SwaSan OS: Dyuta Parva/ Karna Parva Day 16.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Hi Friends 🤗 🤗

I trust I've caught up with individual replies to all your lovely comments. Thanks again for the very motivating feedback.

This OS series is very close to my heart, since the Mahabharata is my most favorite Epic. I had tried to draw inferences and analogies, to the extent I could, between the Great Epic and the serial. Of course, to that aim, I had departed quite considerably from the present serial plotline.

I am so very happy you all liked this series so much. I've been most touched and humbled by the warmth of your feedback.

Cheers 🤗

Viji

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Nandini

@Nandini25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Firstly, so sorry for being so late.

Now, coming to the fabulous piece of work.

I just love your diction. The os is simply awesome. Such a wonderful blend of turmoil and the relation between two soulmates, growing deeper with time only to become stronger with the merge of two souls into one in the unbreakable bond of love. What an apt answer Swara gave to Ragini's taunt about Sanskar not being the 1st priority for anyone. Loved Swara for that. Yep he is her 1st priority and he doesn't need to be anyone's else's. And Sanskar is always awesome. Ragini was well aware that she just could't win against him. You have also conveyed so beautifully that psychopath's psychology and the constant pressure of trying to be what she wasn't that had finally made her snap. As for Ram, I think he was talking about his brother and SwaSan misunderstood. I'm really curious to know what mystery is hidden in DP's past.

The farmhouse scene is the most beautiful not only because of the romance which was sizzling hot but also because it revealed Sanskar's vulnerability and I loved the way Swara handled it.

Its just simply superb. Loved it to bits.

Edited by Nandini25 - 10 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Nandini25
Firstly, so sorry for being so late.
Now, coming to the fabulous piece of work.
I just love your diction. The os is simply awesome. Such a wonderful blend of turmoil and the relation between two soulmates, growing deeper with time only to become stronger with the merge of two souls into one in the unbreakable bond of love. What an apt answer Swara gave to Ragini's taunt about Sanskar not being the 1st priority for anyone. Loved Swara for that. Yep he is her 1st priority and he doesn't need to be anyone's else's. And Sanskar is always awesome. Ragini was well aware that she just could't win against him. You have also conveyed so beautifully that psychopath's psychology and the constant pressure of trying to be what she wasn't that had finally made her snap. As for Ram, I think he was talking about his brother and SwaSan misunderstood. I'm really curious to know what mystery is hidden in DP's past.
The farmhouse scene is the most beautiful not only because of the romance which was sizzling hot but also because it revealed Sanskar's vulnerability and I loved the way Swara handled it.
Its just simply superb. Loved it to bits.

Hey Nandini...🤗 🤗

Please don't say sorry and stuff for any perceived "late" reply yaar. I just want my pals to read when convenient to them. Am so happy you loved this OS so much, and thanks for this very analytical and insightful comment.

I shall reply to this in detail tomorrow as just about to turn in for the night. 😊 I trust you would have got my earlier pm about the next parts in this "Mahabharata Analogy" OS series as well: "Karna Parva ---Day 17" (Parts 1 and 2; as well as the concluding 3rd part, with the Epilogue "Shanti Parva"). Do read that as well, when time permits. Your question about what exactly was the secret Kaveri was blackmailing Ram with, is answered there. 😉

Will revert in further detail tomorrow. 🤗

Thanks a ton

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

^^^^Hey Nandini my dear friend...🤗

I will reply to your awesome comment later in the day, from my lappie. Am not goof at typing comprehensive replies from my phone, and a comment as insightful as yours needs a detailed revert. 🤗

In the meantime, hope you would be able to read the next part in this OS series, and would also like Karna Parva Day 17.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Nandini25
Firstly, so sorry for being so late.
Now, coming to the fabulous piece of work.
I just love your diction. The os is simply awesome. Such a wonderful blend of turmoil and the relation between two soulmates, growing deeper with time only to become stronger with the merge of two souls into one in the unbreakable bond of love. What an apt answer Swara gave to Ragini's taunt about Sanskar not being the 1st priority for anyone. Loved Swara for that. Yep he is her 1st priority and he doesn't need to be anyone's else's. And Sanskar is always awesome. Ragini was well aware that she just could't win against him. You have also conveyed so beautifully that psychopath's psychology and the constant pressure of trying to be what she wasn't that had finally made her snap. As for Ram, I think he was talking about his brother and SwaSan misunderstood. I'm really curious to know what mystery is hidden in DP's past.
The farmhouse scene is the most beautiful not only because of the romance which was sizzling hot but also because it revealed Sanskar's vulnerability and I loved the way Swara handled it.
Its just simply superb. Loved it to bits.

Hey Nandini...🤗 🤗

So here I am, back with a detailed revert to your very analytical comment, from my lappie. 😊

Thanks so much again, for your lovely words of appreciation for the 1st two installments of this "Mahabharata Analogy" OS series. As a Huge SwaSan fan, I was overjoyed that you found my portrayal of their bond here, moving as you said, from turmoil and angst, growing deeper and stronger with time, into the irrevocable and unbreakable bond of love between true soulmates.

I wanted to show the steady and gradual rapprochement between Swara and Sanskaar; Swara making all efforts to convince him of her deep love and faith in him, and the gradual recovery of trust on Sanskaar's part. Am so very happy that you loved that aspect.

I did want Swara to be very aware of Sanskaar's feelings and his rare, concealed vulnerabilities. She has moved to a stage where she definitely places his interests and feelings foremost, just as he does for her. He will always be of foremost importance for her; and she does not hesitate to put her malicious sister in her place by reminding her of this fact. 😊

I do feel Ragini's mentality, her emotional stability had been severely impacted by the extremely stifling, cossetted atmosphere in which she was brought up by her dictatorial Dadi. She had been forced to don a mask of demure, placid perfection, and never to truly reveal what she was really feeling. All those years of bottled up, suppressed emotions, her latent insecurities and jealousies of the much more vivacious and independent Swara, finally took its toll by making her a vindictive, sly, jealous virago. She now wants to seek revenge against everyone she holds responsible for her plight, not realizing that she herself, is responsible for much of her pain and that of the people around her.

I am very happy to know I could stoke your curiosity about what exactly is the connection between Kaveri and the Maheshwaris. 😉 You would have found out from the Karna Parva--Day 17, by now. Do let me know what you thought of that as well, would be a pleasure to have your feedback. 🤗

Once again, I was so very glad to hear that you loved the farmhouse scene between SwaSan. I wanted to show a tender and passionate romance between them, of them finally leaving all the misunderstandings of the past well and truly behind them; of becoming husband and wife in every sense of the term. But also, as you so very astutely pointed out, the fact of Sanskaar revealing his vulnerability, his insecurity to Swara, placing his full trust and faith again in her. And she handles that so beautifully, because she loves him for the person he is, for the love and the goodness in his heart and his stout conscience. She will never, ever leave his side, and Sanskaar knows that now. 😳 ☺️

Thanks again Nandini 🤗

Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Hi Friends 🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks again for the appreciation and the very motivating feedback for this OS series.

This series is very close to my heart, since the Mahabharata is my most favorite Epic of all time. I had tried to draw parallels and analogies, to the extent I could, between the Great Epic and the serial. Of course, to that aim, I had departed quite considerably from the serial plotline.

I am overjoyed you all liked this series so much. I've been most touched and humbled by the warmth of your comments.

Lots of Love, 🤗 🤗

Viji