SwaSan SS: Enemy Within - DELETED - Page 8

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Brilliant update!! Thanks for the PM

Uff!! Sanskaar's entry It was brilliantly pictured. DP needs a reality check. Sanskaar needs to show who is the boss 😎 Waiting fr his better half to make an entry.

Originally posted by: xoanyaxo

Hmm so Sanskar wa the first man from the prologue? Nice though I kindoff expected it...

I'm still very curious about the couple...

Oh l loved the built up to Sanskar's introduction...n spl mention to RP his not-so-loud-for-everyone-to-hear words are funny

Lovely update

Thanks for the pm & Update soon..

Xoxo,

Anya

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Too good

The way you write is lovely

Originally posted by: Amrtina

I kNew it that he will be Sanskar

Very well written

Plz continue sooon

Originally posted by: steffi_angel

Fantastic Update..Just like your previous story, Sanskar is just intriguing. Waiting for the story to unfold...Update soon..😊😊

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

What a fabulous start Sapna..

that thunderstorm part gave a chilling forecast.
and then entered the man himself. Corporate Espionage. how the mighty were slain. errr.. One mighty.
loved the way the young titan pulled the rug beneath the old gun's feet and now is being so supremely sure.

where is the next part already?

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Really awesome and interesting update dear Sapna.

Sanskaar's entry was grand..👏

so i am intrigued about what is the reason between the cold war between DP and him

i am eagerly waiting for the upcoming part😃

Originally posted by: simmi12308

Awesome ! Really Sanskar who can vincere anything he wants...