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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: piccola1
Love the story so far, Foresight ! 😊The beginning was a mystery, but a Swansanian knows a Sanskaar from a mile ! And so was hooked by the end of the first few paras.😳
But what got me hooked in further, was this Part 2 ! Superbly written and carrying the mystery well into Part 2..great work ! 👏

Loved this Sanskaar, confident, uber cool and with an uber cool Company name to boot ! Liked too, that he smiled at his Dad !⭐️

Someone needs to be pegged down from his pedestal😆, and someone else is going to love doing it !!😆

Looking forward to relishing this !😃

😆 😆 and i am loving helping that someone take that some else down a peg 😆 😆 he his passing the message through everything including his company name 😳 😆

thanks so much for your lovely lovely comments 🤗

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LUISE

@LUISE

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

it is a great start and looking forward to it

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: LUISE
it is a great start and looking forward to it

thanks Luise. welcome to IF 😃

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Right now m somewhere btwn the 6th n 7th heaven...just read the 2nd part of Phoenix and now this...simply superb update. ...but pls pls pls update the next part soon!!!

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Fab update Sapna!

Really liked how you built up the ambience of respect and fascination for both men's arrivals, respectively.

The way Sanskaar came and sat opposite Durga Prasad, with equal authority. Kya entry hai!

Another thing I noticed- Durga Prasad came with his miniature army aka his family, whereas Sanskaar is a lone ranger. The former has so much more to lose in this game than the latter I feel.

Looking forward to the next chapter. 😊

EDIT: What an awesome company name! 😉

Edited by -Ros- - 9 years ago

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Hi Dear..
Amazing start.. loved it dear..
I was pretty much sure dat head of vincere ll be one and only sanskar maheshwari!! loved it!! loved sanskar alot!!
loved the way Ramprasad suggested for conselting help from sanskar and the inmediate glare duraprasad given!!
Missed ladies here!!
Intersting!!
Eagerly waiting! Update soon!
TC

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

I kinda guessed it!

I love this Sanskaar, he has an attitude! Durga Prasad has a bit of an (read: giant) ego and Ram Prasad's inner thoughts reveal the dynamics in the family!

Is Sanskaar already married to Swara in this story or will he meet her later on? How did the break between Sanskaar and his family happen?

I am very eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Update soon...

Edited by bloomnskyrules - 9 years ago

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Akshdeep Kaur

@_akaur_

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Yuppi!! Sanskaar is here..!!!!!!

I loved the first part of this update...the was Sanskaar enters the office with an attitude which is mind blowing.. and left everyone shocked. 😲...but he camly just went and sat right opposite Durga Prasad Maheshwari...(even he was shocked..😆)..👍🏼

An amazing update...

Continue soon...plzz...waiting...

Thanks for the pm...😃

Aksh..❤️

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Brilliant update!! Thanks for the PM

Uff!! Sanskaar's entry It was brilliantly pictured. DP needs a reality check. Sanskaar needs to show who is the boss 😎 Waiting fr his better half to make an entry.