Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated - Page 17

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Shru my dear...🤗

So glad you managed to get this out, amid the crazy work schedule, and the meetings in London you said you have on Friday.

Really liked Chapter 3. The bit about Sanskaar asking her, in mingled anger and love, why she left without either telling him anything, or without signing the papers (as per the ultimatum he'd earlier given! 😆). He really does want Swara to come out and declare her feelings, na? I feel for the dude, he's been wearing his heart on his sleeve for so long, its high time he heard the magic words from her!

And Swara, rising to the bait, angrily declaring that she won't sign the papers, and she's not going to explain why 😳. But Sanskaar, being Sanskaar, obviously understood why, and doesn't need any further explanation! And immediately asks her, meltingly, to come with him for that Oh-so romantic boat ride!

What I really liked here, was Swara's thought about the empty column for her signature in the divorce paper---how she would have signed, if her heart was as empty as that column. But now that her heart is filled to the brim, with thoughts and love for Sanskaar, how could she possibly have signed? This was lovely Shru, very well put.

And the epilogue---😛 The Golden couple is safe and secure in their lover's nest in Delhi, far, far away from the Madding crowd! I've so wanted to see them move out temporarily to Sanskaar's apartment, with Durga Prasad & Ram Prasad's approval and blessing of course. This was that step taken to even better heights---by moving them to another city altogether! 😉

An idea: you could write, at some future stage, honeymoon vignettes of their Europe tour. If it gets too risque for the forum, you could always put it up on a blog. 😳

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.

Amazing as always..

I was waiting for the final part and am just speechless , from the description of Benaras to SwaSan romantic union ... everything is so magical ...so perfect...

As I have said earlier , you know how to create magic though your writing and you again did the same..

Hats off for this awesome work 👏

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Loved Loved Loved this update yaar Shruti 🤗

Oh I don't know what to write..I am out of words..😊😊😊

Loved the way you weaved this magical tale to its end with perfection..Magical words, woven into a magical fabric showcasing a plethora of emotions👏👏👏

Swara Sanskaar confrontation was simply awesome..Loved the onslaught of a magnitude of emotions which hit them one by one..It was beautifully written, both in his and her respective emotional viewpoints..
Loved the boat ride and then the confession scene at the hotel..😳 I could imagine each scene..

And finally the epilogue was dreamlike

Sanksaar took Swara away from all the Maheshwari madness😆 It was much needed..

Loved the way you ended it with their soulful lovemaking scene..☺️ Swasan are indeed soulmates..Yin and Yang..

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hey! Please let me know your name if you don't mind so I can acknowledge your always kind words properly. Thank you so much for your lovely words! Glad youliked it!</font>

Hi Shruthi..
Myself Amie.. 😊

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update dear

Loved it

It was so magically written

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Shruti fantastic
Well Sanky's eyes have found a special place in stories lately...Well now am going to observe them more keenly.
What a beautiful confession.!!
I seriously want a OTT dramatic bollywood Ishtyle confession with lots of tears(ofcourse khushi k),hugs n,kisses .
After all we need the required khushi after so much heartaches...oh my sadist shipper heart
All I can say about this story is that is was poignantly beautiful.You had put your whole heart AMD soul while writing it and it totally shows it.
The boat ride part was magical.Sanskaar's love is not just passionate but also the in most purest form.
I think ye swara he hai Jo itna time lagaya patne mein..mein hoti toh Kab ka I love u too keh chuki hoti
The epilogue was the best considering they had left MM..coz in my opinion only then can swason live in complete happiness if they leave this MM
It seems everything is going to b fine ..first the olvz and now such beautiful story
You nailed it my friend
keep writing more
love
Samiya

Perfect ending Shruti!
I really prefer this first person view of Swara Sanskaar
It puts more emotions and passion into the write up
Swara's confession and Sanskaar's subsiding anger was so well described yaar!
I cudn't stop reading once I started.
Beautiful one!👏

Originally posted by: Anglaise

Hi Shruthi..
Myself Amie.. 😊

Hey Amie! Great to know you via this! Hoping for lots more interaction and thanks for your support :)

Read three parts at once and i loved it.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Vij🤗</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Yeah well- in a way I guess the pressure made me perform😆. I was worried otherwise about when I would find the time to actually get this up!</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Sohappy to read your comments, made mymorning brighterdespite the long day coming up. Yes poor Sanskaar, the anger wassimmering as Madam drives him to the heights offrustration with her denseness! I took so manymental retakes of how this should be played out, I am relieved it has worked. Yes, Swara's inaction on the divorcepapers in some way was the answer he got and he is ofcourse astute enough torealise that, unlike Swara! Ah you like the emptycolumn metaphor too- Shruti Lann did too😳.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Yes some of us are sodesperate for them to leave Mental Mahal but theonlyway we can get this isthrough our writing as it will never happen on the show. Haha- yeahI thought Delhi farenoughfrom the crazies for a while.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Oh someone else has asked for honeymoon stories and I am nowseriouslythinking about a set of OSs set in a range of citiesacrossEurope with some hopefully sweet moments set in each city? I will have to keep therisqu momentscontrolled I guess but there is quite someleeway na?😉Does it sound interesting? Love ya sis xx</font>

@bold I second Viji...u should surely write