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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: _akaur_
Interesting start...
Waiting for the next part..Plzz do continue soon

I don't who the three people you described are..My first thought was that the first man was Sanskaar...and then the girl was Swara...but she was married so it can't be Swara.
May be it's Annupurna...
These r just my first thoughts as I was reading the story..I know I am wrong and the characters are completely opposite of what I thought 😆..

Thanks for the pm...⭐️

thanks so much for likely it...what is your first name? I am sapna btw.

I hope you like the next one too...and mystery will be revealed in the next one about who some of those ara 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Amrtina
Interesting start
Plz continue soon

thanks so much Amrtina 😳 😃

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Interesting prologue

thanks so much ...i hope you like the next part too! 😃

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: gayu6
Nice start continue soon and pls pm me also

thanks gayu...i have added you to the buddy list so that i can pm you,...hope that was okay?

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
Hi!! Interesting start. I loved it 😊
The first man is meticulous, smart and awesome. I loved the attitude. Is it Sanskaar? The second person is someone who played the games, learnt and moved forward to greener pastures. So my guess is either DP or RP.

Also, do you send out PM? If so,can you add me to your PM list?

thanks so much...i am really glad you liked it...I have added you to the buddy list to help with pm, hope that was okay...

and identities will be revealed in the next one...hope you like it

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Really interesting start dear..what is ur real name
Would like to read more..
Plzz PM me when u update😊

Love,
Naina

thanks so much Naina. 😃

I am Sapna.

And done with the PM 😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

I knew it! Can I dance? Pretty please?

So I was right about the first man and the second couple! Ha ha. I think from SQ you might know my love for board meetings. I adore the part where he takes the seat opposite Durga Prasad. How utterly wonderful update. Please continue soon!

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

I like how you have described Durgaprasad here but his overconfidence sometimes irks me...
And RamPrasad suggesting that they call Sanskaar and ask for his help...
But the prodigal sons returns and he is the one who has attained 49% of Maheshwari group...
Your story is soo intriguing... Waiting to read more

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Sakura24
I knew it! Can I dance? Pretty please?
So I was right about the first man and the second couple! Ha ha. I think from SQ you might know my love for board meetings. I adore the part where he takes the seat opposite Durga Prasad. How utterly wonderful update. Please continue soon!

absolutely...i will join you in dancing 😆 😆

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: manasie23
I like how you have described Durgaprasad here but his overconfidence sometimes irks me...
And RamPrasad suggesting that they call Sanskaar and ask for his help...
But the prodigal sons returns and he is the one who has attained 49% of Maheshwari group...
Your story is soo intriguing... Waiting to read more

thanks so much manasie..and yes the prodigal son had returned...with a bang as far as maheshwaris are concerned 😆 😆

Edited by foresight - 9 years ago