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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Very well written indeed Saku. 😊 So Sanskaar is confined behind that closed door? 😕 The Ragini--Sanskaar interaction was chilling yet oddly moving; where she confesses she's glad to have someone to talk to, even though that means being glad that someone broke his heart, his spirit, his freedom, and confined him to isolation, the same isolation she too feels.

This whole straitjacket of perfection she has been forced into must be chafing, isn't it? 😊 Wonder what AP has told her to do...Ragini here seems perfectly capable of desperate measures, of conniving as expertly with her serene mask in place. Wonder what Sanskaar would do...

Am confused whether Swara and Sanskaar met when she was eighteen, and if so, wouldn't she realize that she's entering the same house to which he belonged to as well? Guess you'll let us know in chap 3. 😉

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Mansi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Awesome update Sakura

So Ragini is staying in MM

Is she going to take Sanskar's help for getting Lakshya?????.

God knows what plan Annapurna is brewing??????

Swara has already been to the place??????

You keep your readers on the edge...

Fabulous writing skills

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: foresight
wow!!! i haven't read the part yet but i just want to say "yippee!!!!" i get to read two of your SS parts today!! 🥳

You made me happy with your update I decided to return the favor. It's already written halfway, so I have no problems posting😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: princess_tara
SUPERB

Thanks😊

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foresight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

amazing!!! I wonder if Sanskar will know they were talking about swara or will he just try to help someone else not have her fate without knowing it is his shona? i am looking forward to Swara finding this corridor and his door and try to talk to him, not realising her phoenix in right within her grasp...

I loved how you described Ragini...perfect beauty with spider hands...hope she doesnt build a web of deceit this time...for once, i would want ragini to be against AP and prevent history from repeating again.

btw...that entire ragini-sanskar scene was amazing!!!!

sooo much to look forward!! like was it RP who died that that trying to save his son and his son's life? was DP the only one there or was there a 4 person, hidden from everyone, AP

I am just pondering out loud

👏 👏 👏 👏 loved it!!!!

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manasi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Yaayyy I was right I was right... Swara does not love Lakshya... And Lakshya well I just dont like him *period* he is always the reason Ragini turns bad...
And I loved how Ragini poured her feelings out to the unknown third person which must be Sanskaar... I think that just makes her more human...
And so now we have to wait to know what Annapoorna must have told Ragini and also how this third person (Sanskaar) comes in the story...
Hungry for more of your updates... Always

Edited by manasie23 - 10 years ago

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: swa291
ThIs Annapurna is 😡 ..
I think here lakshya saw through Ragini and AnnaPurna too by the look of it.

So swara have come to kolkatha before and if i am not wrong she have a history with maheshwaris too

These days I have loads of grudges against Annapurna

Yes they have a certain very complicated history😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very well written indeed Saku. 😊 So Sanskaar is confined behind that closed door? 😕 The Ragini--Sanskaar interaction was chilling yet oddly moving; where she confesses she's glad to have someone to talk to, even though that means being glad that someone broke his heart, his spirit, his freedom, and confined him to isolation, the same isolation she too feels.
This whole straitjacket of perfection she has been forced into must be chafing, isn't it? 😊 Wonder what AP has told her to do...Ragini here seems perfectly capable of desperate measures, of conniving as expertly with her serene mask in place. Wonder what Sanskaar would do...

Am confused whether Swara and Sanskaar met when she was eighteen, and if so, wouldn't she realize that she's entering the same house to which he belonged to as well? Guess you'll let us know in chap 3. 😉

Viji dear🤗

I think you are starting to grip the meaning hidden behind the simple word 'Phoenix' one has to be reduced to ashes first right?😉

Then Ragini and Sanskar (Did I just accept it is Sanskar behind the door? Oh no, I didn't!) Share a unique relationship here, bittersweet to be exact. I'm glad you liked the dynamics there.

Being perfect is depressing in my opinion.

Swara never met one certain Sanskar Maheshwari. I mean it when I say so. They never met, she never knew Sanskar Maheshwari😊

Chapter three hopefully will entertain you further😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Awesome update Sakura
So Ragini is staying in MM
Is she going to take Sanskar's help for getting Lakshya?????.
God knows what plan Annapurna is brewing??????
Swara has already been to the place??????
You keep your readers on the edge...
Fabulous writing skills
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thanks Mansi😊

I'm tired of writing Ragini Sanskar joint ventures, this time it will be something different😊 Annapurna is real dark here Swara's been to India, not MM. I'll update soon😊