PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow naina chechi loved the entire update. After tat act she went to terrace with laksh n sanskar too followed them. Finally she proposed him n sanskar can't bear this so he left. Bt because of sanskar proposal she proposed laksh? Bt he s nt sure of his feelings. Bt still he accepted. So kavitha finally wen came to knw abt their love she became normal with swara. And at night when she went in search of her bracelet she saw sanskar standing there where she n laksh was standing before. He gave her bracelet. And wen he was abt to go he stopped him n asked abt his cold behaviour towards her. Soon everything ll be fine between them

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update...

awww swara's confusion... poor sanskar is heartbroken...

luved it..

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common yaara uprate it n make me happy...warna floods as jaenge

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Ardhanarishwara

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Loved the concept..just want to ask is it only about SwaSanLak.will there be Ragya too?

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Hello all,
Thank you sooo much my dear readers, for your love and support. Your comments and likes mean a lot to me. I love you all 🤗 Here is the next update.

PART 11

Sanskaar's eyes travelled from her eyes to her parted lips, and as Swara watched, his eyes were filled with molten desire for her. Swara's felt her underbelly clench with desire and her eyes too were hooded with raw yearning. Sanskaar was slowly bringing his lips down to hers, and Swara closed her eyes in anticipation. But just at that moment, he remembered Swara's words to Lakshya.
"I love you, Lakshya..!
Main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon..Jab se karti hoon, tab se main 15 saal ki thi.."
Suddenly, Sanskaar withdrew his face and stepped back with utmost contempt. Swara opened her eyes, when she felt suddenly deprived of his closeness. It was then that Swara was aware of her condition, her black net saree was clinging to her body like a second skin and she felt highly conscious about her appearance. Sanskaar felt awkward at once and looked away instantly. But he removed his coat and held it out to her, without looking again. Swara quietly took it from him and wore it around her drenched body.
Thankfully, no one saw them as they walked down the steps in silence, Sanskaar in the front and Swara at a certain distance behind him. As they reached the foot of the stairs, Sanskaar turned towards the direction of his bedroom, without uttering another word and Swara watched him go with forlorn eyes.
As soon as she reached her bedroom, she slowly removed his coat and draped it around the back of a chair, and then proceeded towards the dressing room. But as she passed the large ornate mirror, she stopped and gazed at her reflection. The Swara, whom she saw now, looked so different and lovelorn. Her kohl-lined eyes were exuding a dull and lifeless look, which not at all befitted the face a of a girl who was supposed to be dreaming about Lakshya -- the person who had happily accepted her proposal of unending love to him.
Her thoughts went back to the terrace, to the moment when she thought Mr.Maheshwari was going to kiss her. "Ohh God..! What had happened to me, then..? Why did I close my eyes in anticipation, while his lips were so close to mine..!", she thought bitterly and a lone tear escaped her left eye. As it rolled down her soft cheek, she slowly wiped it with her palm, and then turned away, unable to face herself. She shut her eyes tightly and thought again, "I refused his proposal in the morning, saying that I loved only Lakshya and some minutes before at the terrace, I was going to...(she opened her eyes with shock) Oh no..! Kya soch rahe honge woh mere baare mein..? (tears filled her eyes)hey bhagwaan..!! yeh sab mere saath hi kyun ho raha hain.. (and she sobs softly) Main toh Lakshya se pyaar karti hoon na..Par jab bhi main Mr. Maheshwari ke saath hoti hoon toh, apne aap ko kyun kho baithti hoon..? Why does he affect me so much..?!"
Swara was not at all able to find an answer to her question, but she was unaware of the fact that her heart was letting her know the answer through her feelings, which she was trying to suppress with all her might, with her never ending rational thoughts.
