toh tum mujhe Laksh ji kehti thi..mera tumhare jab bhi kareeb aana toh tumhara peechhe chale jaana...woh thi meri Ragini...jis'se kisiko bhi pyaar ho jaaye...aur sach kahoon toh shayad mujhe bhi hone laga tha.. par sab kuchh mit gya Ragini...tum badal gayi...sirf mujhe paane ke liye tum itna badal gayi. ..
Tears fall off his cheeks..he touches them realizing that he is actually... seriously crying for Ragini..
Laksh bitterly giggles: yeh aansoo tumhare liye nahi hai Ragini..yeh toh meri best friend ke liye hai..meri Ragini ke liye..
Someone knocks at the door n he wipes his tears...
Laksh: bhaai tu..aa na..
Sanskar: lucky tu mujhse kyon chhipa raha hai? ..tu shayad bhool gya k jab tu bachpan mein rota tha toh sirf main hi pehchaanta tha. ..
Laksh hugs him n sobs..he wants to control his tears but unwillingly they start falling. .
Laksh: bhai us ladki ne mujhe dhoka diya hai..woh toh meri Ragini thi hi nhi..
Sanskar: woh teri hi Ragini hai lucky.. bas thoda kho gayi hai...meri wajah se...aur dhoka toh kismat ne use diya hai lucky. ..uski kismat shayad sach mein kharaab hai..bachpan se hi use pinjre mein band rehna pda..phir use tu mila...jisne uska dil baar baar toda
Laksh looks at Sanskar..
Sanskar: phir main..jisne us jaisi pyaari si ladki ko, meri Ragini dost..meri dupatte wali dost se ye banaa diya..
Laksh: par bhai main uske saath kaise reh skta hoon..nafrat krta hoon main us'se...tabhi toh maine uske saath us raat...
He stops. .realizing what he said..
Sanskar: bol lucky, lucky us raat kya hua tha..tell me...
Laksh: bhai woh...woh..maine uske saath apna rishta aage badhane ki koshish ki thi...
Sanskar: kya?!?!?..lucky ye tune...Laksh tune ye socha sachchayi jaan'ne k baad us par kya beetegi..ek ladki ke liye uski izzat, uski dignity sabse zyada important hoti hai. .
Laksh: bhai us raat kuchh hua nhi tha..
Sanskar: phir bhi lucky...Laksh tujhe pata hai jab main us'se mila tha tab mujhe pta chala k Woh dil se sochti hai..isliye maine uske dil ko apni dhaal banaya..aur tune us hi dil ko tod diya...PHIR SE!!
Tear falls from Laksh's eyes on the ground on listening "phir se" bcuz he knows that Sanskar is right..he broke her heart once again...he repeated it..as always he did he does again..
Sanskar: lucky ab main ek dost se nhi balki ek bade bhai ki tarah tujhse baat krunga...
Laksh looks at him..
Sanskar: good Laksh I was about to tell u to face me..tujhe pata hai Laksh... ek ladki bachpan se apni shaadi ke sapne sajati hai...uska pati kaisa hoga, kahaan hoga..phir uski shaadi ka samay aata hai ..par use pata chalta hai that her would be husband loves her sis...uska dil toot'ta hai..woh apne pyaar n apni behen ko ek krna chahti hai..par koi aakar uske dil mein nafrat bhar.deta hai..phir bhi uski shaadi ho jaati hai...pata hai Laksh koi bhi ladki apna sab kuchh chhodkar kisi anjaan ghar mein..anjaan logo ke beech mein aakar rehti hai...badle mein woh kya chahti hai...bas thoda sa pyaar..n I know u love her but just don't show...
Laksh: nhi bhai..I hate her...
Sanskar: haan Laksh...teri feelings ke baare mein mujhse zyada tujhe pata hoga..par khud se never hide anything... u can't.. .

Hall
Ragini is thinking what all happened few minutes ago..smiling n crying at the same time...smiling for seeing her Laksh so happy...crying bcuz Laksh is so happy without her..what a dilemma it is...she is here..in her house. .in between her family. ..her maa, papa, swara, Sanskar, maa(AP), papa ji and LAKSH. .under the same roof but can't even hug them..

Sushila (to DP): achha sahab hum chalte hain..
DP: ji..
Sushila: Radha beta chal...saundarya bhi chali gyi hai..bas hum reh gye..
DP to Ragini: tumne bohot achha gaaya beta..
Ragini smiles n goes toto DP...she touches his feet n a tear drops on his foot..
DP: beta tum ro rhi ho?
Sushila: Radha beta tu jaa main aayi..
Ragini goes..
Sushila to dp: ji ye anaath(orphan) hai..toh shayad isliye dil bhar aaya..
She goes bcuz she also can't resist herself from crying remembering her own daughter...

