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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

literally amazing..
Lubd de dream sequence..
Laksh i jz pity dis guy..
Waiting for nxt updte..
Thnkw for pm.

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RamyaSK

@RamyaSK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

😊 I was very eagerly waiting for ur ff!😊 Awww! Its so cute😊

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Really nice update Neha...I love how this story is unfolding.

Please continue soon !! 😳😳

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AyeshaRocks

@AyeshaRocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

hiii. I read ur all parts in one go n I fell in love with ur writing. Do pm me for ur next update dear. Waiting...

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

When's the new updates coming? 😆

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Swara you didn't inform me about your update? 😲

Anyways, I loved the dream part between RagLak ..

The whole Update was awsome .. Please write soon ..

And a Long one 😉

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD
Swara you didn't inform me about your update?😲
Anyways, I loved the dream part between RagLak ..

The whole Update was awsome .. Please write soon ..

And a Long one😉

weren't u Swara?

I'll try to update soon..

Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove
weren't u Swara?

I'll try to update soon..

No No I was Ragini .. You forgot? 😆

Jokes apart , sorry typing mistake, meant to write Ragini 😳

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry!!!!
I know m really really late...but you see it was my cousin bro's wedding...n I was quite busy. .as it is first wedding in our family of our generation. .😉
So here is it.
Chapter-8

ReCaP: Laksh dreaming about Ragini...he is just missing her badly...Swara lying about Ragini. ..

Now

Laksh is standing on the door listening to Swara...everyone is busy talking about Ragini n doesn't notice him.
Laksh: aa jaayegi matlab? Swar, Ragini kahaan gayi hai?
Everyone turns to him..he comes to Swara..
Laksh: Swara where is Ragini? Kuchh toh bataaya hoga usne tumhe ..
Swara was quiet ..
Laksh shouts: Swara kuchh bolo..
Swara: Laksh, she didn't tell me. ..
Laksh: what the hell.!! Woh khudko samajhti kya hai..jhaansi ki raani hai ya phir james bond...use pata bhi hai duniya ka..kaun kya karde...n abb toh woh akeli hai..she is so stupid woh kisiki bhi baaton mein aa jaayegi...
Everyone is watching him with questions in their eyes...
Sanskar: nhi Laksh..usne ek baar yeh galti kar di..woh baar baar nhi dohraayegi...
Laksh looks at him with watery eyes sensing that he is talking about him..

Ragini's place

Ragini is sleeping. .
Sushila: Radha bitiya...jaldi uthhja..
Ragini: sone dijiye na maa..
Sushila: naa beta..jaldi baith. .jaana bhi toh hai..
Ragini: humein neend aa rhi hai. .samjhaayiye na inhe dadi m. .
She realizes what she was going to speak n stops...she slowly wakes up...
Ragini: maa time kya ho gaya?
Sushila: beta saade nau(9:30) ho gye..
Ragini: kya!! Main itni der tak kaise soti rhi? Maa utha toh deti..
Sushila: tu abhi bhi nhi uth rhi thi toh pehle kaise uth'ti..chal ab apna saamaan baandh le..
Ragini jokes: kyon maa? Mujhe abhi hi nikaal dengi aap?
Sushila: hath paagal ...woh hum waapas barsaana jaa rhe hai na isliye...
Ragini: hum kolkata xhhod rhe hain?
Sushila: mmm. .
N goes...
Ragini breaks into tears..
Ragini: abb toh hum apne poore pariwar se door jaa rhe hain...hamesha ke liye. ..

Baadi
Swara: ko..ko..koi baat nhi Laksh... woh aa jaayegi...tum chinta mat kro .
Laksh: main kyon chinta karunga ...use ko krna hai kare...
N he goes out the door. ..
Swara also runs in her room crying...

Swara to herself: tum kyon chali gyi Ragini? Tumhari Swara kaise jiyegi tumhare bina..I m missing u Ragini...
She falls touching the door with her back n cries..

(Suro se saji hai Swara)

Here ragini is also crying..

(Raago se rachi hai Ragini)

Both sisters are missing each other..

(SwaRagini SwaRagini
SwaRagini SwaRagini)

Sanskar goes to Swara but he stops seeing the store room...

Flashback
Sanskar was running. .
Sanskar: ragini dost mujhe pakdo...Ragini dost mujhe pakdo ..
Ragini was running after him..
Ragini: Sanskar ruk jaayiye..aapki dava(medicines) ka time ho gya hai. .
Sanskar: nhi woh kadwi hai..yuck...bitter bitter...
He stops near the store room..
Sanskar: yeh kya hai?
She comes giving him the medicines..
Ragini: yeh humare ghar ka store room hai...
He has the medicine making a.face...
Sanskar: isme hai kya?
Ragini: maa ki yaadein...
N she goes unable resisting her tears..
After an hour..
Sanskar sees Ragini going to the store room..
Sanskar ti himself: abb yeh kya kregi? Ise mere plan ke baare mein sab itni jaldi na pata chal jaaye. ..
He follows her..she is sitting there writing something. .she was writing her diary.. she was slowly speaking whatever she was writing...
"Maa..kya hum itne bure hain? Koi humse pyaar nhi karta..humne Laksh se bohot pyaar kiya par unhe bhi hum pasand nhi..
Kaash Sanskar always remains so nice with me.."
Sanskar feels bad...but
Sanskar: nhi Sanskar tu kamzor nhi pad sakta...tu yahaan kavita ke liye aaya tha. .focus on ur plan. .

Flashback ends...

Sanskar: iski diary mein dekhta hoon ...possibly kuchh pata chale woh kahaan hai...
He goes inside..n finds for her diary...

PreCAp

He sees her diary n gets to know something...

Sorry friends..I know it os very short but m tired badly...
So pakka next time longer one. .

How it?