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Meanwhile, inside his bedroom, Sanskaar was reclining on his window side couch, and he was gazing at the moon through the open window. This helped him a lot, since he could feel Swara's presence beside him, but it caused a sad smile to form on his lips, since he knew that she loved someone else, not him.
But what puzzled him the most was, the raw emotions he saw in her eyes, whenever he went close to her. And tonight, when he was about to kiss her, she had been so vulnerable, and he wondered right now that, if he had indeed went ahead with the kiss, what would have happened.
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Swara now lay in her bed, clad in her nightdress and hugging a pillow for comfort. She thought, " Now there is only one more day left..After that, I won't be seeing Mr. Maheshwari again in my life..Uske baad main apne raaste Mumbai aur woh apne raaste Kolkata chale jaayenge..Tab tak kuch bhi karke mujhe khud ko sambhaalni padegi.."
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With his eyes still on the moon, he thought, " Kal Uttara ki shaadi hain..Aur uske baad, Swara Mumbai chali jayegi aur main Kolkata.."
His heart twisted at the mere thought and he closed his eyes for a moment. Then he thought again, " Kal main ek aur baar Swara se baat karne ki koshish zaroor karoonga..Just to make sure of her feelings for me.."
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The wedding day dawned bright and clear, much to the happiness of both the bride's and groom's families. The air itself was filled with a euphoric feeling, which only a wedding only could provide.
Swara and Lakshya worked hard from dawn to dusk with their team, monitoring everything, and instructing everyone around by means of walkie talkies. But in spite of all that, some last-minute adjustments also had to be done and they took care of that too.
By evening, the haveli itself was decked up like a beautiful bride. It looked resplendent with fairy lights, attractive flower decorations, multi coloured draperies and mirror disc curtains, all of them tastefully done. The mandap, elaborately set for the wedding, looked equally grand and splendid.
Sanskaar had been away in his Study all the while, he had some important international video conference calls to make and this provided to be an excellent excuse to be away from the wedding preparations. No one disturbed him and he got a lot of time to think over his action plan.
Swara had been unintentionally hoping to bump into him sometime around, the whole day, but nothing of that sort happened. He was nowhere to be seen and she began to wonder why it was so. She shrugged off such thoughts, trying to believe that it was for the best. The least she saw of him, the better it would be for her.
Finally it was time for her to get ready and Swara proceeded towards her room. As she passed the door of his Study, her curious eyes couldn't help it and they cast a look inside the room, but the room seemed to be empty, after all. Swara assumed that he would have gone to get ready for the wedding function and she walked along the hallway leading to her bedroom.
She walked inside the room and locked it securely from inside. Just as she turned around, she was shocked to see him sitting on the chair, waiting for her. Swara's eyes were widened in shock, but no sound came out of her mouth. Sanskaar was gazing at her, rather intently. She was wearing a pair of jeans and a green colour sleeveless kurta with red embroidery work along the neckline and arm line. There were some smudges of dirt in her dress and also along her cheeks and neck, as a result of working really hard, all the day. In spite of all that, he still thought that she looked really pretty.
Sa: (serious tone) Swara...If you want, you can keep the door open, that is, if you don't feel safe with me.. It's just that, I wanted to talk to you and so I was waiting for you..
Swara cast a look at the now locked door, but still she didn't make any move to unlock it, she waited for him to speak. Slowly, Sanskaar stood up from the chair and walked towards her. He stopped right in front of her, and looking intently into her beautiful doe-like eyes, he began,
Sa: Swara..Mujhe pata hain ke tum Lakshya se bahut pyaar karti thi..
Sw: (hastily and defiantly) Aur ab bhi karti hoon, Mr.Maheshwari..
