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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Sakura24

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I borrowed a trick or two from your amazing predicting abilities, but I'm nowhere clear here😳
I think I've impressed you enough to gain a PM of the next update huh? pretty please with a cherry on the top!!

PM is done deal...always love to get your thoughts on my chapters...and your advise too...this time the chapters are a lot longer btw 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

V. interesting start! 👍🏼

Y do I get a feel that the guy on the terrace is Sanky? 🤓 Hmm... 😆 Off late all my mystery shws r back frm hiatus n I'm going a lil loony, dun mind! 😆

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hi Dear..
New SS.. Aww.. was waiting for ur work..!
Interesting!! Interesting!!
I guess the adamant guy s sanskar?!
Who d couple?!
loved the prolongue..
Eagerly waiting for next.. Update soon..

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Akshdeep Kaur

@_akaur_

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Interesting start...

Waiting for the next part..Plzz do continue soon

I don't who the three people you described are..My first thought was that the first man was Sanskaar...and then the girl was Swara...but she was married so it can't be Swara.

May be it's Annupurna...

These r just my first thoughts as I was reading the story..I know I am wrong and the characters are completely opposite of what I thought 😆..

Thanks for the pm...⭐️

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gayu6

@gayu6

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Nice start continue soon and pls pm me also

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi!! Interesting start. I loved it 😊

The first man is meticulous, smart and awesome. I loved the attitude. Is it Sanskaar? The second person is someone who played the games, learnt and moved forward to greener pastures. So my guess is either DP or RP.

Also, do you send out PM? If so,can you add me to your PM list?

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naina

@hp_2006

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Really interesting start dear..what is ur real name
Would like to read more..
Plzz PM me when u update😊

Love,
Naina

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
interesting

thanks prithi...i hope you like the next part too 😃

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
V. interesting start! 👍🏼

Y do I get a feel that the guy on the terrace is Sanky? 🤓 Hmm... 😆 Off late all my mystery shws r back frm hiatus n I'm going a lil loony, dun mind! 😆

thanks so much Niki...i like how your mystery brain works 😆...i tend to do the same thing so good to have another one like me 😃

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Anglaise
Hi Dear..
New SS.. Aww.. was waiting for ur work..!
Interesting!! Interesting!!
I guess the adamant guy s sanskar?!
Who d couple?!
loved the prolongue..
Eagerly waiting for next.. Update soon..

Thanks sooo much Amie...i am so glad you found it interesting...hope you like the next one which is coming up in a very short while.