Overpowered by Love- SwaSan Three Shot - Page 10

Originally posted by: JazzyM

New OS...that is even better than an epilogue... Is there a 'normal' with SwaSan...everything is intense with these two...

Your "normal" will end up being 'piping hot'...I'm sure it'll scorch the paper it's written on...

Bring it out...we would love it...

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thank you Shruti! Yes, I needed a full on happy ending for myself given the current track! I know re the filmy- like I said to Medha, I was torn about this. See, one of my alternative scenarios was that whole confession playing out in private as originally I wanted them to kiss straight after BUT I couldn't let Swara off. I felt she had to declare to the whole world how much she loves him as he had been through hell and back in love so hence the filminess couldn't be avoided:).

I have a few nebulous ideas floating but I tend to look at the current track and then build my own one up so let's see how the melodrama plays out. Perhaps a Sanskaar based OS on the current stuff happening?! Tell me if you have any views, things you would like to see because sometimes that gives me ideas!

Thank you again!

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

@bold: yes! 😈 And better in front of a room full of strangers than those MMwasis🤢

@red: some fluff plz😳 or maybe their first diwali/ new year/ any festival😳

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

I'll try my hand at fluff soon in that case! Am sure I can find some plot to build around one of the forthcoming festivals- let's see when inspiration strikes! Thanks for that- it's nice to take soundings 😳

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hi Megha, thank you so much! Such nice comments- am touched. Yes, of course, I'll pm you for the next one for sure!

Originally posted by: gayu6

Read all 3 parts in one go. Really well written. Finally she herself understand her feelings for him.so nice. Pls do write more

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Shruti...😊

Sorry for the late reply, but as I scrapped you, past week has been hectic with travel. So I managed to catch up with all 3 parts of this TS just today.

Very, very powerful, Shruti. The first 2 parts were full of angst and the pain of separation...you know what, you're lucky I read all 3 at one go just now. Else I would have been spamming you, demanding part 3 ASAP--forget your new role, work pressures, etc etc. 😊. You wouldn't have known how to escape me!
I'm like this when I write my own fics too--like ek chutki sindhoor or second chances or even it was written in the stars. I like to do angst and separation, but I want the resolution soon. 😉 So thank you for giving the reunion in part 3 or else (...belan in hand...) I would have had a bone to pick with you. 😆

Loved the reference to Wuthering Heights--that's one of my favorite novels, and I agree with you, the "love" between Cathy and Heathcliff is a terrible, consuming one. So full of darkness and bitterness...am pretty sure a lasting, happy love cannot be based on such a template.

I just love snippets of dialogue/ narration that stay with me even when I've finished reading, and for me, the ones which stood out here were, in the 2nd shot, where you described Swara--Sanskaar's "dard ka rishta" : ...was forged from the fires of shared pain and joint suffering- thus indestructible unless by themselves.

And of course, all the cute, filmi dialogues in part 3. "Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwai, main tumse jitni baar tum shaadi karna chaho, karoonga, lekin tumhe apni life se ek bhi baar abh jaane nahi doonga"

and

"Mujhe bahut kuch kehna bhi hai aur karna bhi hai, lekin iske liye akele hona zaroori hai, yahan se toh arrest ho jayenge"

😳 😳