Rewarded - Part 4 (Final Part) - The Restitution Series - Page 2

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Shruti🤗. I loved this one! It feels as if I'm rewarded to read it! It was amazing.👏

Staring with Ragini. Oh My! I actually felt bad for her while reading. Quadriplegia is something worse than death and she has been punished beyond repair. Poor girl, it really must have been harsh for her. The endless misery that she had to cope up with.

Then coming to Kaveri, well that was deserved I guess. Although, she had lost quite much in the past, yet I believe she got what she deserved!

Adarsh and Parineeta make a great pair. with Parineeta as his support in all times. Everything is ok now. He excepts Annapurna and Parineeta is pregnant!

Finally SwaSan! The two halves of a whole are just so magical and you made it so ethereal to read with your perfect metaphors and choice of words👏. Their love was so pure, selfless, unconditional and yet passionate and irrevocable. Just loved it. I ain't got beautiful choice of words like urs, as I'm no writer.

P.S.- U've read Harry Potter?? Trust me I'm more than crazyyy for that epic saga of a wizard.

Dear Shruti,

A truly amazing end to a beautiful series - the way the characters have been wrought and spun is mesmerizing!

It is so surprising and tragic that all the actions of the characters have been wrought from love and loss - Kaveri's vengence, Sanskaar's journey through revenge and redemption, Swara's travails through loss and forgiveness, Ragini's fall to depths of hell! Clearly, despite each of them having loved and lost - the choices they made to deal with the same, show how different our lives would be if only we had the courage to let go and move on. But then it is not so easy, is it, especially when the line dividing good and evil is so thin, and revenge is so thrilling!

"If only it were all so simple! If only there were evil people somewhere insidiously committing evil deeds, and it were necessary only to separate them from the rest of us and destroy them. But the line dividing good and evil cuts through the heart of every human being. And who is willing to destroy a piece of his own heart?"
Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn, The Gulag Archipelago 1918-1956

We have truly been 'rewarded'😊

Nyna

Shruti
wish you a very happy new year.. 😊
really it was such an awesome update
ya dadi and ragini's punishment is justified..
They have to get the result of their own karma
..kavei's monolouge was well described
happy to read about the mother-son bonding(annapurna and adarsh)
Haha swara's devrani mission 😆
and the cherry on the cake was swasan romance 😊
Aww so cute and romantic.
Lovely update dear
keep writting
love
simi 😊

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Unreserved

Firstly thank you for bearing with me for such an extended delay in unreserving. Although I had read the part as soon as I saw the PM, I couldn't find enough time to pen/type down an appropriate comment. So thanks for bearing with me.

Coming to the last part I simply loved it. it was a beautiful conclusion to a beautiful journey.

I could say I loved how you punished Ragini because although I might sound a bit sadistic, I feel that if you hadn't turned the story round like this, Swara would have ended up forgiving her again and I would have been thoroughly disappointed. You have I noticed mentioned later how Swara still feels bad for her sister. You rightly said it was the life sentence for both the grandmother and her beloved grand daughter.

Coming to the next part, this completely took me by surprise, not that the others didn't. I never expected you to delve so deep into Kaveri's life and I must say you did confuse me little that I had to reread to completely grasp your words. But it is really commendable how much depth you have to each aspect of the story without deviating too much or boring us all out. You do know how to keep us hooked😃

The next two parts are my absolute favourites. I loved how included Adarsh's part. How he still considers Annapurna his mother and all of them fussing over parineeta was so cute. The adarsh kaveri interaction was beautifully portrayed as well.

Coming to my dear SwaSan. Okay you made us wait a lot for something like this. Leave the best for the last huh? Well i must say all the patience was well paid off. I enjoyed the swasan scene sooo much. I loved the recollection from Sanskar's point of view the most. It was so beautiful and refreshing and really needed in times like this that I wished it never ended.

Why dont you write a more light hearted SwaSan only fic for all of us suffering from KavKar torture? Please Di? Pretty please with cherry on top?

Thankks for bearing with me.
Lots of love🤗
XOXO
Sree

Shru,
First of all I am very sorry for not keeping up with your updates 😭
But today I got a little time for myself and i read all the parts of your restitution
Series slowly and with great concentration...

I've stopped watching the serial from a long back but I try to keep myself updated from the OLV's...though I had always had the sisterhood as my preference of watching the daily soap but gradually I felt connected to ''SwaLak'' and then the CVS dashed it out..I was heartbroken as of then and afterwards I started shipping SwaSan and now also the drama of seperating the couple is on hike..I really felt disgusted and now this disgust has made me ban swaragini off my TV screen..

Sorry for taking my criticisms all out without any reason but I really need to accept this that your writings are the way up of hope and encouragement for me..your stories always make me smile and take a sigh of hope and trust over the stupid plot that thereafter SwaSan will unite 😊...I after reading the final part of the series really watched the repeat telecast today...shru you don't know how much I missed your stories when I was busy and inactive.. I am feeling very happy today 😃

Your stories are so soothing and subtle... the characters you explained in the last chapter ''Parvati'' ''kaveri'' are all mind blowingly composed...and a little treat of SwaSan in the end was delighting 😊 ...

Loved your work all through 😃

- Esha

"All Readers come to fiction as willing accomplices to your lies.Such is the basic goodwill contract made the moment we pick up a work of fiction"

~ Steve Almond WD


Your mesmerizing stories are true treats for us...

superb ending...

Shruti its too beautifully written not only in words but in emotions too. The way u handled all characters n their lives portrayed in story is amazingly justified. i hope i learn smthing from u. I must appreciate one thing the way u write i mean such a command of language u have. If u show ur work to any publishers then u know u can turn it in to ur profession. Its not dat i m saying bcoz u r my sweet frnd but i truly feel so. Keep writing n keep loving us. I m proud to b ur frnd

Thank you kind people for your likes and lovely replies so far! I'll do individual replies as soon as I get a chance, am out and about and want to do this from the iPad at least and not the phone so please news with me. Have read and appreciated each one coming in! Thank you!

Awesome end to a wonderful story👏

Always looked forward to your writings your an amazing writer