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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

amazing!!! I wonder if Sanskar will know they were talking about swara or will he just try to help someone else not have her fate without knowing it is his shona? i am looking forward to Swara finding this corridor and his door and try to talk to him, not realising her phoenix in right within her grasp...


I loved how you described Ragini...perfect beauty with spider hands...hope she doesnt build a web of deceit this time...for once, i would want ragini to be against AP and prevent history from repeating again.

btw...that entire ragini-sanskar scene was amazing!!!!

sooo much to look forward!! like was it RP who died that that trying to save his son and his son's life? was DP the only one there or was there a 4 person, hidden from everyone, AP

I am just pondering out loud


👏 👏 👏 👏 loved it!!!!

Hi Sapna!
You want her to talk to him through the door? Will you be disappointed if the door can be opened?
Thanks, I have nice things planed for Ragini, but her going against Annapurna is something I cannot imagine at the moment. She's too timid for that don't you think?
Ram Prasad? Good one. Hmm interesting😉 Anyway it is always a pleasure to read your thoughts!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

Yaayyy I was right I was right... Swara does not love Lakshya... And Lakshya well I just dont like him *period* he is always the reason Ragini turns bad...
And I loved how Ragini poured her feelings out to the unknown third person which must be Sanskaar... I think that just makes her more human...
And so now we have to wait to know what Annapoorna must have told Ragini and also how this third person (Sanskaar) comes in the story...
Hungry for more of your updates... Always

I can't bring myself to call Swara...Lakshya interaction love still. Might try to in future but at the moment, blah...never!!
Ragini is always tied to him isn't she? Her cause of every decision.
I have a different path planned for her this time, which requires her to be more human.
I'll update soon. Thanks for the lovely words😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasankar

hmm...

so swara apparently does have some history with maheshwaris.


and she certainly does not like laksh much.

laksh n AP certainly do not think ragini is all that great.

loved the sangini convo...and sanky is confined there??:(((thats how they dealt with his love.

swara cannot have met sanky when she was eighteen can she? or maybe she saw that incident happening with no idea as to... 😕 chodo. reveal later.😛...

I think you're on the right track but wrong train😉 that's all I'm saying tonight😊
She likes him alright, but...we're talking about love right? Ragini, I think no one trusts her angle face. Confined person...Is there a point of denying now? I almost admitted this twice already.
Swara did not meet Sanskar, they never met. But you'll know soon😊
Sakura24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Sapna!
You want her to talk to him through the door? Will you be disappointed if the door can be opened?
Thanks, I have nice things planed for Ragini, but her going against Annapurna is something I cannot imagine at the moment. She's too timid for that don't you think?
Ram Prasad? Good one. Hmm interesting😉 Anyway it is always a pleasure to read your thoughts!


I would be thrilled to have them talk face to face...i am liking your maheshwari house

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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting. Awaiting your next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ooohh...a puzzle yet again. ...i love this jigsaw tho where each chapter gives me new pieces and also fits in some of the old pieces but the complete picture is never ready n im left yearning fr the next chapter asap!!!
Ragini is oh so perfect but never oh so good...

Wht i dont understand is tht if swara doesn't really love laksh why did she fly all the way to india n got ready to meet his family. Both dp n ap will immediately catch on to her indifference even tho laksh hasn't already. ...duh...tho he is pretty perceptive abt the true nature of ragini..
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's Awesome Shakura Though Very Mysterious. Bt I Love Mystery & I Know I'm Gonna Love It.
I'm Really Very Curious About SANSKAAR & Your SANSKAAR Is Someone Interesting To Looking Forward To. Waiting For Revealing & Swara-SANSKAAR Coming Face to Face.
You Are An Amazing Writer, There's No Doubt About It :)
Plz Update Soon - Can't Wait! & Plz Do PM Me.
Btw Thnx For Your Mysterious Elixir ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmm!! So Swara either knew Maheshwaris or she was close to someone who knew them. I wonder if there is a common person connecting Swara and Sanskaar.

I'm glad that Swara doesnt love Laksh. And Laksh seems to be the reason for Ragini's heartbreak. He gave her the final push and burned her dreams, now she will burn him. AP and Laksh do know what she is capable of.

I loved the conversation between Ragini and Sanskaar. They are in the same position, but what path they will choose to come out of it will be interesting.
Edited by moonstonespirit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey sakura 😛 ,
The way u have written the emotions carried on by ragini and how she ended up at maheshwari mansion and her relationship having an emotional turmoil in all was felt real. Yeah! It seems so realistic. 😲
Sanskar is yet to come into the main screens and I wonder what happened to him? But it's ok. I think when swara was 18 and came to India for the first time she met sanskar 🥱.
Your update was an amazing one , sakura. I'm so happy to see you have finally been obsessed with swasan 😆 and distressed with that of the current daayan track ,so am I 😡. I liked especially that concerned swara about ragini even if she is not her sister or should I say she is a complete stranger for her. But still she understands her feelings.
Update soon sakura. And thanks for the PM. 👏

Yours dimaag 😉
Edited by dimaag - 9 years ago

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