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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Posted: 21 November 2015 at 7:19am | IP Logged

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nice..

continu soon..

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
awesome as usual...
Loved Swasan..
Hated Ragini and lucky..
I wanna Kill them..

Continue soon..

Thanks so much for the comments on both parts Jidnyasa- there may be a queue to get to RagYa especially Laksh ji 😆

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: tarun1234567
first of all congrats shruthi for becoming rockerz..i didn't noticed that at all...😆
just preoccupied with other forums n my studies..gosh my xams gonna start on monday🥱
im little free now n just read this two parts...n thnx to ur pm it is a like reminder to me
warna mein bhool hi jaata...😆
this is so better than what we are seeing in the serial right now😃...
all the disappointments n irritations i had felt with the episodes were lowered a bit..😛
waiting for the part 3..n dont forget to pm me🤣
good night...n have a great weekend!!😳

Hey Tarun!

I hope the exams are going great- wish you all the luck with them! Thanks for taking the time to comment so nicely especially during exams. And I won't forget a PM never fear!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-
Shruti😡
Why did u hav to stop at such a point :(

Cont plzzz

Shab 😆

Kya karein abh? There was no good point to stop at! I'll finish the whole thing off by the end of the weekend hopefully!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Part 2 : ABSOLUTELY FAAAB!!!
Sanskaar is rocking as always n now his new plan with dooriyan?? But m sure thts just gonna make swara realise her true feelings fr him n thts what matters in the end! !!

Will tmrw come??? When will i get the Last Part!!!!

Thanks for reading so quick and commenting so nicely! Haha- I need to get writing Part 3- I will try to be as quick as I can but usually the detail means a good number of hours of frantic typing! 😃

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Beautifully written part 2. Amazing and absorbing.

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thanks for reading so quick and commenting so nicely! Haha- I need to get writing Part 3- I will try to be as quick as I can but usually the detail means a good number of hours of frantic typing! 😃

I knw ...its ur detailed writing tht makes it all so delicious to read...like im tucked away in the nook of my bed reading my favourite novel!!! Take ur time...as i knw it will be an amazing finale!!!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mjhtfan8
Beautifully written part 2. Amazing and absorbing.

Thank you so much for this!

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Nityah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

unreserving...

My God Shruti... its just so amazing... This update alone itself was a roller-coaster ride... Every emotion was here... be its melancholy, pain, love, joy, contentment, hate, anger... just everything...
And the way you wrote this is breath taking... Once I start reading I was just lost... See... the effect of your writings... you have made me addicted yaar... 😉😉
I loved the way you weaved the story that brought the aftermath part. Initially, At that point I was thinking that Sanskaar must be angry for Swara because of some reason.But it turns out to be something else and much better instead. Swara's confession was so amazingly done... You know na ... you're setting standards high... I will be happy if we get to see Swara's confession as good as here. It was sweet and straight forward. Just perfect. ⭐️ Their consummation... it was so finely done... just beautiful... You're word play there is so amazingly done...
Laksh ...seriously,,, he is not worth talking...he is scum here... 🤢 I liked that Sanskaar was all set to let that evil couple suffer the consequences of their crimes and most of all I liked that Swara was with him at that. Again.. I liked that Sanskaar didnt stayed back at MM... she was insulted so much there... its not worth it...

All in all Shruti... this TS was an amazing journey. I have told you before to but I will say again.. .I love your writing style... The way you describe everything is amazing. Would be looking forward for your next story...
With loads of love
Nitz.. 😳

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: maaneetfan

I knw ...its ur detailed writing tht makes it all so delicious to read...like im tucked away in the nook of my bed reading my favourite novel!!! Take ur time...as i knw it will be an amazing finale!!!

Part 3 now up, hope you like it!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
unreserving...

Shruti... 🤗 I got new router and finally set it up... 😆😆😆
Now I can ramble😛

Part 1 : The most amazing thing I found in that part is the depth of Swara's feeling. you have explored it soamazingly. Its a treat to read it because in show we get babaji ka thullu in this context. Another thing it was such a beautiful first kiss... you have described it so beautifully... It was such a tender moment... just by words as reader I can feel the budding love they both share. And Sanskaar flirting... OMG... you had me smiling like a giddy high schooler 😆😳

Part 2... I knew it was going to be angsty but it still hadnt prepared me to feel so many emotions. I am feeling so bad for Swara. I know she brought this up on her head but still I feel so sad for her. Sanskaar said right the only fault of Swara is to trust those backstabbers again. The humiliation she is facing here is so painful... It made my throat clogged and eyes misted. Sanskaar ... good gracious... how can one not love such man ...I am so glad Swara is finally seeing what a gem he is.Now where Sanskaar is a gem, our dearest Laksh is a chameleon. I have never hated any character as much I hate this one🤢. Ragini... wat to say about her she is pure evil. I dont understand how can a sister turned into a monster for her own sister. I am a sister and I love my sibling. I can never even imagine to do what she does. 🤢
Eagerly looking forward for next part...

Loads of Love
Nityah.. 😳

Nityah 🤗

Welcome back honey and what a blessing a new router feels like right when you have had to struggle without one?!

So glad you liked parts 1 and 2.

Yes, I get very disappointed by the lack of introspection shown for Swara on the show so always try to make Swara's POV detailed each time I write something. I love flirty Sanskaar 😳

Part 2 was hard to write as it is pain giving. Yes, I too felt for Swara as I wrote as when I had started I had been dealing with anger at her portrayal on the show. She is too trusting though, almost criminally so, and I wanted to get that across to her in a way that would "cure" this foolishness, you will hopefully see this followed through in part 3. I love that you felt all those emotions from my writing although it makes me sound cruel but you know what I mean?! 😆😳

I seriously don't get how a sibling can do the things they show of Ragini?! I adore my siblings and would die for them so for me this is 🤢

Thanks for the comments and catch you for a part 3 discussion too 😳