But Sanskaar held up his hand, signaling her to let him finish, first, and continued.
Sa: Par tumhein nahin lagta ki, tum mujhse milne ke baad kuch badal si gayi ho..? (sharp look)
Sw: (gasps) Kya matlab..?
Sanskaar moved closer to her and Swara flinched a little bit.
Sa: When I come close to you like this, don't you feel anything for me, Swara..?
Sanskaar looked into her face with love filled eyes and Swara's heart beats began to race. She looked into his eyes, intently and answered, feeling afraid of herself.
Sw: N-Nahin..
Sanskaar slowly raised his hand and using his thumb, he rubbed away the smudge of dirt on her cheek, carefully.
Sa: (whispers hoarsely into her face) Main tumhein jab choo leta hoon, toh tab bhi tumhein kuch nahin hota Swara..?
Swara closed her eyes, as a shiver ran through her body and she parted her mouth with a gasp.
Sw: (slowly whispers) Please, Mr.Maheshwari...don't... do this... to me..
Sanskaar slowly placed his arms around her narrow waist and tilted his head a bit and placed a soft kiss on her cheek. He could feel her slightly squirm in his hold, and then he whispered into her ear, softly
Sa: Ab bhi nahin, Swara..?
Swara opened her eyes and gasped for breath, quite audibly. Quickly, she distanced herself from his hold, slightly pushing him away in the process. She looked straight into his eyes and, said,
Sw: (confident voice) Mr. Maheshwari, please leave from here..
But Sanskaar was not ready to go, he wanted his answers.
Sa: (intense look) I will surely go, Swara..But only after you answer my questions..
Swara realized that Sanskaar was not going to budge, she glared at him with a scorching gaze as uncertainty and fury bubbled inside her.
Sw: (impatiently sighs) Fine then..you stay here..! I am going..
She said stiffly and then turned toward the door. But Sanskaar was quick for her, he caught hold of her shoulders and shoved her against the wall, in a clean move. She was too much shocked to yell at him and so she simply glared at him.
Sa: (slowly and clearly emphasizing each word) Tum.. kahin... nahin..jaa sakti..Samjhi tum..?!!
His eyes were blazing as if they had caught fire, and they met her eyes, defiantly. But just at that moment there was a loud knock on the door. Both of them were startled, and their eyes were on the door. And a moment later, they heard Kavita's voice.
Ka: Swara..tum tayar hogayi kya..? Darwaaza kholo naa, please..
Sw: (loudly) Abhi aati hoon, Kavita M'am..Ek minute, deejiye..
And then she turned towards Sanskaar, with pleading eyes, which began to slowly fill with tears.
Sw: (helpless voice) Ab hum kya karenge, Mr. Maheshwari..?
Sanskaar felt really bad, when he saw her tears, so he took off his hands from her shoulders and looked around for a place to hide. He noticed the door to the dressing room and went over to hide inside.
Swara went toward the door and opened it. Kavita was standing there, looking really pretty in an orange and pink coloured designer lehenga.
Ka: (with her hand on her hip) Kaisi lag rahi hoon main..? (raises an eyebrow with a smile)
Swara tried to smile, inspite of her worries.
Sw: You are looking really beautiful, M'am..!!
Ka: Acha woh sab chodo..actually, I came here to see your dress.. Par tum ab tak tayar nahin hui..??
Sw: Woh..M'am..actually..
Kavita entered inside the room and Swara was highly tensed, for a moment. But Kavita sat down on the chair in her room and spoke in a cheerful voice,
Ka: Teek hain..Teek hain..Main wait karoongi yahan baithke..Tum wahan dressing room mein jaake ready ho jaao..
Swara was shocked at her words and stared at her with an open mouth.
Ka: Arre baba..Tumne koi bhoot dekh li hain kya..? Jaao na..
Swara nodded quietly and proceeded towards the dressing room with staggering footsteps. Once she reached inside the dressing room, she closed the door, behind her. The dressing room was a small room with a wardrobe and a mirror. Sanskaar was standing there with wide eyes and an apologetic expression.
Sa: (low voice) I am sorry Swara..But, I promise you that I will turn around and keep my eyes closed, while you are changing..
Swara looked into his eyes with frightened eyes, but she nodded in agreement, she felt that she could trust him after all. With a polite nod, Sanskaar turned away from her facing the plain wall on the opposite side. Gathering her hair up, she tied it into a loose bun, and then went over to the built in wardrobe to take out her dress.

