Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all congrats shruthi for becoming rockerz..i didn't noticed that at all...😆
just preoccupied with other forums n my studies..gosh my xams gonna start on monday🥱
im little free now n just read this two parts...n thnx to ur pm it is a like reminder to me
warna mein bhool hi jaata...😆
this is so better than what we are seeing in the serial right now😃...
all the disappointments n irritations i had felt with the episodes were lowered a bit..😛
waiting for the part 3..n dont forget to pm me🤣
good night...n have a great weekend!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

wow awesome shruti..😊

loved this part.. continue soon..😳


Thanks a lot Kulsum, hope part 2 is up to scratch x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Hey,

A new fanfic!!! Yay! ❤️ Loved it! You've started out with their feelings during the last few episodes and are taking it forward. Great beginning! The kiss!!! ❤️😃❤️ so awesome!!! Truly heart warming! Awaiting to see what unfolds next! As usual awesome writing!

Please update soon! :)

-V


Hey V! Thank you! So glad you liked the story and the writing 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unreserving...


Shruti... 🤗 I got new router and finally set it up... 😆😆😆
Now I can ramble😛

Part 1 : The most amazing thing I found in that part is the depth of Swara's feeling. you have explored it soamazingly. Its a treat to read it because in show we get babaji ka thullu in this context. Another thing it was such a beautiful first kiss... you have described it so beautifully... It was such a tender moment... just by words as reader I can feel the budding love they both share. And Sanskaar flirting... OMG... you had me smiling like a giddy high schooler 😆😳

Part 2... I knew it was going to be angsty but it still hadnt prepared me to feel so many emotions. I am feeling so bad for Swara. I know she brought this up on her head but still I feel so sad for her. Sanskaar said right the only fault of Swara is to trust those backstabbers again. The humiliation she is facing here is so painful... It made my throat clogged and eyes misted. Sanskaar ... good gracious... how can one not love such man ...I am so glad Swara is finally seeing what a gem he is.Now where Sanskaar is a gem, our dearest Laksh is a chameleon. I have never hated any character as much I hate this one🤢. Ragini... wat to say about her she is pure evil. I dont understand how can a sister turned into a monster for her own sister. I am a sister and I love my sibling. I can never even imagine to do what she does. 🤢
Eagerly looking forward for next part...

Loads of Love
Nityah.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Thank you!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swasanian

YAYYY another one from my favourite writer!
Shruti, let me tell you...your Comprehension series was the first story I read on IF since I became a SwaSan shipper.
And my expectations were raised so high from all the other Swasan stories just because of that ONE story of yours.
And since then I have been such a huge fan that I wait with baited breath for you to come up with new ones
Its mostly your writing style that I am in love with
You totally make the reader so engrossed that we never want it to end !
Plz plz update sooonnn!!!!
Love and regards
Anu 😊


Hey there Anu! 😳 Wow- seriously? I am so 😳 reading that you started with Comprehensions and liked my work! I don't know what to say- music to a writer's ears when anyone says they wait to read what is written! I am seriously so grateful- please keep reading and do share your feedback, good or bad, with me! Thanks so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: misaki

Shru 🤗

Was so happy seeing your PM in my inbox, I knew I was in for a treat and treat it indeed was.

That forehead kiss - I loved it but of course I wished it was something more but seeing as our Sanskar has decided to really live up to his name *facepam* I think we won't get anything remotely asanskaari from him! Hmph! Dream pe bhi forehead pe kiss kartha hain - tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta Sanskaar!🤔 *shakes head* *double facepalm*

I really cannot think about anything else but that amazing kiss between the two right now! I wish we could actually witness it happening on the show, but of course we won't *dissapointing sigh*
I loved how you actually managed to prove that "aag" definitely is "laga" on both the sides. There was of course no realization that happened, but there was no need for it was there? 😉 It was beautiful Shru❤️ I love how Sanskaar on the show is now so very open about his love to her and I also love the fact that Swara is no longer going on "how dare you" mode because of it. In fact she actually enjoys it. I love how you got your Sanskaar to go one step ahead and just take a chance. He knows, he so knows! My Sanskaar is a very very smart man! *proud muh* Ah I love him! My Sanky hanky man!

Now after that amazing kiss between our favorite couple, I am super curious as to why those two are in the state that they are in the beginning. I have a theory in my mind of course so I'm going to wait it out to see if you are actually taking that route. 😃

I loved the quotes btw.JKR!❤️ They were a nice addition to a very fitting story. Again need I tell you how ,much I absolutely enjoy reading your works?I was completely into it. I could see Sanskaar in that red kurti and Swara in her pati's diya hua lehanga the entire time and the balcony, the moon and the stars that were the lucky witnesses to their beautiful moment. Kaash yeh hum hote! No wait- I would so not wish for it. If I did have a wish, you know what I would rather wish for!😉😆😃


Geetu 🤗
Here you are and as ever too kind to me! Thanks honey.
Yes! Me too- Ioved the SwaSan scenes recently but I am too greedy na, so wanted to take it a step further and I think a proper kiss fit in at that moment for them. Yeah, I so find it irritating that they don't show the progression of Swara's feelings in the show so we are forced to write it out in our stories! And you nailed it- I didn't want a big dramatic instant realisation for Swara- I think she has enough to make her see what is before her. I will comment on your next comment too re the whys and wherefores 😃
I am a huge HP fan and thought it fitting given my theme to take a quote from The Order of the Phoenix. I am 😳 at your comments about how you could visualise the whole scene- thank you! xx
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Shruti😡
Why did u hav to stop at such a point :(

Cont plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice updates.. 👍🏼


Thank you Sneha!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KawalArora

you write so beautifully dear. It was amazing n i was waiting for update. You hv tremendous capability of writing emotions n i luved it. thanks for pm


Thank you so much for your kind comments dear!

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