Winds of winter SwaSan IK era OS #8 pg 13

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Kushimian89
such a sweet one love Sanskar's care towards Shona😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: princess_tara
lovely os

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nimmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Swara poor thing is a masochist.

and i so love the way Sanskaar takes care of his little pet. kicking a football at the bully.
standing up against that blot on fatherhood Shekhar..
and giving his bike to Swara... how sweet was that.

beautifully written Saku.

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Sakura24

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#34

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
Swara poor thing is a masochist.

and i so love the way Sanskaar takes care of his little pet. kicking a football at the bully.
standing up against that blot on fatherhood Shekhar..
and giving his bike to Swara... how sweet was that.

beautifully written Saku.

Swara

Football? Oh yeah you're talking about the IK second chapter, revisited it huh? In the winter series his hate and love are both extreme Nimmie, hence he is the ice king⭐️

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chemgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Its just too gud as always...swara depends on sanskaar even as a teenager...she is vert much the same when grown up and he too remains somewhat same though experiences hav hardened him...plz write more of these

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: chemgirl
Its just too gud as always...swara depends on sanskaar even as a teenager...she is vert much the same when grown up and he too remains somewhat same though experiences hav hardened him...plz write more of these

Thank you so much😳

Yes they had indeed changed very less over the years. Swara was always incomplete without Sanskar and he always cared a lot for her.

I have promised to post six more dear😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Good!

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dimaag

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

I think it's really good and thanks to you that before deleting it from your lovely piece of writing, you actually thought of placing it before us. It's brilliant like always and thanks for the pm dear. Update soon. Just loved both the parts sakura 👏 .

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Hey Saku...

Loved the detour back into the IK days. 😊 Loved the 2nd os in particular, I remember when I started reading IK, I felt distinctly upset at Shomi's decision, to ask Sanskaar to distance himself from Swara. Plus I also disliked Kavita giving him supposedly "objective" advice in favor of this request . 😊 If you remember, I had asked you if Kavita did not have her own axe to grind here. Since she probably had started developing feelings for Sanskaar, who was totally wrapped up in Swara at that point. 😉

So this cute little OS really felt good, it fit right into that point on the tale, and I was glad Sanskaar didn't just send Swara off without an affectionate goodbye, see ya soon type of thing.

Did I read the last line correctly, where Swara says it is not HIS BIKE she has a crush on...don't tell me Sanskaar was so dense he didn't realize the hidden affirmation in her words, on whom exactly she had a crush on...😳

Lovely read Saku. 🤗

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: dimaag
I think it's really good and thanks to you that before deleting it from your lovely piece of writing, you actually thought of placing it before us. It's brilliant like always and thanks for the pm dear. Update soon. Just loved both the parts sakura 👏 .

Thanks dear! I'm glad I decided against deleting them too!

You're welcome about the PM!!😃

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