Overpowered by Love- SwaSan Three Shot - Page 11

If only our creatives thought this way too. *sigh*

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Viji 🤗 Welcome back after a hectic time! It was so nice to read this detailed and constructive comment as ever, missed you! Oh God- yes, we are so the same in that. After writing 1 and 2 and all that pain and aggro, I had 3 and a resolution constantly playing out in different ways in my head, on the long drive to work, in between hectic meetings etc 😆. Thank God work don't know about my obsession, my poor team would freak! Glad I didn't have to be chased by a belan or even without it 😃 and even more glad you liked it despite the slightly different style on this for me! Yes, Wuthering Heights always fascinated me for that very reason- the slightly repellant but oddly compulsive quality of what was between Cathy-Heathcliff- it transcended love and even obsession really, a literal tragedy when two twin souls are ripped apart I guess. Thanks so much for making my day with your words and even actually picking out the dialogues/ lines you liked. 🤗

Much awaited confession. ..

I just loved, loved this TS. ⭐️..it had everything, separation, pain, was very angsty and ah yes a very filmy ending which I adored...😳...I read it again in one go and was overjoyed...😃 I could connect to swara's pain, but it was sanskaar's which tore my heart...you see I am a hopeless sansku fan...I just love the character "sanskaar"...for me the best part was the second one since it was more of sansku...Sans incredulity when swara, out of confusion, ask him the reason for coming then answering herself that "it was for divorce" was mind blowing...oh I felt like giving both of them a tight hug and whacking them to open their eyes and see each other's pain...

Originally posted by: misaki

If only our creatives thought this way too. *sigh*

I absolutely loved the filmy ending.😆 Sanskaar deserves so much more.❤️ I hope she repeats the whole confession in front of the great Maheshwari clan too. Hayye and the kiss!!! 😃What a scandal it would be if SwaSan actually kissed in front of the "sanskaari " family eh?🤣 It would be awesome.

Again, lovely piece of writing Shruthi. 🤗 Thank you for this. I cannot get enough of SwaSan.😃 I lovvedd your Sanskaar ❤️ I liked your Swara too,Since she is not an idiot like the one on show right now.🤔 (I meant no offence to Swara fans, it's just that it's getting really difficult for me to relate to that character. I can actually go on and make a separate post for it .🤓)

Moving on, since a similar track is going to be seen on the show(divorce track), I hope they do justice to Sanskaar and Swara's love story without ruining the essence of what makes it unique. I hope they actually visit IF and see how much we enjoy the current Sanskaar and his way of loving Swara. They can borrow a thing or two from this very post of yours.😆 Don't you dare change my Sanskaar CVs!!😡😆 Sadly the same thing cannot said about Swara

They can happily change the TV Swara and make her less mahaan and more real. The one who would truly deserve our Sanskaar. (A girl can always dream)Seriously! I feel like it's always Sanskaar who has put everything into making their relationship and SwaSan. It's about time she played her part too. It's going to be a long and agonizing wait for all of us and our Sanskaar. *sigh*

Originally posted by: anu91

Much awaited confession. ..

The way u described was so so so awesome dear...

No words for the updates...

Excellent one...

Loved loved loved it so much...

Originally posted by: kaku17

I just loved, loved this TS. ⭐️..it had everything, separation, pain, was very angsty and ah yes a very filmy ending which I adored...😳...I read it again in one go and was overjoyed...😃

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I could connect to swara's pain, but it was sanskaar's which tore my heart...you see I am a hopeless sansku fan...I just love the character "sanskaar"...for me the best part was the second one since it was more of sansku...Sans incredulity when swara, out of confusion, ask him the reason for coming then answering herself that "it was for divorce" was mind blowing...oh I felt like giving both of them a tight hug and whacking them to open their eyes and see each other's pain...

Thankfully the resolution came in the third chapter itself and what a declaration...since I have a really low threshold for pain I was overjoyed at swara's open declaration of love...my shipper heart was doing somersaults in happiness...

Thanks for writing such a brilliant one...I sincerely hope that the cvs come to IF and read it and then decide how to proceed with the divorce track...hope they do justice to both sanskaar and swara in this...keeping my fingers crossed...

Please keep writing more...😃

Very nice. Loved reading it.

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Very nice. Loved reading it.