Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Read both parts...
Wow didu...
It's awesome, blossom and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
What a beautiful ending di...
Do write more...
Sorry for short comment as i m busy these days plus still my hand not recover...
Continue soon ..
Thanks for the pm

Hello my sweet! Thank you so much for always making the time for my work, despite commitments and the injury too! So happy you liked it and took time to tell me. Please don't worry about the length of the comment, I am thrilled with what you have said. Please please take care of your hand and health! Love you lots and do keep reading when you can, am working on something now!

Mmmwah

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Wow awesome 👏
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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Wow awesome 👏
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Thanks Sujay:) This was a 3 shot and all 3 parts are posted? Wasn't sure if you had read all:)

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Awesome

The all the three parts were beautiful. The thoughts of sanskar and swara was beautifully portrayed. The love, trust and friendship between swara and sanskar was really nice. The changes in the real story line was also awesome

Ragini only wanted to destroy swara's happiness. And Laksh also tried to separate swasan.

I really loved the character of uttara.

At the end after facing so many problems, the true love of swasan overcome all the evil eyes.

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome
The all the three parts were beautiful. The thoughts of sanskar and swara was beautifully portrayed. The love, trust and friendship between swara and sanskar was really nice. The changes in the real story line was also awesome
Ragini only wanted to destroy swara's happiness. And Laksh also tried to separate swasan.
I really loved the character of uttara.
At the end after facing so many problems, the true love of swasan overcome all the evil eyes.

Hey Sakkiyah! Thank you so much for reading this and liking it! I wrote this at the time that both RagYa were against SwaSan in different ways! Made me feel very happy to see it recently being appreciated again.

Lots of love x

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blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Dear shruthi

Thanks for the link, once I started reading I realised I had already read it but who can resist yet another feel of a romantic update that too one with a swasan kiss and loads of passion. When I first read it I was a silent member but not anymore, so let me reminisce the moments once more

The flirting on the terrace was the most beautiful part. The tension around them was so evident that you could feel the it mounting around them. The way you described how they missed each other during day times, waiting to be in the company of each other, creating opportunities to touch each other...it was so well portrayed. Any person who has fallen in love goes through all the said emotions and how beautifully you created those moments.

Another striking part how she instantly looked upon him.to protect her from the verbal abuses and how he guarded her like a knight (My DK) .

His concern for her before advancing from the kiss was so touching. He is a perfect gentleman

And less said the better about the two partners of crime. Swaras statement that she will go along with sanskar decision regarding the punishment itself is the best revelation of her love for him. She who always protected and believed her sister over sanskar has finally decided to believe in her love.

Waiting anxiously for you start the new thread

Love, veena

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Dear shruthi
Thanks for the link, once I started reading I realised I had already read it but who can resist yet another feel of a romantic update that too one with a swasan kiss and loads of passion. When I first read it I was a silent member but not anymore, so let me reminisce the moments once more

The flirting on the terrace was the most beautiful part. The tension around them was so evident that you could feel the it mounting around them. The way you described how they missed each other during day times, waiting to be in the company of each other, creating opportunities to touch each other...it was so well portrayed. Any person who has fallen in love goes through all the said emotions and how beautifully you created those moments.
Another striking part how she instantly looked upon him.to protect her from the verbal abuses and how he guarded her like a knight (My DK) .
His concern for her before advancing from the kiss was so touching. He is a perfect gentleman

And less said the better about the two partners of crime. Swaras statement that she will go along with sanskar decision regarding the punishment itself is the best revelation of her love for him. She who always protected and believed her sister over sanskar has finally decided to believe in her love.

Waiting anxiously for you start the new thread
Love, veena

Veena sweetheart 🤗

Awww you made me so happy with this and made me miss my time on this Forum and on my threads 😳. Thank you!! Can't believe you re-read this! It was a very special story for me. I had slogged literally almost all weekend on this without a break to post the whole thing. That whole Diwali sequence was really magical for me. The whole Benares convo really struck a chord with me. I wrote another story called Sanctified based in that place too from that:)

I so felt transported to their world writing that kiss scene. I am so glad you felt that reading. I always see Sanskaar as her knight errant 😳- DK just celebrated that in my way 😳😊. In most of my stories I try to restore them to some balance and make Swara defer to him in those matters as he does to her in so many too- a respectful and rightful partnership to me:).

I have had so many kind requests to start on my new story. I have resisted as am quite heartsick with stuff on the Forum generally and have perhaps wrongly withheld stories too for that as my motivation levels were in the negative. Let us see, I have a plot outline for a story but it needs development.

Lots of love to you dearest Veena xoxo