SwaSan OS: Dyuta Parva/ Karna Parva Day 16. - Page 26

I am OK with both options Viji! 😛 if you have written part 2 also, then post both! otherwise whole OS sounds better. 😊 but yeah, you do in which you are more comfortable! 😊 don't take stress! 🤗

Post tomorrow and rest on weekend... I can't wait anymore 😛

Although my heart is with the 1st option where I get to read some part of your awesome concluding piece I have no problem with the second option either...where the wait will be a little longer but the treat sweeter.

just finished reading Dyuta parva, enjoyed your version of SwaSan tackling Ragini with legal stuff, which would be too much to expect from SR CVS😆 And absolutely loved Ram prasad's concern for Sanskar which is rare case on the show to watch

Day16 is so sweet and sensuous, Viji.😳

Originally posted by: Shadow-Fax

just finished reading Dyuta parva, enjoyed your version of SwaSan tackling Ragini with legal stuff, which would be too much to expect from SR CVS😆 And absolutely loved Ram prasad's concern for Sanskar which is rare case on the show to watch

and swara's dialgues t sanky in the end were bang on. kudos to you👏

thanks for the pm. 😊 will read and comment later on the next part

Originally posted by: jasw

Day16 is so sweet and sensuous, Viji.😳

Karna Parva update was really quite interesting Vijii😆

Atariya Aunty made an entry in this one😛 Our very own Kaveri ji..😆

Ragini 🤬 i dont have words for this girl..!!!!😲
She is jealous of Swasan..and is angry🥱 No comments about this too😆

Kaveri ji calling Ram babu..😆 I can imagine her expressions and voice modulation here..😛 , the way you have wriiten her scenes..

But I think Ram has nothing to do with it..I have my bets on DP- atariya connections..😉

Poor Swasan.. I felt bad for them when they happened to overhear the whole convo between Ram-Kaveri..

But what magic it did to them..Sanskaar went away to the farm house and Swara followed..

They had a romantic night ☺️away from the MM madhouse..😳

Loved Swasan scenes at the farm house..Loved their dialogues..The way she consoled him, the way he hugged her was blissful..😳 and what followed was ❤️☺️ no words..

Now I will read the Karna Parva Part two in some time and will comment on it too my dear 🤗