Phoenix SwaSan SS Finale pg40 - Page 12

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Interesting. Awaiting your next chapter.

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Ooohh...a puzzle yet again. ...i love this jigsaw tho where each chapter gives me new pieces and also fits in some of the old pieces but the complete picture is never ready n im left yearning fr the next chapter asap!!!

Ragini is oh so perfect but never oh so good...

Wht i dont understand is tht if swara doesn't really love laksh why did she fly all the way to india n got ready to meet his family. Both dp n ap will immediately catch on to her indifference even tho laksh hasn't already. ...duh...tho he is pretty perceptive abt the true nature of ragini..

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

It's Awesome Shakura Though Very Mysterious. Bt I Love Mystery & I Know I'm Gonna Love It.

I'm Really Very Curious About SANSKAAR & Your SANSKAAR Is Someone Interesting To Looking Forward To. Waiting For Revealing & Swara-SANSKAAR Coming Face to Face.

You Are An Amazing Writer, There's No Doubt About It :)

Plz Update Soon - Can't Wait! & Plz Do PM Me.

Btw Thnx For Your Mysterious Elixir ;)

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Hmm!! So Swara either knew Maheshwaris or she was close to someone who knew them. I wonder if there is a common person connecting Swara and Sanskaar.

I'm glad that Swara doesnt love Laksh. And Laksh seems to be the reason for Ragini's heartbreak. He gave her the final push and burned her dreams, now she will burn him. AP and Laksh do know what she is capable of.

I loved the conversation between Ragini and Sanskaar. They are in the same position, but what path they will choose to come out of it will be interesting.

saku.. reading all parts now.. I can't stand with swara here.. she is not loving laksh confused about her feelings but agree to marry him .. she knows that laksh ditched ragini.. in all your other stories and in the show I love swara.. but here I can't. . why did she leave her mom? for her mom she is the world. . ... ragini sleepwalking. . I found it really funny. . and annapoorna just like the show.. . excellent piece of writing as always. . continue soon dear

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hey sakura 😛 ,
The way u have written the emotions carried on by ragini and how she ended up at maheshwari mansion and her relationship having an emotional turmoil in all was felt real. Yeah! It seems so realistic. 😲
Sanskar is yet to come into the main screens and I wonder what happened to him? But it's ok. I think when swara was 18 and came to India for the first time she met sanskar 🥱.
Your update was an amazing one , sakura. I'm so happy to see you have finally been obsessed with swasan 😆 and distressed with that of the current daayan track ,so am I 😡. I liked especially that concerned swara about ragini even if she is not her sister or should I say she is a complete stranger for her. But still she understands her feelings.
Update soon sakura. And thanks for the PM. 👏

Yours dimaag 😉

Originally posted by: harshsriti

saku.. reading all parts now.. I can't stand with swara here.. she is not loving laksh confused about her feelings but agree to marry him .. she knows that laksh ditched ragini.. in all your other stories and in the show I love swara.. but here I can't. . why did she leave her mom? for her mom she is the world. . ... ragini sleepwalking. . I found it really funny. . and annapoorna just like the show.. . excellent piece of writing as always. . continue soon dear

Oh my...marry laksh!!! Nahi!!! Yeh sunne se pehle mere kaan behre kyun nahi ho gaye!! But how n why! !

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Oh my...marry laksh!!! Nahi!!! Yeh sunne se pehle mere kaan behre kyun nahi ho gaye!! But how n why! !