Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot - Page 10

@ part 3

You made me fall in love with sanskar over and over ...

I don't have the words to tell you how brilliantly parts 2 & 3 were written!

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nityah 🤗

Welcome back honey and what a blessing a new router feels like right when you have had to struggle without one?!

So glad you liked parts 1 and 2.

Yes, I get very disappointed by the lack of introspection shown for Swara on the show so always try to make Swara's POV detailed each time I write something. I love flirty Sanskaar 😳

Part 2 was hard to write as it is pain giving. Yes, I too felt for Swara as I wrote as when I had started I had been dealing with anger at her portrayal on the show. She is too trusting though, almost criminally so, and I wanted to get that across to her in a way that would "cure" this foolishness, you will hopefully see this followed through in part 3. I love that you felt all those emotions from my writing although it makes me sound cruel but you know what I mean?! 😆😳

I seriously don't get how a sibling can do the things they show of Ragini?! I adore my siblings and would die for them so for me this is 🤢

Thanks for the comments and catch you for a part 3 discussion too 😳

You have no idea... how much relieved I am... I was so lost last week...
About Swara being too trusting... just like here... she is gonna taste the bitter pill in show... My mind is spinning just thinking what is gonna happen in show now... Here I was thinking some SwaSan romance will be shown... But its again kidnapping 🤢
The thing with Ragini is she is just confusing... You hate her yet somewhere somehow she will manage to gain your sympathy. But most of all what I dislike here are the dunderheads called Maheshwaris. I just dont understand how can they believe Ragini... they think Ragini still have not regained memory but dont they remember Ragini before was out for Swara's blood ... before too she had weaved lies and proofs such that Swara was shown in bad light. And now I definitely hate Sujju... how the hell she praised Ragini I dont get it.
Lolz I rambled here... but the moot point is I hope cvs handle this track carefully ... People are loosing interest because of repeated tricks and tracks and some unsocial elements. Trps are definitely showing it...
I wish .. you would have been creative for show... then we would have got logical characters and scenarios there... 😛


btw unresed previous page

beautiful part 3.. loved the way how swara took uttara's advice and went to sanskar.. took the initiative and confessed her love.. 👏👏👏 .. as for Laksh no words.. he is as delusional as Ragini..

I loved each and every word of this story .

I knew that bitter dose would be followed by sweet honey! And I was right!! Can I hug you for that awesome punch your Sanskar decided to throw at Lakshya? I was literally dancing there. The moment he reduced to force I muttered to myself now Sanskar would come and you're gone! Exactly!

Shruti this is such an amazing piece I could read it a thousand times...
Seriously I loved it but the you descrived their love making scene reminded me of our good ol' hindi movies you know where two flowers meeting signifies love making.
But as much I want to believe that such turn of events could make Swara confess her love I cant she is such a slow person moving at snail's pace that seperation might only make her realise her feelings...
But Shru thank you for writing this I sooo wish all this could come true but we know cv's they have no originality left

i cnt tell how much i love ths..

It was wonderful update. You have done justice with all and not simply write their being with each other but described each emotion so well. It was an amazing experience. Well done n thanks for pm