Dil Rota Hai-RagLak SS(chap up 26/11)

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: rbb1
when are you going to update your story

Yup..!!!!
Jantaa jawab chahti hai..
Bcuz
This is my phone, this is my keypad, these are my fingers!!
So I can type n ask anything. .😆

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

we are waiting for the next update hurryyy post it

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Oh thank you for the appreciations...guys I don't wish to write. .I wish I just keep on reading ur ffs...seriously!!! Believe me...toh plz also update urs...

So here is the
Chapter 5..
ReCaP..
SwaSan act where sanskar proposed Swara n she accepted...kavita realized her being kabab mein haddi between SwaSan...DP and AP dance..n.at last Ragini aka Radha (who was in veil) singing meri wafaayein yaad karoge..whereas Laksh also started singing with her...

NOW
The hall was echoed by applause. .
Ragini who is looking at laksh with teary eyes and laksh who is still in pain get back in their senses...
Random man: durgaprasad ji aapka beta toh bohot achha gaata hai..
Random woman: ji..bilkul..kitna dard hai aapki aawaz mein Laksh..
Laksh wipes his tears avoiding everyone's vision..Ragini starts crying silently by seeing the condition of Laksh. ..
Laksh (thinks): dard???..kis liye..us ladki ke liye who always betrayed me...I hate her..I will never feel pain for that girl..
DP: beta..Laksh .Laksh??
Laksh comes back to his senses: ji...ji papa kahiye..
DP: tum.theek ho?
Laksh: ji papa...mujhe kya hona hai?
DP understands..but letting him on himself nods..

Here Ragini is crying n just looking at Laksh..meanwhile Sushila comes...
Sushila: Radha..
Suddenly her eyes fall on Ragini's tears..
Sushila: Radha..Radha tu ro rhi hai..
Ragini: nhi..nhi maa..hum kyon royenge..bas pehli baar itne logo ke saamne gaya toh laga k kuchh galat ho jaata toh..
This she says looking at Laksh thinking if he got to know that she is Ragini then...he would humiliate her in front of them..who stood for her...how would they be feeling if they got to know that their Radha is not Radha..she is Ragini..
Sushila: nhi re laado..bohot achha kiya tune..
Ragini: kya kaha aapne?
Sushila: achha kiya tune. ..
Ragini: nhi us'se pehle..
Sushila: Laado..kyon tujhe achha nahi laga?
Ragini hugs her n starts crying uncontrollably. .
Sushila: Radha..meri bachchi..kya hua?
Ragini breaks the hug wipes her tears:nhi.maa kuchh nhi..vaise aapne hum..mujhe..mujhe laado kyon bulaaya?
Sushila: nhi bas yahaan hai na ek aurat(woman) thi woh apni laado ka ziqra kr rhi thi so mujhe ye naam achha lga..
Ragini smiles. .
Sushila: Radha ab toh performance ho gyi..ab toh ye ghoonghat(veil) kholde..
Ragini: nhi maa..main aise hi theek hoon..
Sushila: achha..teri marzi ..
N she goes from there..

DP announces: aap log khaana khayiye na...
He says to the dance group also..
Ragini wants to go but now she has to stay...they all including maheshwaris n gadodias(how big names..) go towards the catering. ..
Sushila comes to Ragini: beta kuchh kha le..bhook lgi hogi..
Ragini: nhi maa..bas thoda sar dard hai..isliye abhi kuchh nhi..
Sushila: hey bhagwan sar dard...bohot zyada hai? Waapas chalein?
Ragini: nhi maa aap log khaiye..
Sushila: par beta .
Ragini: maa..
Sushila: achha theek hai..
Ragini smiles. .she goes and stands near the stairs...she is facing the side where both her families are standing..meanwhile from upstairs a servant calls Laksh to ask about something..
Laksh sees him and is going there..
His hand touches Ragini's hand by mistake..

(Moh moh ke dhaage. .moh moh ke dhaage)

N Laksh's watch gets stuck with Ragini's bangles...for a minute they look at it..

(Yeh moh moh ke dhaage teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe)

Laksh is moving fast n suddenly applies break to his speed so Ragini is pulled towards him n her head hits his chest

(Yeh moh moh ke dhaage teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe)

..she immediately turns around..

(Koi toh toh na laage kis tarah girha ye suljhe)

Laksh: m sorry.!!my mistake...
Ragini is about to say but stops remembering that she is no.more

(Hai rom rom ik taara jo baadlo mein se guzre)

Ragini n now she is Radha..she just nods her head in okay..

Laksh pulls her hand towards him

(Yeh moh moh ke dhaage teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe)

..n tries to free his watch from her bangles.. but he fails..
Ragini was just looking in his eyes..

(Tu hoga zara paagal tune mujhko hai chuna
Tu hoga zara paagal tune mujhko hai chuna)

he is trying to but again..so Ragini holds his hand and keeps them aside..

Take this line from Laksh's side..
(Kaise tune unkaha tune unkaha sab suna
Tu hoga zara paagal tune mujhko hai chuna)

Laksh remembers when Ragini was going from their and Laksh held her arms n she freed them..n when he was about to intimate with her..
(Tu din sa hai..
Main raat aana dono
Mil jaayein shaamo ki tarah
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage kis tarah girha ye suljhe )
He sees her freeing it..n waiting for it to be done soon..

