SwaSan SS: Enemy Within - DELETED - Page 11

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Loved it

Originally posted by: varunijaya

wow,... the story is different and interesting,... continue soon,...

Originally posted by: princess_tara

superb

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Sapna..

I loved this chapter, the battle between Sanskaar and DP. I am a major mythos freak, so I imagined this as a battle between Arjun and Drona/ Bhishma. 😊 Very well etched. I'm literally rubbing my hands in glee, imagining the thrust, parry and counter thrust between these two warriors!

I liked the way DP thought to himself, that Sanskaar might be his prodigy, but there were some lessons he'd kept to himself. Why do I have a feeling that Sanskaar would have imbibed some aces of his own, needn't be from DP, but from an even better source, or maybe devised by his own formidable intellect?

I wonder when you're going to let us in on the "incident" which drove Sanskaar away from his family. Looking forward to Swara's and Ragini's entry into the tale, and yes, for immature, impulsive Lakshya to get his comeuppance! 😛

Originally posted by: hp_2006

I am loving this sapna..this one is awesome..

i am impressed by the way sanskaar is outsmarting DP everytime..

Loved the way you portrayed sanskaar in this story..

eagerly waitimg for your next update..

Originally posted by: ..Wunderbar..

Hello girl! 😊

I read the prologue and the two chapters. It is really interesting and intriguing yaar. And I like this Sanskar. In fact, I love his attitude. I like the way how you have written about the secret war between Sanskar and his Bade papa. I must say..your words do wonders. It makes us feel things and it makes us to stay connected and hooked. I'm loving the way how you are writing this story.

Good job dear! 😃

P.S: I would like receive PMs for all the updates, please! :)

-Arthy.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Miss BGM🤣 God Sanskar, how did you even manage that? Just a couple of lines and you irritated hell out of her!😆

'You're him' dialogue was too good too. She doesn't like him because Lakshya doesn't? WEll well Swara, you have a long way to go😳

I really love this whole cold war between Durga and Sanskar, both pros, both sharp and my Trojan horse theory was right⭐️

Continue soon Sapna...I want to read more about Miss BGM🤣🤣 and Mr. SRPM😆

Originally posted by: princess_tara

nyc update