Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Finally unreserved on page 18. Sorry it took this long :)

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Sumi Roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

very beautiful ending..

without saying anythng specificaly sanskar understnd swara dnt wnt divorce..

thr drem banaras trip..

everythng is beautiful...

finally thy r away 4m MM,in thr apartmnt..in thr wold of love...

i love the part3 & ending..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Hi Shru my dear...🤗

So glad you managed to get this out, amid the crazy work schedule, and the meetings in London you said you have on Friday.

Really liked Chapter 3. The bit about Sanskaar asking her, in mingled anger and love, why she left without either telling him anything, or without signing the papers (as per the ultimatum he'd earlier given! 😆). He really does want Swara to come out and declare her feelings, na? I feel for the dude, he's been wearing his heart on his sleeve for so long, its high time he heard the magic words from her!

And Swara, rising to the bait, angrily declaring that she won't sign the papers, and she's not going to explain why 😳. But Sanskaar, being Sanskaar, obviously understood why, and doesn't need any further explanation! And immediately asks her, meltingly, to come with him for that Oh-so romantic boat ride!

What I really liked here, was Swara's thought about the empty column for her signature in the divorce paper---how she would have signed, if her heart was as empty as that column. But now that her heart is filled to the brim, with thoughts and love for Sanskaar, how could she possibly have signed? This was lovely Shru, very well put.

And the epilogue---😛 The Golden couple is safe and secure in their lover's nest in Delhi, far, far away from the Madding crowd! I've so wanted to see them move out temporarily to Sanskaar's apartment, with Durga Prasad & Ram Prasad's approval and blessing of course. This was that step taken to even better heights---by moving them to another city altogether! 😉

An idea: you could write, at some future stage, honeymoon vignettes of their Europe tour. If it gets too risque for the forum, you could always put it up on a blog. 😳

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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PUBALI BASU

@MysticMoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Amazing as always..

I was waiting for the final part and am just speechless , from the description of Benaras to SwaSan romantic union ... everything is so magical ...so perfect...

As I have said earlier , you know how to create magic though your writing and you again did the same..

Hats off for this awesome work 👏

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Loved Loved Loved this update yaar Shruti 🤗

Oh I don't know what to write..I am out of words..😊😊😊

Loved the way you weaved this magical tale to its end with perfection..Magical words, woven into a magical fabric showcasing a plethora of emotions👏👏👏

Swara Sanskaar confrontation was simply awesome..Loved the onslaught of a magnitude of emotions which hit them one by one..It was beautifully written, both in his and her respective emotional viewpoints..
Loved the boat ride and then the confession scene at the hotel..😳 I could imagine each scene..

And finally the epilogue was dreamlike

Sanksaar took Swara away from all the Maheshwari madness😆 It was much needed..

Loved the way you ended it with their soulful lovemaking scene..☺️ Swasan are indeed soulmates..Yin and Yang..

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
wow this was beautiful
seriously sanky only you can ask this kind of question
swasan style confession
awww he shifted from mm jst for her sake

so sweet
loved it

Thanks so much Prachi, glad you liked it. Sanskaar is Sanskaar right? And with Swara- what to do with this girl? Poor guy, had to take extreme measures 😆. And yes, they shifted for a while, I wanted to show that a man like Sanskaar would.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Love, love, loved the update!
I particularly loved the way you wrote Swara's confusion then anger at the mention of divorce and finally surrender to her feelings. Also loved how joyous Sanskaar was once he figured out that Swara doesn't want the divorce.
Their boat ride was great. You portrayed the emotions they both felt wonderfully! And the confession was brilliant!
I always wanted Swara and Sanskaar to move away from the Maheshwari house in Kolkatta and I am so glad that Sanskaar moved them both to Delhi. It warmed my heart to read about them being so happy and content together! Hopefully these days won't be so far along now in the show and we will get to see a happily married SwaSan soon!

Hey Vyshu! Thanks so much sweetie! So happy reading your comments and seeing how much you liked it. Yes exactly the anger on both sides was just their frustration and in Swara's case her fight with her emotions that she always struggles to recognise for what they are. Poor Sanskaar- he finally gets his due! Glad you liked the boat ride, I wanted to write that since I thought of Banaras. Delhi seemed far away from the madness for a little while for them 😛. Cannot wait for the upcoming romance track to start on the show. Lots of love x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Sree...
Resing for now. Will comment in detail tomorrow :)
Wow. I'm speechless.

I really loved the beginning, till they go out boating. It was my favourite. Although very few words are exchanged between them, their emotions are very clear. I love the contradictory emotions that both of them feel and how connected they are that enen the most sublte change of emotion can be felt by the other. The whole scene was very natural. The choice of anger initially, the pain oozing out in spite of it was wonderfully expressed.

I liked the boating And the epilogue also. The unspoken agreement, the old promise of visiting Banaras was beautiful. But their confession stole the limelight. So simple yet so powerful.

I think, I'm too head over heals swasan and your portrayal of SwaSan that I'm unable to write anymore. Just that it was an amazing read.

Hope you find time to write even more amazing pieces.
Lots of love
Sree

P.S. sorry it took this long to unreserve

Hey sweetheart! Pls don't say sorry na! I am so touched by your lovely words! Thank you!! Yes I felt after all the recent drama they didn't need much conversation and as I was writing in the first person, I just focussed on describing the riot of their emotions. So pleased you thought it came across as natural. I'm so happy reading the comments you guys give me, it keeps me motivated. I'm now on a long break from Tuesday, visiting the States but I'll try to write if I can whilst there. Lots of love and thanks to you for this xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
very beautiful ending..
without saying anythng specificaly sanskar understnd swara dnt wnt divorce..
thr drem banaras trip..
everythng is beautiful...
finally thy r away 4m MM,in thr apartmnt..in thr wold of love...
i love the part3 & ending..

Aww, thanks so much for this and always being kind with your feedback. I wanted this magical trip to start their new beginning and Banaras seemed the right place after that Diwali episode 😃. The apartment is their temporary haven:) Glad you enjoyed it! Much love x