Overpowered by Love- SwaSan Three Shot - Page 9

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Media 🤗 Thank you for so patiently reading especially when so sleepy! Wouldn't have been surprised if such a long update made you sleepy 😆.

Yes see- I very deliberately made it so filmy and public as I really felt that Swara owed it to Sanskaar to make as public a declaration as she could. It's a shame the actual families couldn't be there but...

I did get a bit carried away with the whole thing but after the depression I probably caused in the last few parts, I myself wanted to make it really happy and so thought I would risk the drama.

The detail- ah yes, i wondered if it was too long but I hate loose ends and so to explain it all so that it still made sense seemed to take ages!

Thank you so much for commenting so nicely and hope you'll have a great sleep!

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti 🤗
Can i say that i'm very sad? Your TS finished 😒 But i didn't want to.
It was so mesmerizing
Swara's confession was oh gosh so beautiful ❤️ And it was a public one 😳 I was literally dancing when she confessed it 🥳 If this happens in the show i will throw a huge party ⭐️😆
And that line ' Mujhe bohut kuch kehna bhi hai aur karna bhi hai, lekin iske liye akele hona zaroori hai, yahan se toh arrest ho jayenge ' <3
I found it filmy 😎 and that's why i loved it 😳
It was a lovely and perfect ending ❤️
Keep writing more Shruts 🤗

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

why do you keep calling me media re?😆😆 its cool...but Its probably the spellchecker. i always have problems with my tab...I call my dad as Papu...everytime i write it, if he's out on tour or something, the spellchecker makes it paper.😃 So, I go like...Hi Paper, what's up? and my dad replies...dunno...which should i check the telegraph or the statesman?😆

and you are right about why you had to make it all bustling with onlookers...its time madam gave him a committment. and the way the MM waasis do not believe anything without proofs...there better be witnesses anyway.😆

Wowww dear what a story yr 👏 👏
U r such a great writer dear 👏
Hats off to ur writting skills 😊
U portrait sanskaar 's feeling so well 😳
And swara what to say about dis grl yr... She is so ziddi but koi na at last she realize her mistake ... Finally swasan are together. 😳
Really loved ur story ... Do write more and haan do pm me next time u write something 😉

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thank you hugely Jazzy! So happy you liked that quote- my kid brother used it on his whats app status and I loved what it suggested so looked it up, didn't even know it was a game 😆.

That's totally right about Sanskaar having done so much so now it's his turn to somewhat lash. I just wanted to bring out that despite all that he still bends as that's his equation with Swara- who frankly if left to herself would never make SwaSan happen- silly girl 😃

Originally posted by: meghaashvikian

Wowww dear what a story yr 👏 👏
U r such a great writer dear 👏
Hats off to ur writting skills 😊
U portrait sanskaar 's feeling so well 😳
And swara what to say about dis grl yr... She is so ziddi but koi na at last she realize her mistake ... Finally swasan are together. 😳
Really loved ur story ... Do write more and haan do pm me next time u write something 😉

Originally posted by: JazzyM

"Heaven doesn't want me and Hell's afraid I'll take over!"

It's a game?? I didn't know that...All I know is, it's a song from terror (trilogy) - My ruin...

Not musical though,... the 1st time I heard it was when my team put this as a background for a work we had done..show casing how a team leader would be...

On SwaSan...you are totally right, left to Swara...not only SwaSan would never happen but even the inception wouldn't occur...😕

This is the final...no, don't...what about an epilogue? Not an ever after but a week later...something...because my dear, your writing is so vivid, the characters come alive...

Originally posted by: JazzyM

This is the final...no, don't...what about an epilogue? Not an ever after but a week later...something...because my dear, your writing is so vivid, the characters come alive...

"Oh God Sanskaar, kitna tamasha karr diya hamne."

Cocking a raised eyebrow at her, her husband, the smile still not leaving his face, retorted,

"Humne?!"

Gosh.. I could literally visualize Swara's with her head burrowed in Sanskaar's chest and Sanskaar with his love me not eyes cocking up... Splendid.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Awww am blushing now 😳 You guys are too kind! Thank you! Haha- never thought of an epilogue! Hmm, I was just going to start writing a new OS- some ideas playing in my head so let's see if they translate across. Maybe I'll do something soon on their "normal" moments together? Something we don't seem to get at all on the show?!