Winds of winter SwaSan IK era OS #8 pg 13

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Saku- am so glad this didn't get deleted. Loved the exploration of the scene especially Sanskaar's surprising revelation and his practical approach as to how to teach silly ones a lesson. Swara was naive of course, you copy as you are my friend but I am only upset because I think you "betrayed" me. Laksh- typical is all I will say! Given current madness, this was a pleasant interlude!

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Brilliant as always Sakura! They are so cute at that age! I loved Lakshya's single minded focus on his paper and that last line took the cake! Can't wait for the next OS!

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nimmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This is SO adorable Saku.
reminded me of Harry potter trio with role reversal between Hermione and Harry. Laksh is no Ron though.😆.

so very cute!

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I am not even liking lakshya from his childhood too

Post rest of the parts too

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: indrani7495
Aww this was so sweet...!!!😳 i specially liked the part whr sanskar said enemy's enemy is a friend so gang up against me!!😆

He was trying to get them talk to each other anyhow😆

Thanks dear😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Jamina
Aww cute loved it

Thank you😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
It was super cute. ..no wonder u didnt hv the heart to delete it...and a good thing too. ..otherwise we would lose out on a brilliant piece of reading. ...pls post the remaining 7 parts soon...since they r already written! !!

Yes, their cuteness made me keep them😊

Thanks a lot dear.

I will post them one by one, they have to be edited a bit so that they can stand on their own😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: amimus
I liked the beginning and I am sure I am going to enjoy reading further.
Look forward to reading you soon

It is the middle dear, the start is IK and the end is SQ, check them out if you're interested. THanks a lot😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice!

Thanks dear😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: --Anna--
Beautiful Saku!

Treated to another brilliant piece of your writing. You have me in awe every time. That reminds me, I gotta go read Phoenix. 😳

Loved the last line. 😆

Anna

Thanks Anna😳

Yes yes go on the birdie is waiting😃

I'm fond of that line too...typical Lakshya😆

-Sakura