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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
Brilliant update!! Thanks for the PM
Uff!! Sanskaar's entry It was brilliantly pictured. DP needs a reality check. Sanskaar needs to show who is the boss 😎 Waiting fr his better half to make an entry.

he is going to show him alright 😳 😃 thanks you liked the update and the entry...next part coming up soon...

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo
Hmm so Sanskar wa the first man from the prologue? Nice though I kindoff expected it...
I'm still very curious about the couple...

Oh l loved the built up to Sanskar's introduction...n spl mention to RP his not-so-loud-for-everyone-to-hear words are funny

Lovely update
Thanks for the pm & Update soon..

Xoxo,
Anya

thanks soon much Anya 😳 RP has his subtle ways of saying a lot more

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Too good
The way you write is lovely

thanks so much for liking my writing style 🤗

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Amrtina
I kNew it that he will be Sanskar
Very well written
Plz continue sooon

hahaha you guessed it right! 👏 😃

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: steffi_angel
Fantastic Update..Just like your previous story, Sanskar is just intriguing. Waiting for the story to unfold...Update soon..😊😊

thanks so much steffi...really glad you liked the previous one and are likely this one too 😳 😃

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
What a fabulous start Sapna..

that thunderstorm part gave a chilling forecast.
and then entered the man himself. Corporate Espionage. how the mighty were slain. errr.. One mighty.
loved the way the young titan pulled the rug beneath the old gun's feet and now is being so supremely sure.

where is the next part already?

Nimmi 🤗

missed you and your angel

and the young titan has just gotten started 😉

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simmi samantara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Awesome ! Really Sanskar who can vincere anything he wants...

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Really awesome and interesting update dear Sapna.
Sanskaar's entry was grand..👏
so i am intrigued about what is the reason between the cold war between DP and him
i am eagerly waiting for the upcoming part😃

thanks so much naina 🤗 really glad you liked it and snake's entry too!

next part coming up shortly 😃

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: simmi12308
Awesome ! Really Sanskar who can vincere anything he wants...

hahaha he can right 😉 😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Firstly I am sorry that it took me too long to unres. I was too engrossed in the episode tonight and then I had a healthy discussion with my sisters regarding the same.

Just finished reading.

So, Sanskar here has stolen my heart already. He is always the Sanskar I used love in the earlier part of the show. The man with stone heart and ice walls. You have portrayed him with grace here.

Why do I feel Durga Prasad and Sanskar both are going to play the Trojan horse game with each other? Each trying to break in to the other's fortress of secrets?

The resemblance in the student and the masters strategies are wonderfully depicted here, both will use there own as the shield against the other.

Well, let the war begin!

Continue soon!

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago