Winds of winter SwaSan IK era OS #8 pg 13 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Saku...

Loved the detour back into the IK days. 😊 Loved the 2nd os in particular, I remember when I started reading IK, I felt distinctly upset at Shomi's decision, to ask Sanskaar to distance himself from Swara. Plus I also disliked Kavita giving him supposedly "objective" advice in favor of this request . 😊 If you remember, I had asked you if Kavita did not have her own axe to grind here. Since she probably had started developing feelings for Sanskaar, who was totally wrapped up in Swara at that point. 😉

So this cute little OS really felt good, it fit right into that point on the tale, and I was glad Sanskaar didn't just send Swara off without an affectionate goodbye, see ya soon type of thing.

Did I read the last line correctly, where Swara says it is not HIS BIKE she has a crush on...don't tell me Sanskaar was so dense he didn't realize the hidden affirmation in her words, on whom exactly she had a crush on...😳

Lovely read Saku. 🤗

Hey Viji!
I was missing IK so much so decided to reread my original chapters and picked up these treasures from there. Yes, I remember your slightly annoyed tone at the third chapter of IK where shoumi and Kavita were grilling Sanskar. It was true both had their own selfish motives then.
I'm glad you found it cute and fitting, I had too, but it made the second chapter too long, hence I bid farewell to it after some thoughts.
You were the only one who caught on the last line Viji, indeed she said, not his bike 😆😳 But Sanskar decided not to push it at the moment I guess, he had promises to keep.
Thanks Viji 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
how could i have missed this 😡...reading this now.
Saku pm me please when you write anything I love to reach your work 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very moving Saku. Loved the connection between Swara and Sanskaar, the very obvious comfort and care that flows between them, right from their childhood and teen years.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: foresight

how could i have missed this 😡...reading this now.

Saku pm me please when you write anything I love to reach your work 🤗

Oh Sapna, 🤗I didn't think many would be interested in the winds, so I didn't advertise much. Will surely PM you the next one. we have five more to go😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very moving Saku. Loved the connection between Swara and Sanskaar, the very obvious comfort and care that flows between them, right from their childhood and teen years.

Thanks Viji. My first approach to IK had been to explore their lives from childhood, making connections to their behavior in the present time, but sort of edited out most of it. I'm glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OS 1
Really liked the three of them and their interaction and their bonding. they were close, though swara clearly had a inclination towards sanskar. she could forgive him for what she couldnt laksh...so nicely put

OS 2
second was amazing. sanskar already loves her so much...and swara too already feels deeply for him,,,loved how protective her way and also annoyed at shomi for separating them. beautiful beautiful


OS3
that was so understated and yet had so much depth. their bond moved to an altogether new level. there seemed almost traces of there being something more between them...


🤗 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 i cannot do this enough. all were really touching.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update Sakura
Thank God you didn't delete these wonderful parts
Loved all the 3 OS
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: foresight

OS 1

Really liked the three of them and their interaction and their bonding. they were close, though swara clearly had a inclination towards sanskar. she could forgive him for what she couldnt laksh...so nicely put

OS 2
second was amazing. sanskar already loves her so much...and swara too already feels deeply for him,,,loved how protective her way and also annoyed at shomi for separating them. beautiful beautiful


OS3
that was so understated and yet had so much depth. their bond moved to an altogether new level. there seemed almost traces of there being something more between them...


🤗 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 i cannot do this enough. all were really touching.

Thank you so much Sapna🤗
Os 1 was indeed a scene where insight was given, how each was already what they had become in the later years. SwaSan and Ragya highlighted.
OS 2
it was all about their bond, which scared both shomi and Kavi to a certain length again highlighting how the future was already pre-decided.
OS 3
that is exactly why I edited it out. I didn't want people to think Kavi had stolen Sanskar from Swara or something. There were undercurrents of love, true, but they were never pronounced😳
You've left me speechless with all the clapping. That is more than enough😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Comimg to 2nd and 3rd part. Shekar and dadi is those characters in the show i will never like... Shekar more than dadi..
Here also my opinion is same .. no parent should be cause of there childrens especially small kids cause of pain. And they should never be made to feel unwanted..

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