She could see Sanskaar's back clearly in the mirror while she started to remove her jeans. He was standing there as still as a statue, not even making a wrong move to break his promise to her. Swara slipped into her orange lehenga and zipped it up and tied its dori securely. And then she raised the hem of her kurti keeping her eyes fixed at Sanskaar, and raised it edges up till her neck and removed it off. She knew that she had to remove her upper innerwear in order to wear the padded choli, which had a deep back neck. She began to feel rather uncomfortable to be in a semi-clothed state in that small room, with Mr.Maheshwari. But she had no choice, Kavita was waiting for her.
Without thinking any more, Swara unhooked her innerwear and removed it in haste. She inserted her arms through the armholes of the sleeveless choli and secured it in place around her upper body. And then she heaved a sigh of relief and she tried to hook it securely at the back. But with her frantic hand movements, to fasten the hook as fast as possible, the shocking thing which happened was that the hook's clasp came out of the fabric.
Sw: (gasps) Oh nooo..!
Sa: (without turning, in a low voice) Kya hua, Swara..?!
Sw: (whispers back, frantically) Kuch nahin..Please, don't turn..
Swara thought, " Ab main kya karoon?", just then she thought about Kavita, " Haan..I will ask her to secure the blouse opening with a safety pin.." Swara took a safety pin out of a box and turned toward the door. Just at that moment, Kavita received a phone call from Annapurna.
Ka: Haan Aunty ji..Kya..? Haan haan.. main abhi aayi..!
She disconnected the call and she yelled out to Swara.
Ka: Sorry yaar, Swara, I have to go now..I will see your dress later..Bye..
And she ran out of the room in haste. Swara let out a helpless sigh and she turned towards her sole resort, who was standing with his back facing her.
Sw: (pleading voice) Mr.Maheshwari..can you help me, please..?
Sa: Kya main ab palat sakta hoon..?
Sw: (softly) Haan..!
Sanskaar turned towards her and he forgot to breathe for a moment. She simply dazzled in that beautiful lehenga, even without any makeup or ornaments.
A wave of desire emanated from his eyes and she was taken aback, feeling its intensity. Her knees threatened to give away and Swara looked away, in haste.
Sw: (softly) Woh..Mr.Maheshwari..
Remembering that she had been asking for his help, Sanskaar asked,
Sa: You needed some help, right..?
Swara had momentarily forgotten about it and she regained her senses.
Sw: (embarassed tone) Haan..Woh..Can you please pin the ends of my choli opening, together.
She held out the safety pin to him and he gazed at it, feeling shocked.
Sw: (hurt face) My hook got damaged..(hastily adds) Main Kavita M'am se madat lene waali thi, par woh toh chali gayi..Ab main aise toh nahin baahar jaa sakti na..
Sanskaar knew that she was in a dilemma and badly needed his help, and so he didn't want to tease her right then.
Sa: (nods, with a serious face) Teek hain..Turn around..
Swara turned around like a meek little girl, but she was dreading his closeness. Her breathing pace turned into a rapid one, and she closed her eyes feeling tensed.
Sanskaar's eyes were not prepared for the view of her smooth and creamy back, which lay beautifully bare, except for the thin piece of fabric which he had to fasten together with the safety pin. He took in a deep breath and closed his eyes for a moment, to gather reigning control over his raging hormones. And then he had an idea, he reached for her hair, and loosened her bun, making her long and curly dark hair cascade over her bare back, like an opaque curtain.
Then he turned his gaze towards the blouse opening and when his fingers grasped its two edges together. His fingertips grazed her bare skin and Swara could feel a hundred butterflies dancing inside her tummy. But Sanskaar's full attention was on his job of fastening the safety pin securely to the fabric ends.
Sa: Yeh lo, Swara.. Kaam ho gaya..
Swara opened her eyes and she looked at him through the mirror. At the same instant, Sanskaar also looked at her face and their eyes locked with each other.
Sw: (with sincerely grateful eyes, softly says) Thank you..
Sa: (nods with a serious face, into the mirror) Swara..tum jaldi se tayar ho jaao..Main bhi ready hone jaa raha hoon..
Sw: (nods meekly, into the mirror) Jee..
Sanskaar opened the dressing room door from inside, got out and walked a few steps into the main bed room. But then, he turned back, as if remembering something.
Sa: Aur haan..leave your hair open..Samjhi tum..There is no need to flaunt your backless look to everyone else..
Swara gazed at him with and open mouth and widened eyes, and then she blushed to a shade of deep crimson, when his real implication sunk in.
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The wedding ceremony was grand and after the Bidaai ritual, now it was time for the "Shaadi Mubarak" Team to go back to Mumbai. Lakshya and Swara approached Sanskaar, Kavita and Annapurna to bid farewell to the family.
Lakshya and Swara greeted Annapurna by joining their hands in a namaste.
Sw: Hum chalte hain, M'am..Bahut khushi hui aap logon ke liye kaam karke..(wide smile)
Annapurna placed her palm on Swara's head and patted her fondly.
An: Humein bhi, Swara...(looks at Lakshya)...Lakshya, Itni badiya shaadi humne aaj tak nahin dekhi..Aap logon ne bahut badiya kaam kiya hain..
La: (nods politely)Thank you so much M'am..!(smiles wide)
Lakshya then shook hands with Sanskaar and then Kavita. Swara too shook hands with Kavita, but then she hugged Swara with a sad face.
