SwaSan SS: Enemy Within - DELETED - Page 10

Hello girl! 😊

I read the prologue and the two chapters. It is really interesting and intriguing yaar. And I like this Sanskar. In fact, I love his attitude. I like the way how you have written about the secret war between Sanskar and his Bade papa. I must say..your words do wonders. It makes us feel things and it makes us to stay connected and hooked. I'm loving the way how you are writing this story.

Good job dear! 😃

P.S: I would like receive PMs for all the updates, please! :)

-Arthy.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Firstly I am sorry that it took me too long to unres. I was too engrossed in the episode tonight and then I had a healthy discussion with my sisters regarding the same.

Just finished reading.

So, Sanskar here has stolen my heart already. He is always the Sanskar I used love in the earlier part of the show. The man with stone heart and ice walls. You have portrayed him with grace here.

Why do I feel Durga Prasad and Sanskar both are going to play the Trojan horse game with each other? Each trying to break in to the other's fortress of secrets?

The resemblance in the student and the masters strategies are wonderfully depicted here, both will use there own as the shield against the other.

Well, let the war begin!

Continue soon!

Originally posted by: _akaur_

Thanks for this amazing update..!!!!👏

I think that Sanskaar has other plans in MM for Durga Prasad...

By the way I liked Sanskaar's company name... Vincere.. as it is different from the others...

Thanks for the pm..😃

Aksh

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

I am going to say it again - I am loving this Sanskaar so much. That attitude, that style... *sigh*

He is playing such a well thought out game. However much Durga Prasad thinks that he can out maneuver Sanskaar he will come to realize that this student has surpassed his teacher!

And what can we say about Lakshya? He is as brash and impulsive as always!

Loved that paragraph at the end where Sanskaar said that his assistant would already be getting his stuff. It showed that Sanskaar has planned ahead and is confident!

For some reason I think Sanskaar is already married to Swara and he will introduce her to the Maheshwaris when they all get home.

Is Ragini bad or good in this fic? Is she married to Lakshya?

Waiting so very impatiently for the next update!

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

I just love your SANSKAAR <3

He already planned to live in MM even before DP planned to keep him close. Brilliant!

SANSKAAR made DP follow him out, already leading & ahead of DP.

This war is gonna be so much fun, which is already started!

Plz update soon & plz do PM me.

Originally posted by: swa291

wow i loved the update and sanskars style
waiting to know what is the real game

Originally posted by: abika

Nice update

Originally posted by: kaku17

Awesome update. ...I am so in love with this sassy sanskaar. ...killer attitude. ..loved the face off between sanskaar and durga prasad...clash of the titans. ...

Originally posted by: Anglaise

Hi Dear..
Im in love with sanskar!! his attitudes!!
Manh U protayed in such a way!! loved loved it!! Durgaprasad s keenly observing, seems he has a long way to go with Sanskar!! Cmon laksh as always!!lol!! I loved how sanskar said " You havent changed one bit laksh? still havent picked manners" !! Bang on!!
Loved Ramprasad alot.. how he asked sanskar did he miss family.!! And loved the how jain asked the whereabouts about sanskar during meetin?! lol!!
I loved loved sanskar here..
He missed his mom, sis and even badi maa.. What about swara?? Is she didnt entered in his life?!?!.
plz Update soon..
Eagerly waiting...
It was an Amazing Update dear... 🤗
TC

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Another superb chapter. ..but tht makes me crave fr the next one immediately! !