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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Too good

The way you write is lovely

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Amrtina

@Amrtina

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

I kNew it that he will be Sanskar

Very well written

Plz continue sooon

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steffi_angel

@steffi_angel

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Fantastic Update..Just like your previous story, Sanskar is just intriguing. Waiting for the story to unfold...Update soon..😊😊

Edited by steffi_angel - 9 years ago

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

What a fabulous start Sapna..

that thunderstorm part gave a chilling forecast.
and then entered the man himself. Corporate Espionage. how the mighty were slain. errr.. One mighty.
loved the way the young titan pulled the rug beneath the old gun's feet and now is being so supremely sure.

where is the next part already?

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naina

@hp_2006

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Really awesome and interesting update dear Sapna.

Sanskaar's entry was grand..👏

so i am intrigued about what is the reason between the cold war between DP and him

i am eagerly waiting for the upcoming part😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Right now m somewhere btwn the 6th n 7th heaven...just read the 2nd part of Phoenix and now this...simply superb update. ...but pls pls pls update the next part soon!!!

you have made my day...thanks so much ...next update coming up soon 😳 😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -Ros-
Fab update Sapna!
Really liked how you built up the ambience of respect and fascination for both men's arrivals, respectively.

The way Sanskaar came and sat opposite Durga Prasad, with equal authority. Kya entry hai!

Another thing I noticed- Durga Prasad came with his miniature army aka his family, whereas Sanskaar is a lone ranger. The former has so much more to lose in this game than the latter I feel.

Looking forward to the next chapter. 😊
EDIT: What an awesome company name! 😉

🤗 thanks so much Ros for liking this and loving the entries. haha...you have good eye for details, you picked his army vs our Sanky...they do say na, lion hunts alone not in packs 😉

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Anglaise
Hi Dear..
Amazing start.. loved it dear..
I was pretty much sure dat head of vincere ll be one and only sanskar maheshwari!! loved it!! loved sanskar alot!!
loved the way Ramprasad suggested for conselting help from sanskar and the inmediate glare duraprasad given!!
Missed ladies here!!
Intersting!!
Eagerly waiting! Update soon!
TC

thanks sooo much Amie. only sanky can head a company with such a name na 😉

🤗 ladies will come two parts down the line...let Sanky have some more fun right now with his bade papa 😉

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I kinda guessed it!
I love this Sanskaar, he has an attitude! Durga Prasad has a bit of an (read: giant) ego and Ram Prasad's inner thoughts reveal the dynamics in the family!
Is Sanskaar already married to Swara in this story or will he meet her later on? How did the break between Sanskaar and his family happen?
I am very eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Update soon...

🤗 good guess dear 😃 hope you liked his entry though it was expected. i like this sanskar too...i wanted him to final give it back to some well deserving folks 😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: _akaur_
Yuppi!! Sanskaar is here..!!!!!!
I loved the first part of this update...the was Sanskaar enters the office with an attitude which is mind blowing.. and left everyone shocked. 😲...but he camly just went and sat right opposite Durga Prasad Maheshwari...(even he was shocked..😆)..👍🏼
An amazing update...
Continue soon...plzz...waiting...
Thanks for the pm...😃

Aksh..❤️

Hi aksh...thanks so much 🤗

yup! our hero has made an entry finally 😃 and hero has to have toh phod entry 😉