Ka: I will miss you, Swara..Tum kitni achi ho..!
Sanskaar could feel tears stinging his eyes, as he stood there, silently watching Swara. Swara, who was avoiding his eyes till now, turned towards him and held out her hand to Sanskaar. Their hands clasped each other and Sanskaar spoke to her with a heavy heart.
Sa: Ok Swara..Thank you so much..(sincere expression)
Words failed her as she gazed into the depth of his sad eyes, slowly she could feel her eyes filling with tears too. But then she had to be professional now.
Sw: (chokes) It was my pleasure to work for you, Sir..Thank you..(feeble smile)
Lakshya's voice brought them to their senses.
La: Chale, Swara..(smiles)
Sw: (turns to him and nods) Haan, Lakshya..
As she slowly walked away with Lakshya to join their team, Sanskaar gazed at her thinking, " Mere sawaalon ka jawaab diye bagair tum jaa rahi ho, Swara.."
Swara felt as if someone was calling out to her and she turned back, instantly. She saw him standing there and looking at her as if he had lost his everything. The blank look in his eyes was heart wrenching to watch and she turned back and walked away hastily, following Lakshya.
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The following Saturday, Swara was having dinner with Sharmishta and Shekhar. Ragini was not at home, since she had gone away to Delhi for a training camp. She would be back only after one month and she had been gone even before Swara returned home from Udaipur.
Sw: (sadly) Baba..Ragini ke bina yeh ghar bahut soona lag raha hain na..I really miss her..!
She: (nods) Haan, beta..me too..
He then turned to Sharmishta and secretly signaled her to talk to Swara. Sharmishta nodded at him and turned to Swara.
Sha: Swara..Hum dono tujhse kuch baat karna chaahte hain..Teri shaadi ke baare mein..Tu ab 23 saal ki ho gayi hain...
Before she even realized the words were out of her mouth.
Sw: Maa main shaadi karoongi..Par sirf Lakshya se..!
Sharmishta and Shekhar were looking at her with shocked eyes.
She: Beta..Kya Lakshya aur tu..?
Sw: Haan Baba..we love each other..
Sharmishta was gazing at Shekhar and Swara with a worrisome face, but then to her surprise, his face broke into a wide grin.
She: (looks at Sharmishta) Yeh baat sunke Ram bahut khush ho jayega..!
Sha: Par, Shekhar..aap itne yakeen ke saath kaise keh sakte hain..?
She: (smiles) Woh issliye Sharmishta, kyun ki Ram aur Sujata ko humari beti bahut pasand hain..Aur woh humesha mujhse kehta tha ke Swara aur Lakshya ek doosre se bagair nahin reh sakte, issliye dono ke shaadi bhi kara lete hain..(laughs) Main abhi yeh khush kabri usse deke aata hoon..
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Minutes later, Shekhar was back and he was accompanied by Ramprasad, Sujata and Lakshya. Sujata came and hugged Sharmishta with a wide smile.
Su: Sharmishta..Tumhein nahin pata ke main yeh baat sunke kitni khush hoon..!
Sh: (smiles) Main bhi..Sujata..!
Lakshya took ashirwad from Sharmishta and he looked at Swara with a smiling face. Swara went forward and took aashirwaad from Ramprasad and Sujata too.
Rm: Ab dekho Shekhar..Mujhe lagta hain ke yeh shaadi jald se jald honi chaahiye..Pandit ji ko phone karte hain..
She: Haan, Ram..
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Their engagement date was fixed on the coming Sunday and the wedding date was fixed on a date after one month, so that Ragini could also attend the function.
Some minutes later, Swara and Lakshya were standing together in the balcony of Swara's room. She noticed that Lakshya was silent than usual.
Sw: Sab kuch teek hain na Lakshya..?
La: (turns to her) Tumhein nahin lagta Swara ke sab kuch bahut jaldi jaldi ho raha hain..!
Sw: (frowns) Haan..Par it's ok na, Lakshya..Kabhi na kabhi yeh toh hona hi tha..Aur waise bhi..I am 23 now..Maa was talking about getting me married, while we were having dinner..Aur tabhi meri muh se nikal gayi, humare relationship ke baare mein..Tumhein pata hain na Lakshya, ke main sirf tumse shaadi karna chaahti hoon..
Lakshya noticed a hurt expression cross her eyes and he felt bad instantly. He cupped her face in his hands and looked into her eyes with a soft expression.
La: Swaraa..Main tumhein hurt karna nahin chaahta tha..It's just that..I am only 23 now..Hum do- teen saal toh wait kar sakte the na, iss shaadi ke liye..!
Sw: (nods) Haan..you are right, Lakshya..Par ab hum kuch nahin kar sakte..Our parents have already decided..
La: (looks away impatiently) Yeh log bhi na..! Khair..Ab kya kare..(lets out a deep sigh) Lets move ahead with this..
Sw: (hugs him) Thank you, Lakshya..! I love you..!
La: (smiles) I love you too, Swara..! Ok ab main ghar chala jaata hoon, (kisses her forehead)Goodnight, Swara..
Sw: Goodnight, Lakshya..!
Swara stayed at the balcony itself, and Lakshya went off. Smiling, she raised her eyes and gazed at the half circle shaped moon. But then her expression changed, her thoughts getting replaced by a strange empty feeling, she felt as if she missed him a lot. -- she badly wanted Sanskaar Maheshwari's presence beside her.
But then she reminded herself, "Main nahin soch sakti unke baare mein.." She turned away from the moon and went inside, hastily.
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End of PART 11
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A big thank you for updating seriously thanks. 😊
Now coming to update
Update was superb really 👏
Swasan scene was lovely 😳
But now i am angry on swara 😡 why now she is confused.
I am really felling bad for sanskar 😭
Swalak marriage no swalak please
Update soon please

