PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#761

Naina wow what an awesome update...

Loved it...super spoilt and it was so long...

Wow both still fighting there feelings...

Hurt and angry of having lost each other...

Swara still denying here feelings and poor lakhs believing he loves her too but not sure...

My favourite part was the end were he walks away leaving Swara to wonder what she feels and letting her decided what she had to say...

The near kiss was too good...but I wonder what name was left in Swara mehndi and of she even has looked at it...haha was nice to see her get jealous of kavita at least she realised what sanskaar feels...

Cannot wait for next update and please pm me...

Razia

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sush

@sushups

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#762

Oh wow... That was awesome... Do continue soon

Swara has got the glimpse of her life as Zara... But y is sanskar still not effected that way till now even though he has been called as pratham????? N lakshya kind of convinced himself to take swara in his life not like the craving he felt for Zara in his previous life or is it he has more affection for Ragini than swara

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#763

Awesome update

The swalak scenes and their proposal sequence,it was a shock for me.

I just wished sanskar call laksh, but the reactions of sanskar was heart touching.

He was irate by swara's behavior.

When swara will realize her feelings towards sanskar.

Waiting for your next update.

Thanks for the pm

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#764

Res

Unressing...

Really sry dear 4 unressin dis much late..

I thought I had already unressed it...

Fabulous update dear...Lvd it so much...

A long update filled of so much emotions...

Pain, Love and separation...U portrayed it damn awesumly dear...

Lvd d update vry vry much...Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Update was so suprb...By breaking sanskaar's heart, Swara proposed Laksh..

Sanskaar heard evrythng...I lvd d way u explained d mental state of sanaskaar..

Sanskaar s totally broken n shattered...But he himslf kpt quiet..

Laksh was not sure abt his feelings..Phir bhi usne swara klye ha khdiya..

Swara s so much happy 4 her relationship with Laksh..

Nainu dear,Wt 2 say yaar?? U r awesum n perfectly penned

Sanskaar started avoiding swara..Aur kr bhi kya kr sktha he???

Swara s also feelin hurt on his behaviour...Seeing him vid Kavitha make her feel bad...Bt she also not sure abt her feelings...

Sanskaar admirin swara in saree...Kavitha clarified vid swara regarding her relationship vid laksh..Kavitha s vry much hpy 4 swalak..

Den swasan moments on dance floor na so suprb...

There also sanskaar tryin 2 maintain a distance vid swara...

She also feeling vry bad on his ignorance...😭😭

D momnts on d terrace was na mindblowing...Hw perfectly u written dear?

Swasan talks was so suprb...Sanskaar givin d bracelet 2 swara bck...

Sanskaar s holding back his emotions vry difficultely..

Lekin swara use jaane hi nhi de rhi he...She s holdin him bck...

Poor sanskaar..Feelin vry vry bad 4 sanskaar...

As alwys fantastic update nainu dear..U rckd it..

Do continue...

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#765

Naina dear this was awesome

swara confessed her feelings to laksh

the best part in that confession was the way you showed moon hiding behind the clouds

laskh said yes but it seemed he thought so

kavita insecure making sure there is nothing between swasan

swara confronting sanskar

both become vulnerable when with each other

waiting for the next

thanks for the pm

ritika

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sweetheart999

@sweetheart999

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#766

Omg swara oroposed lakshya and he accepted

Loved the swasan romance

Thanks for the pm

Keep updating

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#767

Finally got to comment Naina!
The update was amazing as usual!
I thoroughly loved it.
So Swara confessed!! Idiot!
Anyways the SwaSan moments were amazing and I loved them
Thanks for the PM

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#768

Un-Res on Page 100, Nainu...

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Anglaise

@Anglaise

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#769

wow Naina.. Superb superb superb dear!! Omg their dance sequence was mesmerising. I couldnt help but to giggle. Very well written. But Why swara why?! Why you proposed lakshya.?! U hurted me! But chill I bleive you der must be somthing cooking in your brain!!
Cmon sanskar do avoid swara, let your gal realise your value! Oh naina you have been doing an amazin job. Im in lov with the way our zaara and prathan progessng. cheers lady🤗🤗..
Do update soon.. Take care😳

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Robia Yousaf

@robiayousaf

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#770

one word for this update is AWESOM👏.fill with passion,intensity,anguish and tint of jealousy.Swara propose laksh is from guilt she feel about Kavita.Sanskar as much try to avoid Swara but he couldn't and sam ewith Swara,sshe tried to resist but can't humara hero hai hi aisa HOT😳.just love terrace scene.intense and passionate one.thanks for the PM dear

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