Shru🤗It's been way too long!🤗
I loved how the story unfolded and finally saw it's fitting ending. I love the SwaSan moments we have been blessed with so far but it is always so much more satisfying when a story follows the real world and is confined to real world situations. 😆
They had made a mockery out of the show by introducing the "maalkin" mess and they did one better by making Sanskaar behave in a way that was so unlike the Sanskaar we had come to understand, admire and immensely love. I still don't forgive them for making him stand by and do nothing while Ragini humiliated the love of his life the way she did. So I took pleasure in reading how Sanskaar was only playing her to protect Swara. I know you had written the part when we were still coming up with theories for his aloof behavior, hoping that it was all a charade. Alas! Our wishes were left unheard but that doesn't stop us from enjoying the parallel universes that are created by you guys.
In my head , Sanskaar was still pretending and what happened on the show doesn't matter! Poor writing shall not ruin my Sanskaar for me.😃 I am so glad you decided to continue this one Shru.
Part 2 - I have come to love SanLak bond Shru. They really are cute when Laksh is not being an idiot about his so called "first love". Yesterday's scene where both the brothers utter the same dialogue and in the same way. It was cute😆 I swear they should rename the show into "SanLakshya". So to see the long lost brothers find their way back was a welcoming change to seeing them at loggerheads with each other! So so happy that we are done with that!😆 Although I have to admit this Laksh who knows he has no chance at Swara now and thus has given up rather than magically getting over his feelings for her overnight is much more believable. Sanskaar is shown still wary and cautious of his once "you have to love me Swara " jhaap doing brother!🤢 Thank god he did not jump at him the second he said "Tu Bhai , Swara meri bhabhi teri hain!" 🤔 It was unsurprisingly a very enjoyable read.
I loved how you managed to sum up Shomi and Swara's relationship as mother and daughter duo. I have always felt that Swara almost always played Shomi's parent's role - protecting her, nurturing her than the other way around. It sometimes also infuriated me that while Shomi allowed herself to be a pushover, she fails to realize that it affects her daughter's life as much as hers. 😳 That topic however is for discussion on another day. It made me happy however when yours realized that very fact and decided to do something about it. I of course knew who she called. Who but Sanskaar could be the balm to her ailing? Sanskaar meeting Swara in her poor health and his resolve not crumbling? Yeh to kabhi nahi ho sakta!😉 But then you manged to do so much more by that intense and soul awakening kiss! Could not have been a better reconciliation of two souls truly meant to complete each other!❤️
Part 3
Very refreshing spin to the Kaveri - Kavita story there Shru. I have to give you at least a hundred jhappis for sparing us from "return of the dead" dread that we have had to and still have to put up with. Damn you CVs for being so bloody predictive and complete dhabba to the name of creative writing!🤢😡 I absolutely loathe that girl now. Thank you so much for ruining her character for not just us but Sanskaar as well. 😡
So so happy to see that she remains dead in the story here. I know I used her in one of my TS' as well but it was a dream and she still remained dead. How I wish the soap one was also one...an incredibly long one!😆*sigh* Kavita in yours still remains an innocent soul - bless her! Kaveri and DP before marriage is much more digestible. Oh and I should thank you for redeeming DP for me by stating that he took Swara's signatures on the paper by deceit not just to save his ass but also because Ragini had threatened Swara's life.🤗 Did this happen on the show? :/ I haven't really watched the entire episodes during the maalkin and chipkali phase so I don't know if it did.😆
Ohh I so knew Kaveri was talking about Adarsh when Kaveri spoke of her son. It was an easy guess though huh? It could never be Laksh 😛
I don't really hold special regards towards the symbols of marriage whether it is the sindhoor or the mangalsutra. Shocking?😛 Again a topic for discussion on another day😆 The point is, when I read you guys write about them the way you do, I forget about all of that and gush the way I do when it is shown on TV! Maybe it's because it's got everything to do with Sanskaar marking you as his ?😆 I am sure that is it! I loved the Sindhoor and mangalsutra reference, made me remember that amazing dream of Sanskaar
Finally the last bit where Sanskaar. Lakshya and Sanskaar manage to outwit the maalkin and do it in style! This has got to be the umpteenth time I have said this, why can't there be writers like you in the creative team! What in the world were they thinking when they came up with that maalkin track? *headdesk* Such a disaster that was! Absolutely loved Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari - the hardcore business man in action! SSM & Co. Awww, my man never fails to impress me with his gestures for his love!❤️
I have to tell you though Shru - my favorite bit was when Swara thrwe herself in front of Sanskaar willing to take the bullet for him. Honestly, it has always been one of the things I really want Swara to do. To prove to Sanskaar and us that she indeed loves him the way he loves her and I have dreamt up at least a 100 different scenarios and most of them included Ragini/Laksh shooting at Sanskaar while she ends up literally "taking a bullet" for him! OMG!!! Thank you so so much for this!🤗🤗Of course I have to mention how much I loved Sanskaar's reaction to it
Part 4 - I loved that you made sure you not only included the family but also gave them enough importance so as to give us a fitting end in every regard
I guessed that Ragini might have been paralyzed from the last line of the previous part. Honestly even after knowing that this is the same girl who tried to kill my Sanskaar, I couldn't help but feel sorry for her. A testament to a brilliant writer Shru - you invoked sympathy from a reader towards someone we could never imagine feeling sorry for. Like daadi mentioned, death would have been far less a punishment than what she was dealt with by fate. I really wish the writers do some real fixing of Ragini's character. When you think here's the chance for her to now redeem herself and right all the wrongs, she ends up doing exactly what makes it more worse for her as a character. She truly is one vile and irredeemable woman on the show right now. If they wish to see any of us accept her, they need to start thinking about better ways to make that happen than cutting down on SwaSan and instead forcing us the Swa-Ragz crap! The song and the cow eyes at the sisters from the mentaleshwaris and gadha-dias make me wanna gag and pull my hair out at the same time!😡😡🤢 Daadi's fate however still remains unexplained. Was she cast out by the Gadha that her son was for being responsible for ruining both their daughter's life or was she still forgiven by the ever- forgiving Shomi?😳 It was surprising however to hear her talk of not only Ragini but also Swara lying on the ground in a pool of blood. 😲
Kaveri also met her fitting end, having to live alone in a correctional home. The closure that Adarsh had with her birth mother and him refusing to have anything to do with her while making to clear that AP would always be his mum in every regard made me grin like a fool! 😃 I loved your references to Yashoda and Krishn when you desribed AP and Adarsh's relationship. I also liked how you never forget to mention albeit subtly that AP and DP were definitely partial when it came to their own flesh and blood!🤗
Adarsh and Pari our AdRi have a happy ending too. I loved the last bit where they talk about Swara and how she should be set the task of finding her devar a devrani and loooved their dig towards SwaSan. Everyone now seems to have understood the couple dynamics!😆 So cuute!❤️
SwaSan in their bedroom, in each others arms while they look forward to their honeymoon in Bora Bora. Can we come along too please?🤣 I imagined Sanskaar's reaction to that request and I just cannot stop laughing!🤣🤣🤣 OMG tears in my eyes! But seriously after that amazing scene with Swara( yes I shall call it amazing😆 ) taking a bullet for him and him finally realizing the depth of her love, what better way to end the story huh? What an absolute pleasure that was Shru! I am honestly telling you , you truly are one of the best writers that I have ever had the pleasure to interact with not just here but on all the other sites that allow us to read books for free😆 Jokes apart, I really wish you realize your dream of becoming a writer. You are brilliant! It has been a treat to read your works!
Love you!🤗🤗
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