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What an ultra intense, ultra passionate, dreamy and electrifying Chapter 11, Nainu my dear friend...🤗 🤗 🤗 You have made us all completely addicted to your chapters my dear, I keep pining and yearning for the next update.

What can I say about this one---it started off at that passionate moment between SwaSan on the terrace, when Sanskaar was almost about to kiss Swara, and she too, was feeling such an overwhelming pull, that soul deep attraction and connect between them. In fact, it was Sanskaar who held himself back, remembering Swara's declaration to Lakshya earlier on the terrace, which he witnessed. He feels so much anguish when he recalls that Swara said she loved Lakshya since she was 15 years old...and feels a lot of self loathing and disgust that he was going to kiss someone who is in love with another man! And yes, he feels a crushing anguish at that thought too...

So he wordlessly turns away, and hands her his coat to cover herself, since her black net sari is drenched in the rain and stuck to her like a second skin almost! Sanskaar is such a gentleman even at such an emotionally charged time. Though he feels such overpowering desire and love for Swara, pain at her refusal of his love, sorrow at her professing her love for Lakshya; above all this is his innate resolve to protect her, shield her.

When they finally return to their respective rooms, Swara is unable to understand her own heart, her own intense yearning for Sanskaar. She keeps thinking that she loves Lakshya, that is what she tries to convince her own mind. But her heart and soul know they belong to Sanskaar, have only ever belonged to Sanskaar, from a time and an age she only vaguely recalls. She is so confused as to why she is unable to resist this magnetic pull towards Sanskaar, why she was aching for his kiss on the terrace when he stood so close to her.

