Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot - Page 8

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

@Part 2:

This is what Swara should have done in the show too, instead of just slapping Ragini. She should have told the Maheshwari's everything.

Laksh, I have full confidence, will react in the same way even in the show😊

That scene where she collapses on the floor crying reminded me of Khirad (Humsafar). This stupid girl doesnt even realize how important is a husband's support. Guess you never value somethings till you have lost them.😭

I am expecting a fully filmy reunion of these two after Sanskaar accomplishes his own mission😛 Ekdum mast Swara running across the badi from her home while Sanskaar stands with his arms outstretched at the main gate of the baadi😆😆😆 & then just sweeps her into a hug

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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Originally posted by: piccola1

Read it in one breath..Shruti ! I was w-a-i-t-i-n-g for it...and there it was! Thank You!👍🏼

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This was so well written, I could literally feel the evil malintent looming over and strangling out the radiance of our golden couple's first kiss and Swara's glorious feelings for Sanskaar. Wish we could have had them have a quick connect before the dark clouds snatched it all. But am certain, you left it there for a good reason.😛

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Hated it !...Err, hated the sick mentality of MM. I have been seething at the low mindedness and the sheer injustice of the MM maters since Fri for mudslinging Swara, but seeing no wrong in their darling Lakshya.😡 So this piece made me see red again..and the photos and videos..uhhh..I could cheerfully throttle Ragz and her traitorous poodle into the next river..except it wouldnt be that gentle stream in Kolkata, but a sea full of sharks or a river full of the most vicious piranha. How can the seniors at MM condone the kind of crap she was feeding them?😡

Swara's betrayal and her breaking down were heart breaking. For all her foolishness, you cant blame her for her innocence, or for her wanting to have her perfect family. No one deserves this kind of slander, least of all, someone who hadn't the remotest interest in the kind of doubleplay that she is accused of. 😭

Thanks🤗 for making Sanskaar what he truly is...a true knight in KA, an ideal husband, a true friend and supporter, His standing up for his golden girl was a given, and am glad it did not disappoint..it went beyond what I wanted actually, with his threat to leave home too. Love him ! ❤️

Waiting for your 3rd..and trusting our Sunny boy to do what it takes to close this evil, once and for all, and reclaim his love, her honor and her pride.. and above all their peace of mind, so they can get down to fulfilling their obligation to us😳...for our Swasanilicious "happily ever after" .😳

If that means he is going to contact his pals in NASA and shoot her out to Mars, all I can say is Bon Voyage😃 and God save the Martians.😆

Originally posted by: Kamala05

Beautiful narratiion shruti, I will post my comment in detail after reading the whole story . But so far so good .

Originally posted by: a_uma

Awesum as ever.. loved it.. and waiting for the finale.. 👏👏👏

While I was reading the 1st part.. I felt that you have explained quite a bit of swara's behaviour with her sister from a psychological point of view .. it actually clarified a lot of things for me.. why swara has been behaving so trustingly.. 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

I hv no words shru.i m speechless!
Its lk i said...spellbound.
Each n evry emotn u xpresd brilliantly.
I read both parts 2gethr.atleast here swara strtd 2 figure out her feelings.
Aww!swasan 1st kiss.
Thn d drama!hw much i hate ths mr.&mrs.psycho.
Here also sanskar stnd 4 swara.hw much i love ths man.
Tbh,swara deserve ths smway.whtever she is doing blindly,she got it bk.
Bt wht z sanskar planing??
Waiting 4 nxt part.updt soon.hw swasan overcm ths lets c.& pl dear gv a beautiful cnfessn.

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I knew this was going to be a bitter dose😕 But...I'm waiting for the happy ending now.

The part was so stressful that I felt like kneeling on the ground and sobbing along with Swara I mean I get Ragini but Lakshya? How pathetic can this guy be? And such an idiot, does he still think that after this act of his Swara would ever look at him let along love him? His logic is beyond my understanding

And Sanskar❤️

How can one survive this Mad MM, without him? He is so strong in his stand that his trust is almost overwhelming! You portrayal is outstanding here Shru⭐️

so what is he going to do? How is he going to put everything right?

Well you'll reveal with the 3rd part right?😃 So I'm waiting for that, breathlessly!

Please, please, please update soon😊

Originally posted by: Sanavi

How easily have u used the scenes nd created ur own version. I'm hooked.
Love when passed the trials of life gets more stronger.

RagYa r disgusting. Hv no words fr thm.

Do continue soon

Originally posted by: misaki

Once again Shru- you really are one of the best writers in the forum! That little trick with Sanskaar not saying anything after those photos were revealed made me believe that it might have been that little fact that caused him to get away from the madness for a while, so that he can actually make sense of all of it and get back at Ragini - that was what I had in my mind when I commented earlier. Of course that never meant that he did not believe in Swara - My Sanskaar and not believing his Swara? Ain't happening. Especially something like that. My guy is smart enough to realize how shady all of it was.Documents of non-existing house, a pendant and a tickets to Manali and those photos and video? I mean who would take them if not to use it to create this exact situation. He and Ragini had done it several other times hadn't they? It was such an old and obvious trick. He is the guru afterall!

So there was absolutely no question of him doubting Swara at all!

Now if only the other MM wasis were blessed with actual brains. Too much to ask I know! Do you blame me for doubting if Sanskaar is actually adopted! Would make so much sense. 😆

BTW I loved how you used Suju and AP to make Swara realize that even though she hadn't committed a sin in the way Ragini has made them question her, the way she so carelessly behaved with her devar was clearly not right. I was so happy to read how she finally realized how unbecoming of her it was as his "bhabhi" - brother's wife and also Mr. LRG 's ex-fiance. I loved the line from Suju that talks about crossing a line and having to prove yourself later. Totally fitting title to the FF btw😃 I mean why create that situation.? Haven't anyone learnt anything from Ramayan? Swara needed to hear that and mere dil ko thandak mila! Yass! I hate the way Suju is defending Ragini on the show after everything that has happened but this here was very nicely done. Loved it for some reason.😆

Ah! so now I see why they are not together, can't wait to see how my smarty is going to become his damsel's Knight in shining armor yet again and rescue her in phull philmy style ! Yayy! Can't wait to read the next one. A very nice 2nd part Shru! Loved it as usual!🤗

Ah! How did I forget to mention this- I love how you got both Laksh and Ragini to play equal part with it. I absolutely love watching them stoop to higher lows every time! It gives me so much sadistic pleasure! 😈