Winds of winter SwaSan IK era OS #8 pg 13

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Awesome update Sakura
Thank God you didn't delete these wonderful parts
Loved all the 3 OS
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thanks Mansi😊

I'm glad I didn't delete them as well.

You're welcome about the PM.

I'll update the rest after giving them a slight brush up😳

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: swa291
Comimg to 2nd and 3rd part. Shekar and dadi is those characters in the show i will never like... Shekar more than dadi..
Here also my opinion is same .. no parent should be cause of there childrens especially small kids cause of pain. And they should never be made to feel unwanted..

I second both your opinions dear. Firstly about Shekar and Dadi and secondly about parents and children. most children gets affected from parents separating, that's where I picked out the idea from. Anyway IK was too bitter even without Shekar and Dadi's interventions so I had to edit these parts out😊

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Saku you know these oneshots perfectly describe how SwaSan's relationship used to be and how she must have actually felt when he betrayed her...
Just makes me connect to IK and SQ much more...

Thank God you decided to post them before deleting them

And where is my pm??! 😡

Edited by manasie23 - 9 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: manasie23
Saku you know these oneshots perfectly describe how SwaSan's relationship used to be and how she must have actually felt when he betrayed her...
Just makes me connect to IK and SQ much more...

Thank God you decided to post them before deleting them

And where is my pm??! 😡

Oops! I PMed from my buddy list since I didn't think it was much important and didn't advertise much. Sorry🤢😕😭

I'm glad you feel more connected with IK and SQ now, after all the shots were put in to some use before getting deleted ruthlessly.

I'm so sorry about not PMing once more😭

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Read 2 nd 3 ...both superb. ... there was sooo much more to swara n sanskaar in their younger days ..only they were too immature to realise it. Swara did need tht separation to get a hold of her life and sanskaar his pain...love the way sanskaar supports swara in her pain in both OS 2 n 3...they were meant for eachother

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Mindblowing flashbacks .Loved them to bits especially the last one.

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Wow Saku,loved all the three OS ,wonderful ,made me so carpediezied for sure😃👏👏

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moonstonespirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Sakura 🤗 Upcoming finals leave me little time for IF 😭 I am going to re-read this to understand the nuances, once I'm free from exam fever. But this is just amazing!! I so loved it. This interaction was everything.

Firstly I liked the setup. Up on the hill, watching the stars. In the dark of the night, she laid out her every emotion for him to see. And just like the sun rise which follows every dark night, he gave her hope. Hope that her existence is not hers to alone, when his very essence is tied to hers. And that he would always want her.

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Swathi

@Pinkylibbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Oh My God... Swara and Sanskar and their childhood memories... Wonderful

That was kind of ... Deep. I just love the way you show Swara and Sanskaar could understand each other. Its simply something that cannot be put up properly in words. Had I not checked your works just to kill my time, I would have not even been aware of this story of yours. I kindly request you to send PM whenever you update the next part. Pleeeaaaseee.