She tries to console herself, resolve that the next day, after Uttara's wedding, she would return to Mumbai and Sanskaar to Kolkata; and then she could be away from this storm of emotions he arouses within her. What a lovely touch you portrayed there, at the same time, Sanskaar looking at the moon from the window in his room.

As always, the moon reminds him of Swara, that deep connection between their souls from the time they were Pratam and Zaara. He too, thinks that he and Swara will soon be parted after Uttara's wedding, and feels so anguished by that, as well as the thought that she loves Lakshya. But then his keen mind starts wondering, why she is so affected by him. He resolves that he needs to find out from her the very next day, what she really feels for him.

Your description of the events at the wedding the next day was superb. Sanskaar kept himself a little aloof from the preparations, so that he could prepare the ground for meeting Swara. He said he had some business calls to attend in his study, but in reality, after finishing those he went to Swara's room and waited for her there. Swara in fact, was hoping to run into him 😉 😳, and was feeling a bit sad when she didn't see him anywhere, prior to when she went to her room.

I loved the way he told Swara calmly, once she had entered and bolted the door without seeing him there, that she could leave the door open if she felt uneasy with him. Such a true gentleman, wants to firmly ask Swara for the truth about her feelings, but doesn't want to force her or make her feel uncomfortable.

The way he walked close to her, asking if his proximity affected her was so seeti worthy! 😳 And then it got even more intense, he gently flicked some dust she had on her cheek, asking her if she felt anything then; and then clasped her waist gently, and tilted her head, looking deep into her eyes while caressing her cheek!!!

Though Swara was trying her best to say she was not affected by him, did not feel anything for him, Sanskaar could see that she was very deeply affected by the connect between them. Unfortunately, before they could finish their talk, Kavita arrived and knocked at the door.

The next sequence was so lovely, Nainu. With Kavita waiting outside in her room, Swara had to change from her jeans and kurti, into her orange lehnga and choli, even having to take off her upper innerwear to put on the padded choli. And Sanskaar was such a thorough gentleman, through and through. He kept his word, not even once glancing at Swara, though he must have been filled with such an overwhelming desire for her.

The way he closed the clasp of her choli with a safety pin, Swara shivering as his fingers caressed her bare back, and Sanskaar loosening her long hair, so that it covered the backless choli was amazing. Possessive and protective Sunny is so awesome!

The parting scene after the wedding was heartbreaking. Both Swara and Sanskaar felt tears pricking their eyes, their throats almost choked with the sorrow of parting. Sanskaar was telling himself in his mind, with so much anguish, that Swara was leaving without answering his question---what she felt for him. And true to their soul bond, Swara heard that agonized question, and turned around. She thought he was calling for her...and she couldn't bear the sheer look of loss and pain on his face, as if he had lost everything that mattered to him...

A week after that, Swara indicated to her parents that she wants to marry Lakshya---and Ram and Sujata are also very happy with this, as they love Swara. So now the parents are very happy; Lakshya is OK with the wedding as he likes Swara as a close friend, but doesn't really love her, not with that soul deep adoration. He wishes the wedding could be in a few years, as he is only 23, and he feels perhaps it is too early for him. Swara herself, seems to be opting for the wedding more because she feels she has always been in love with her childhood friend. She is probably scared about the intense emotions she has for Sanskaar, who is engaged to Kavita.

Ragini is away when all this talk of the Swara--Lakshya marriage happens...I am sure she is going to be extremely upset. She loves Lakshya after all...and I feel she may have a bitter outburst on Swara, that her sister has stolen her love!

That final scene, with Swara looking at the moon, thinking of Sanskaar, and trying to convince herself that she has to stop thinking about him, was so moving.

How are you going to make them meet again, Naina...I can't wait! Please, please update super soon!!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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whity.007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#780

😳 how cute romance in swara room
And that dress changing scene was 😳 😳

Shaadi laksh and swara 😡

Appadina only laksh wish maatum thaan
Niraivera pogudha.

What about my swasan

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