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Akshdeep Kaur

@_akaur_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Thanks for this amazing update..!!!!👏

I think that Sanskaar has other plans in MM for Durga Prasad...

By the way I liked Sanskaar's company name... Vincere.. as it is different from the others...

Thanks for the pm..😃

Aksh

Edited by _akaur_ - 9 years ago

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

I am going to say it again - I am loving this Sanskaar so much. That attitude, that style... *sigh*

He is playing such a well thought out game. However much Durga Prasad thinks that he can out maneuver Sanskaar he will come to realize that this student has surpassed his teacher!

And what can we say about Lakshya? He is as brash and impulsive as always!

Loved that paragraph at the end where Sanskaar said that his assistant would already be getting his stuff. It showed that Sanskaar has planned ahead and is confident!

For some reason I think Sanskaar is already married to Swara and he will introduce her to the Maheshwaris when they all get home.

Is Ragini bad or good in this fic? Is she married to Lakshya?

Waiting so very impatiently for the next update!

Edited by bloomnskyrules - 9 years ago

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

I just love your SANSKAAR <3

He already planned to live in MM even before DP planned to keep him close. Brilliant!

SANSKAAR made DP follow him out, already leading & ahead of DP.

This war is gonna be so much fun, which is already started!

Plz update soon & plz do PM me.

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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

wow i loved the update and sanskars style
waiting to know what is the real game

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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Awesome update. ...I am so in love with this sassy sanskaar. ...killer attitude. ..loved the face off between sanskaar and durga prasad...clash of the titans. ...

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Hi Dear..
Im in love with sanskar!! his attitudes!!
Manh U protayed in such a way!! loved loved it!! Durgaprasad s keenly observing, seems he has a long way to go with Sanskar!! Cmon laksh as always!!lol!! I loved how sanskar said " You havent changed one bit laksh? still havent picked manners" !! Bang on!!
Loved Ramprasad alot.. how he asked sanskar did he miss family.!! And loved the how jain asked the whereabouts about sanskar during meetin?! lol!!
I loved loved sanskar here..
He missed his mom, sis and even badi maa.. What about swara?? Is she didnt entered in his life?!?!.
plz Update soon..
Eagerly waiting...
It was an Amazing Update dear... 🤗
TC

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Another superb chapter. ..but tht makes me crave fr the next one immediately! !

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varunijaya

@varunijaya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

wow,... the story is different and interesting,... continue soon,...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Hi Sapna..

I loved this chapter, the battle between Sanskaar and DP. I am a major mythos freak, so I imagined this as a battle between Arjun and Drona/ Bhishma. 😊 Very well etched. I'm literally rubbing my hands in glee, imagining the thrust, parry and counter thrust between these two warriors!

I liked the way DP thought to himself, that Sanskaar might be his prodigy, but there were some lessons he'd kept to himself. Why do I have a feeling that Sanskaar would have imbibed some aces of his own, needn't be from DP, but from an even better source, or maybe devised by his own formidable intellect?

I wonder when you're going to let us in on the "incident" which drove Sanskaar away from his family. Looking forward to Swara's and Ragini's entry into the tale, and yes, for immature, impulsive Lakshya to get his comeuppance! 😛