Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Anglaise
Hi.. Just went through both part3 and eplongue.. Splended one.. Awesome Update.. Finally everything cleared.. It was so Natural..! Loved it to core!
TC 🤗

Hey! Please let me know your name if you don't mind so I can acknowledge your always kind words properly. Thank you so much for your lovely words! Glad you liked it!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
@Part 3:
This part was magical. I loved it. Loved that analogy involving the empty space on the divorce paper & Swara's once empty heart filled up with love for Sanskaar. It was all too beautifully written. I also liked that there was no long drawn out explanations or dialogues involved. Isn't that how it happens between loved ones? Sometimes a hug or a smile conveys more than a thousand words. That feeling of togetherness which they must have experienced at Assi ghat, that had more power to get them together than any words could ever have.

@Epilogue:

So glad that Sanskaar left that Mad Mansion😆 Ofc will never see such a thing in the show but who cares🥱

This line ---> She melted into him as effortlessly as a swathe of silk flowing across a smooth surface ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Shruti 🤗 Firstly, I want to say a big thanks to you for having encouraged me earlier during the PM exchange and Nitz too. It really did help me to keep going despite my misgivings and reading your comments about how much you liked it has made my week!! Exactly re the lack of major "action" or dialogues. After all the drama that has recently unfolded it was exhausting me to think of the state of a couple like SwaSan who already have issues to resolve between them before they can find their happy ever after. When your connect is so amazing, like you say a very simple gesture is more than enough. It was very hard to at first think what they would say, then I just let the feeling flow and visualised it and realised they didn't need to say much. They would get to where they needed with little said. So glad that this was picked up and seems to have worked.

Mad Mansion 😆. Yes no chance on screen but a brief escape through fiction I could do and as you have done before too. Just want those two out of there so bad!

Awww- glad you liked that line! Seemed to fit.

Love ya xxx

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Aweee
Its perfect just perfect
Swasan emotions were bought out so wonderfully
My favourite part was the boat ride one it was a magical I could actually picture Swasan
Great great great work

Hey Akanksha! Thank you so much! Glad you like that boat ride- I almost felt like I was experiencing it as I wrote it and now so want to visit Benares! Never been there!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: sneharay
Its Superb..absolutely beautiful..👍🏼
Reading this is so pleasant 😊

Thank you hugely Sneha x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: simsen23
Wow shruti...wat an end...n d banaras part ws mesmerizng...i wish fr a banaras track of swasan in d show...keep writing...its really awesome... 😊 😉 😃

Hey Sim! Thanks so much for this! I have so wanted a Banaras trip since Sanskaar described his version of it to Swara

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Read the part 3 n epi shruti. .. u r tooo good a writer...the words just flow so beautifully frm u tht pictures are automatically conjured up in one's mind. Each and every nuance of both their expressions can be seen clearly in my mind as u described them n their feelings. The anger the pain and the abundance of love...truly beautiful
Loved the scene of their boat ride ...how they bonded without words. ...swara so badly needed to say them yet he waited giving her the time she needed to finally pour out her heart to him in the privacy of the hotel room.

The epilogue was so sweet..sanskaar is sooo damn sweet...how can anyone ever be immune to him!!!!
Glad tht they decided to shift to delhi where they can b away frm the madness of the mentaleshwaris...wish u could write a post-epilogue with they Europe trip scenes. ...sigh ...i knw...but kya karu ... dont want this super Swasanlicious story to end! !!

Hey! Thank you ever so much for your lovely words! Please tell me your name if you don't mind and apologies if you already have before and I have forgotten! I am so chuffed reading that you felt all that you described reading this and that you could really visualise what I was trying to bring across. Exactly re the boat ride. Sanskaar is amazing enough to realise what she is feeling and he is ever patient. He had to lose patience earlier as without that Madam would not have moved from her wilful ignorance but he is sensitive enough to allow them the space they need. I totally cannot understand how anyone can resist Sanskaar Maheshwari! Haha- you know you have made me so tempted to write a series of travels with SwaSan in Europe- I can visualise them in all my favourite cities, Rome, Athens, Vienna, London, Barcelona and so many others! Too tempting but I fear everyone would get bored unless I created mini stories there! Hmm- let me think to see if there is an angle! Lots of love x

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Hi Shruts!!

Dying to read part 3 and epilogue. I will leave my comment by the weekend pakka se.. Sorry for the delay. I still have two more finals coming up on Friday.

Soowwiiieee, Kan pakdu chu!!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl
Hi Shruts!!
Dying to read part 3 and epilogue. I will leave my comment by the weekend pakka se.. Sorry for the delay. I still have two more finals coming up on Friday.

Soowwiiieee, Kan pakdu chu!!

Shona mari jaan!

Please don't worry and no rush whatsoever. Whenever you read and comment, I'll be eager to read what you think. For now, just focus on those exams and ace them, as I will pray for you to do so! Dhyaan rakhje. Jai Shri Krishna. Love you sis. xoxo

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PRACHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

wow this was beautiful
seriously sanky only you can ask this kind of question
swasan style confession
awww he shifted from mm jst for her sake

so sweet
loved it

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Love, love, loved the update!

I particularly loved the way you wrote Swara's confusion then anger at the mention of divorce and finally surrender to her feelings. Also loved how joyous Sanskaar was once he figured out that Swara doesn't want the divorce.

Their boat ride was great. You portrayed the emotions they both felt wonderfully! And the confession was brilliant!

I always wanted Swara and Sanskaar to move away from the Maheshwari house in Kolkatta and I am so glad that Sanskaar moved them both to Delhi. It warmed my heart to read about them being so happy and content together! Hopefully these days won't be so far along now in the show and we will get to see a happily married SwaSan soon!

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