Viji🤗🤗 - So very happy that I am finally getting to read this wonderful, absolutely brilliant piece of work in peace!
I actually want you to know that my reply to this one is written as I go through it. I hope the reply doesn't confuse you.
Dyuta Parva-
Part 1 -
Firstly, do you know how happy you made me by finally giving exploring Ram Prasad Maheshwari. I seriously have always been so disappointed with the lack of importance given to his character on the show. I have always wanted to know more about him - since obviously he was Sanskaar's dad. This again reminded me of Shruti's letter from Sanskaar to his dad. How he explained that though he did not hate that he never really stood up for him, understood why he couldn't do it was still disappointed that his dad (who is supposed to be every child's hero) never came out. So to have you finally.. finally explore the guy who clearly sees and hears everything, understands everything with complete clarity, ( we can definitely see where Sanskaar's gets his amazing gift of perception and understanding from) yet always remains mum for reasons of course understood made me so very happy. He being Lakshman to DP was completely understandable and so very obvious that it most of the times made me sometimes wanna smack him, just to wake the "pita" up from within him. So to know that he has time and again realized how unfair and hypocritical his "bhaisa" was when it came to Sanskaar had me doing a whoop in the air! 😆
Also you me and everyone else(I guess) , knew how completely illogical and stupid that maalkin track was. How does that even happen?! But you know what infuriated me more? The fact that Mr. Durga Prasad Maheshwari (I adored the guy before you know. Now I can't stand the guy!) actually handed over everything over to Ragini including what was clearly ONLY Sanskaar's right! Who gave him the rights to do that? To ruin himself is fine it was his son in question, but to give away what is not yours? Especially for a guy that did nothing but cause trouble and give pain to my Sanskaar?! How dare he!😡
So to read that our RP also caught on to that made me do a happy jig on my seat!yayayayyy!!!
The last line- "Ram had finally had enough of playing Lakshman's role" ---- Finally!!!!🥳
Part 2-
Viji - I wish I could take a picture of myself right now and send it to you - tears in my eyes , I've got tears in my eyes! The happy kind too. Oh My gosh Viji seriously, I don't think I can say anything that would express how much I loved reading this part !
I will try of course - those two absolutely beautiful and amazingly true quotes! Definitely have a new top 5 among the quotes that I have read about love. So very very beautiful!
Obviously enjoyed the fact that it was Swara's POV - but my favourite part of this one has to be when Sanskaar explains to Swara why he doesn't believe or rather cannot bring himself to believe her "love" for him. I understood why he did what he did on the show when she confessed to him for the first time, but it was what they made him do afterwards that kinda did not sit well with me. There had to be a better and far convincing explanation to his indifference towards his wife so of course I wasn't in the least bit surprised that you managed to add so much more into it and completed it in way.
I know that Swara is a brave girl anyone that is able to forgive someone as easy as she does has to be.(though that trait of hers irritates me to no end yet I can see how that makes her special) We also know that she's broken and craves family. Her wish for a perfect family sometimes almost borders on obsession. Her enthusiasm to play perfect family whether it is her own or her husbands is not healthy and clearly something she needs to see. All of our wishes came true when madam finally realized that if there is one person that deserves her love and attention - it is only sanskaar. Yet again however, the circumstances demand the "bahu" in her before the "biwi" could do anything about it. So to see our Sansku react the way he did , completely understandable.
The last quote is what we have been time and again discussing about - you can't just say ILU to anyone and expect them to believe you because clearly your actions speak way louder than your words do! The quote was so bang on that it made me grin like a crazy person. Loved it!
Part 3 -
I just want to say one thing - I hate Indian Telly logic sucks big time! If only we could have more sensible plots and more believable tracks especially when it comes to legal stuff. The whole divorce drama - divorce under proxy and then the whole transfer of ownership of a huge company without the consent of any shareholders and partners. I absolutely love it when Sanskaar shows why he clearly became the businessman that he has. My man is so dam brilliant! So proud of you my love!
Of course leave it up to the well-informed writers of the forum to handle the situation like pros! Seriously, I always go ROFL when I think about how we would react given the same kind of situations on the soap! Only Sansku can get daadi to shut up! Had so much fun reading it. Sanskaar handling the situation like a boss! The way he would have on the show if the writers had used even a part of that thing called brain that they seem to be unaware of most of the times!
Loved RP-Swara team up! Go RamSwaSan go!😆
Part 4 -
This was such bliss! I still cannot stop myself form grinning. It looked so weird that one of my office friends actually sat here with me to read what was making me go all awww! Haha!
Of course she doesn't get it. No one really does apart from us of course! ;)
My favorite bit in this part was when you explain how Sanskaar never had and never would do anything in halves. Whether it was now- his love for Swara or in the past - the revenge for Kavita. So when he says how he would never be OK with anything less from her, I could completely relate. It I think is how I have always understood and seen love. Anything other than complete submission to love - in way that it become completely consuming and constant presence that outweighs anything else in your life including you. So to hear him say and demand the same from her. It was only just! Absolutely loved that bit Viji .
RP was so sly about the whole "she signed the papers and was looking for you" thing. Intelligent man! :P After everything he said and did , Sanskaar clearly is terrified of her actually doing the deed. Seriously! Such a stubborn ass. Both of them in fact - drive me insane with their stubbornness. Of course I will be partial here and say that Sanskaar's stubbornness , I have always been able to understand and bear however I can't say the same thing when it comes to his better half. (I am however enjoying her stubbornness now. You go girl! Make him see how much you absolutely adore him. )
Coming back to the story , I loved how we could clearly see him finally realize that may be , he had pushed her way too far. That heart break when you realize that you might have actually put an end to your own life by being a stubborn ass was so real and intense! And the relief that is clearly visible when he realizes that his worst nightmare had not come true! Beautiful Viji.
I have to tell you, I was so happy to read how you used Sanskaar's very lines against him like that. Honestly, it was such a pleasant surprise. Made me so so happy to hear her say that. What better way to make a man listen to you than to quote him back to him. Bravo Swara! Finally living up to her name , Mrs. Sanskaar Maheshwari!
We are left with a confident and determined Swara smiling at her husband while showing him how happy she was being "his" while Sanskaar looks on as his wife "marks herself as his" , through the sindhoor. Yayy! Now to the next update! 😃
Can I add the fact that you related mythology ( I really love exploring our Indian Mytho - as much as you read them, there seems to be one or another story in there that remains to be yet read especially when it comes to the Mahabaratha" It's my favorite among the two obviously two being - Ramayan and Mahabarath.) to the scenario on the show right now. Bravo! I mean of course all of us have at least read or heard of the stories but it takes a special one to relate it to real life or in this case - a soap ! I 'm not surprised though that it was you😊
So sorry this is coming so late Viji - finally released from the project so now I'm finally getting on to every story and PM that I have yet to reply
I will obviously get to commenting on the next update now.😊
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