Ragini: aah..
Laksh: kya hua?what happ?
He sees blood flowing of her wrist.. she cut her hand while freeing it..
Laksh: offo..yeh kya kiya aapne..aap mere saath chaliye..
Laksh holds her wrist and takes her to their room..
Ragini sees that room n all the good-bad flashes come in front of her eyes. .
Laksh comes with a first aid kit..
He takes out an ointment..n starts applying it on her hand..

Laksh: tumhara bhi kahin dhyaan hi nhi rehta..lag gyi na chot rag..
He stops in between sensing what did he say..
Ragini looks into his eyes..both all again remember the time before their wedding..

Flashback..when they were best friends..
Laksh comes to meet her in baadi and calls her outside..at may be 8 o'clock at night..
Laksh (on phone): Ragini mujhe tumse milna hai..abhi..
Ragini: nhi.Laksh abhi nhi..bohot raat ho gyi hai..
Laksh: Ragini main tumhare ghar ke baahar wait kr rha hoon..jaldijaldi..
Ragini: aap bahar hai Laksh?
Laksh: haan..jaldi aao..mujhe thand bhi lg rhi.hai..jaldi aao na..
Ragini: par Laksh..
Laksh: okay fine...mat aao..aur haan aage se mujhse baat krne ki zarurat nhi hai..
Ragini: nhi nhi.Laksh..hum aa rhe hain..aap wahin rukiye .
Laksh: jaldi aao..

Ragini comes outside.. she searches for Laksh but he isn't there..
Ragini: matlab laksh humse mazaak kr rhe the..
She turns to go back but someone suddenly jumps in front of her and she screams but he shuts her mouth n pins her at corner..
Ragini: Laksh?
Laksh: kaisa lga surprise?
Ragini: surprise... yeh shock tha Laksh..aise koi daraata hai kya bhala..
Laksh comes more close to her and closes her mouth..
Laksh: tum dheere nhi bol skti?
Ragini: sorry..aur humse thoda door rahiye..kisine dekh liya toh kya sochenge..
Laksh: yehi ki do lovers raat mein. .
Ragini: kya??
Laksh giggles: joking... tum meri best friend ho yaar..
Ragini: haan hum sirf best friends hain..ab toh hum aapki mangetar(fiance) bhi nhi hai jo aap .
She stops realizing what she said .
Ragini: Laksh sorry woh..
Laksh: chhodo na Ragini..yeh lo..
He gave her a band..
Ragini: yeh kya hai Laksh?
Laksh: humari friendship ki nishaani..friendship band..
Ragini's eyes water..
Laksh: plz Ragini rona mat...us raat chhat par yaad hai na..tum roti rhi n I wasn't able to console u..
Ragini laughs..
Ragini: yeh kya likha hai is par laksh? Rag..RagLak...
Laksh: haan Ragini n Laksh..together RagLak...
She moves backward because now for her it is impossible to hide her broken heart. ..
Ragini: thank u la..
She loses her balance.. n falls down..Laksh laughs..
Ragini: Laksh hum gir gaye n u r laughing. ..uthaiye humein..
He picks her up..she is in an angry mode. .she starts to go but Laksh pulls her..
Laksh: achha baba sorry..
But she hisses..Laksh sees wounds on her hand..
Laksh: tumhara kahin dhyaan nhi rehta ..lag gyi na chot Ragini..
He takes out his hanky n tie it to her hand. .

Flashback overs...

Laksh finishes dressing her cut...
Laksh: lijiye...ho gya..
Ragini smiles n nods in thanks..
Laksh: aapki smile bilkul kisike jaisi hai..(he says with hatred in his eyes but yet feels her smile cute..)

She goes.. n Laksh is left with the memory he remembered jz some minutes ago..their friendship..

PreCaP: Laksh starts realizing his love for ragini..

This was it guys..i know it was short par pakka after exams i ll make longer updates...hope u liked it..

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Finally u updated
Loved z chap
The flashback was fab
Happy that ragini is being strong in frnt of laksh
Zat ladoo part was emotional
Wa8ing 4 laksh love realisation n wen will swara break the news of ragini nt being alive
God knows wat will be laksh reaction
Fanx 4 pm dr n cntinue with ur both works soon
Wa8ing eagerly 4 update

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: awe10some
Finally u updated
Loved z chap
The flashback was fab
Happy that ragini is being strong in frnt of laksh
Zat ladoo part was emotional
Wa8ing 4 laksh love realisation n wen will swara break the news of ragini nt being alive
God knows wat will be laksh reaction
Fanx 4 pm dr n cntinue with ur both works soon
Wa8ing eagerly 4 update

U always make me feel like a writer lollol 😆
Thanx

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chandra1998

@chandra1998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

This was indeed an emotional chapter!

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Aww nice update thank you it was beautifully written I like how he was helping Radha, he thought about Ragini so he is trying to hate Ragini but he cannot stop thinking about her

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

really nice update
flashback was fab
excited to read the precape finally he is going to realize his love
continue sooon
waiting...

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alisha17

@alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Beautiful n emotional update

Can't wait for Laksh to realise that he loves Ragini

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

U always make me feel like a writer lollol 😆
Thanx

Ur a writer radz, zat 2 a fab one
Its our duty as readers to appreciate wat u guys are writing 4 us
It takes a lot of time 4 u guys to fink of a plot, write n proofread
N yead kinda of a bribe 4 u to update soon ;-)

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