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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

The entry sequence was superb i new it was sanskar so i picturized the whole thing

waiting for next part keep writing

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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Wow. ...this is brilliant. ...I so love corporate rivalry. ..all hail the return of the prodigal son...he has arrived and how...loved it. ..plz do update soon. ..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Very well written Sapna. 😊 the whole intensity of the corporate boardroom battle was well etched. The way Sanskaar strode in to the claim his role in the board meeting 👏👏

Waiting to see how Swara and Ragini fit into this tableau. Thanks for pm and look forward to chapter 2.

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megha jain

@meghaashvikian

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Wowww what an update 😳
How well u describe the boardroom meeting things 👏
I can actually visualise all the scene just bcoz of ur mindblowing
Writing ...
And sanskaar 's entry was fab ...
Loved sanky 's attitude and the way he sat jst opposite to DP ...was aeesome yr ...loved it yr 😳

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: swa291
The entry sequence was superb i new it was sanskar so i picturized the whole thing

waiting for next part keep writing

thanks so much...i was hoping that could some through as i was writing, i mean the visual of his entry...it just felt right and powerful for this sanky 😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very well written Sapna. 😊 the whole intensity of the corporate boardroom battle was well etched. The way Sanskaar strode in to the claim his role in the board meeting 👏👏
Waiting to see how Swara and Ragini fit into this tableau. Thanks for pm and look forward to chapter 2.

thanks so much viji 😃...I just wanted Sanskar to give it back to everyone after what gets thrown at our show wala sanky. there is more to come from him 😳

SwaSan is going to be different in this one for sure...😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: meghaashvikian
Wowww what an update 😳
How well u describe the boardroom meeting things 👏
I can actually visualise all the scene just bcoz of ur mindblowing
Writing ...
And sanskaar 's entry was fab ...
Loved sanky 's attitude and the way he sat jst opposite to DP ...was aeesome yr ...loved it yr 😳

thanks so much ...i am really happy that you could visualise it...sanky is ready to give proper takkar 😆 😳

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: princess_tara
awesome

thanks so much tara 😃 😃

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piccola1

@piccola1

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Love the story so far, Foresight ! 😊The beginning was a mystery, but a Swansanian knows a Sanskaar from a mile ! And so was hooked by the end of the first few paras.😳

But what got me hooked in further, was this Part 2 ! Superbly written and carrying the mystery well into Part 2..great work ! 👏

Loved this Sanskaar, confident, uber cool and with an uber cool Company name to boot ! Liked too, that he smiled at his Dad !⭐️

Someone needs to be pegged down from his pedestal😆, and someone else is going to love doing it !!😆

Looking forward to relishing this !😃

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: kaku17
Wow. ...this is brilliant. ...I so love corporate rivalry. ..all hail the return of the prodigal son...he has arrived and how...loved it. ..plz do update soon. ..

thanks so much Kaku 😃 😳...yup he is back and ready to give it back; power punches 😳 😆 😃

i love a bit of corporate rivalry too...feels classy and sexy 😳

Edited by foresight - 9 years ago