Phoenix SwaSan SS Finale pg40 - Page 8

Originally posted by: chemgirl

My favourite writer is back...i love this...so mysterious...so good n dark a n aura

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Hi 😊 I loved the introductions.

I adore your Swara. Her words in the letter- "I am a bad girl, I know" are struck with me for some reason. Didnt girl on the train say the same too? I thought it will be someone from the past and not Swara 🤔 So she went to seek the phoenix. Will she give the burning phoenix a reason to revive itself or will she burn herself in the process? But this time will she be able to recover from the burns?

Update soon!! All the mystery is making me impatient for more.

Also is Sanskaar the guy on the violin 😳

Originally posted by: manasie23

Okay so is that swara to whom Lakshya had promised to marry??
And also both DurgaPrasad and Annapoorna are scarier in here...
And in Swara's letter to her mother she said she had to find the fate of her pheonix... So who is this pheonix??!
And does she really like Lakshya or is he just a mode to return back to India...
And the guy playing violin was he Sanskaar??

You are so right Sakura you did clear many of my doubts while confusing me all the more😆

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Woww...ur stories are always mesmerising. ..and the beginning chapters make one feel completely lost...but yet compelled to read further n further in order to get more answers till everything starts making sense. So here u reveal another masterpiece in the making! Hats off to u...ur mind is the king or queen of storytellers. ...cant wait fr the subsequent parts

Originally posted by: dimaag

Sakura, the first part is good. You mentioned about the mansion and its history etc. You have casted light upon your characters as well .As a whole the first part is some what not fully like the show with slight changes with your beautiful words here and there 😉
Nice update sakura...looking for more to come soon. And thanks for the PM.. 😛
Love,
Navneeta 👏

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Hmmm.. This seems really interesting to me.. So if I am not wrong, Shona n lucky wants to keep there promises made to each other n Sanskar was the one playing the violin.. but what about that propogue thing?? Its yet to take place?? What incomplete song?? Sanskar fell in love with Swara only kya.. Phoenix here is who.. So many of question are yet not answered.. Sakura.. Update super soon plz :D

Btw,M used to it now but still u have your words leave such deep impact that thr hav not been a moment when I was not looking into the screen with all my mind present while reading !

Originally posted by: anjaan210

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Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Kaash aisa hota aap puri kahani ek hi baar mein likh deti aur main apni jagah se hile bina woh puri pad .khair chodo yeh srrial mein bhi hum swasan scene k khwab dekhte hai aur milta hai patali devi ka bhoot. Waise aap k har din ka update hume bhooto se kai guna pyaara lagta hai. Toh lucky aur swara apne waade nibhane par tule hai. Aur y violin sanskaar hai na. kaash kabhi swara k guitar and swara k guotar ki jugalbandi padhme miil jayee. Kuch bhi ho aapki kahaniya hamesha se pasand aayi hai aur rahengi.

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Superb update...many questions but I'm going to hang onto them and let your story unravel itself. Looking forward to the next chapter.