Flash back..
Sushila and ramdas were playing with their seven years old daughter...
Sushila: chhoti...chhoti..
Ramdas: use chhoti mat bula ye meri laadli hai..sirf main ise chhoti bulaaunga...
Sushila: achha ji..ye meri bhi beti hai..
They were arguing when a high speed car..comes n hits that seven years old pure soul...both her parents look at her..ramdas goes running and Sushila isn't understanding what's happening..
Ramdas picks her in his arms..her body, small soft hands..her forehead which he thought was her powerful destiny...everything was covered with blood..
They rush to the hospital...both are crying badly.. she isn't opening her eyes... her small baby soft lips were red with blood... in the way..in front of their eyes...in his hands..their daughter breathes last...it is indeed difficult for any parent to see their daughter dying before them..but fate is so selfish...it takes away every thing you need...it is really vulgar..
Flashback ends..

Laksh's room..
Sanskar leaves..Laksh is still thinking on the words Sanskar spoke..
Laksh: nhi bhai...kabhi nhi...us ladki ko main kabhi nhi..kabhi bhi nhi maaf kr skta cuz I hate her...I JUST HATE HER...

After some hours..Ragini n Laksh are sitting in the hut n room respectively..
They r remembering their very own moments spent together. .

Laksh remembers her talks..
"Laksh hum gir gye n u r laughing.. jaayiye hum aapse baat nhi krte.." "hume nhi pta Laksh k dil tootna kya hota hai? "

(Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake)

He wipes his tears..

(Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake)

Ragini's place
She remembers the time spent with him..their first handshake..

(Kitni chahat hai dil mein tu jaane na
Kaise dil ko samjhaaye dil maane na)

"Ragini tum kisi ke pyaar ke laayak hi nhi ho." "Agar tum duniya ki aakhiri ladki bhi ho'ogi na then also main tumhe uss tarah se nhi dekh paaunga" "u don't deserve anything" "I love you Swara"
Ragini shuts her ears..

(Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake)

Laksh again feels her..he knowa she is crying.. he is feeling it..he even never felt such connection with Swara. .his so-called first love..he goes to the window n feels ragini's presence in air..in the coldness of moon..

(Meri tammanaao ka ehsaas tum
Main kahin bhi rahun mere aas-paas tum
Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane..
Ek pal bhi tumse door jaa na sake)

He turns n sees Ragini's photo which is half burnt on the floor..
(Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake)

Ragini is badly missing Laksh..she looks outside...everyone is enjoying..but she can't..she just doesn't want to..

(Ajnabi silsila mere saath hai
Bheed mein tanhaai ka ehsaas hai
Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane..)

They remember the sweet sour time spent with each other before n after their marriage... when Laksh came drunk n revolved his coin filled hand around Ragini...when he pushed her too close to him...when he gave her the dupatta before their marriage...terrace scene...every damn thing..

(Yaadon ko teri hum mitaa na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake)

Whatever he says..he has to admit he felt nice when he was around her..he liked those night moments with Ragini.. .he enjoyed teasing her...he pained himself every time he broke ragini's heart..he regrets on breaking their engagement several times...he feels disgusting on himself for playing with Ragini's dignity..

(Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake)

PreCaP: Swara lying about Ragini...Ragini n family (now the banjaaras are her family) going out of west bengal...

That's it..

To be continued..
Hope u liked it.. n plz tell me what's PS? Many ppl write under their posts..

Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Neha PS means Post Script

nice emotional and brillant update, so he is denying himself saying that he hates her actually he loves her, how long is he going to be in denial. aww Ragini cried because DP blessed her, wonder when and how they will meant, i like how you made them sit in their room/hut and thought about each other and their moments. so Laksh can Feel her presense wow he is changing nice, Sanskar was good, cant wait to read what happens next

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: rbb1
Neha PS meansPost Script
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Thanx ray...u r so sweet..but when r U updating ur story?

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Awesome update 👏
Beautifully written
Thanks for pm

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

It was so emotional
Loved sanskar over here
Laksh is such a fool. He loves her bt is in denial mode. Loved raglak heart to heart connection
Wa8ing to see wat swara say to family bout ragini
Fanx 4 pm n cntinue soon

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@rbb1

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Thanx ray...u r so sweet..but when r U updating ur story?

not sure after watching the OLV i was not motivated to write i wrote something else i will post it now, its rubbish i know but i was so angry had to write it