SWASAN FF : DAASTAAN(Part 7 updated on page no 26) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Amazing update
Cockroach and hippo 🤣
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
They both are going in same taxi😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
vERY intresting start...keep up the good work and update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Love the part.
Tell me one thing .
Kya such mein punar jaman hote hai.


And mostly i love hippo and cockroach very much...LoL.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: blackkitty

Love the part.
Tell me one thing .
Kya such mein punar jaman hote hai.


And mostly i love hippo and cockroach very much...LoL.

dont know yaar...but personally i dont believe in punarjanam😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Wow just awesome dear. Waiting for the next part update soon 😊
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thanks for the replies frds😃
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DAASTAAN

Part 3

Scene 1

Sanskaar(to taxiwala)-chalein

Swara-tum

Sanskaar-tum

Swara-what r u doing here

Sanskaar-where

Swara-inside the car

Sanskaar-main jaigarh ja rha hoon

Swara-excuse me...i m going okk

Sanskaar-okk...then go na

Swara-yeh taxi meri hai

Sanskaar-ji nhi yeh taxi meri hai

Swara-look hippo...this is my taxi

Sanskaar-nope this taxi is mine u cockroach

Swara-meri hai

Sanskaar-nhi meri hai

Taxidriver-sir ji madam ji...yeh taxi meri hai

Swasan(together)-bich mein mat bolna

(Ragini came there)

Ragini-guys what happen

Sanskaar-ragzzz where is ur frd

Ragini-she is my frd(pointing towards swara)

Sanskaar-no ways...yeh jayegi mere saath...never

Ragini-correction...tum jaogey iskey saath because she was the one who booked the taxi

Swara(with a winning look)-aur yeh hippo mere saath nhi ayega

Ragini-hippo...sanskaar really...wow this is new(sanskaar glared at her)no i mean like i know ki office mein sab tumhe dusht daanav bulatey hain but hippo is new

Sanskaar(with a what the hell look)-dusht daanav

Swara-how innovative na...i mean dusht daanav(suddenly she realised what she said)taxiwaaley bhaiya chalo

Sanskaar-chalo...but where haan

Swara-jaigarh...meri taxi hai mainey book ki hai toh jaigarh bhi main hi jaongi na

Sanskaar-ragzz

Ragini-swara plzz yaar sanskaar ko kaam hai usey lekar jao na...plzz...for me

Swara-ok fine...but just because u r insisting otherwise iskey jaisey bandey ke saath

Sanskaar-excuse me...mere jaisa banda...what do u exactly mean by that

Swara-it means like

Sanskaar-like what

Swara-u r watchman na...so i thought ki

Ragini-wait...who is watchman

Swara-mr hippo

Ragini-swara he is the owner

Swara(with a shocking look)-kiska owner

Ragini-he is the owner of this hotel

Swara(with a its impossible look)-really

Ragini-yeah...n he is my best frd n yeah he is a nice guy so u can trust him

Swara-tum keh rahi ho toh...but koi psycho killer toh nhi hai na

Sanskaar(with an angry look)-tum na yahaan khade hokar time pass karo...m going...chalo bhaiya

Swara-arey...m coming...bye ragini

Ragini-bye...bye sanskaar

Scene 2

(at laksh's office)

Laksh-(he was trying swara's no)(the no u have dialled is not reachable)what the hell yaar...shona where r u yaar

DP-laksh do one thing

Laksh-what dad

DP-try her frds no

Laksh-yeah good idea dad...thanks

DP-i have a meeting so m going

Laksh-bye dad

DP-bye

(he dialled ragini's no)

Ragini-international no...yeh kiska hai

Laksh-come on yaar...pick up

Ragini-hello

Laksh-hey hii m laksh swara's

Ragini-boy frd

Laksh-no uska would be husband

Ragini-okkk...aapko mera no kaisey mila

Laksh-woh swara called me na...remember today morning

Ragini-oh yeah...but she is not here

Laksh-then where is she

Ragini-woh toh jaigarh ke liye nikal gyi

Laksh-damn

Ragini-laksh...is everything ok

Laksh-yeh miss...miss

Ragini-hii m ragini

Laksh-dont know yaar...m confuse

Ragini-is there any problem

Laksh-okk listen...m coming to india

Ragini-aap india a rahe hain

Laksh-yeah...n if u don't mind toh kya tum mujhe mil sakti ho plzz...look just a request yaar...if u r not comfortable then

Ragini-no its completely fine...aap a jaiyey phir baat kartey hain

Laksh-thanks

Ragini-anythime

Laksh-bye then...see u tomorrow

Ragini-yeah bye

Scene 3

(on the way to jaigarh)

Swara-tum thoda side mein hokar baithogey

Sanskaar-tell me one thing how much place u need to sit

Swara-meri taxi hai

Sanskaar-toh kya...itni si ho aur jagah do logo ki lekar baithi ho

Swara-tumse door hokar baithi hoon

Sanskaar-kyun main bite karta hoon

Swara-may be

Sankaar(he was trying to control his anger)-listen stop it ok...i m in a trouble thats why m here otherwise tumharey saath main 10 min na baithun

Swara-toh mat baitho...jaao...waisey bhi

Sanskar-i know i know...this taxi is yours

Taxiwala-sir ji par taxi toh

Swasan(with an irritated look)-pta hai taxi tumhari hai

Swara-waisey bhaiya aapka naam kya hai

Taxiwala-madam ji jugnu

Swara-wow

Jugnu-waisey madam ji aapko jana kahaan hai

Swara-jaigarh

Jugnu-haan par jaigarh mein kahaan

Swara-that toh i don't know but my destination is jaigarh

Sanskaar-ohh padhi likhi ganwaar aisey kaisey...kahin bhi jaogi kya...kyun jana hai kisliye jana hai kis se milna hai...kuch toh pta hoga

Swara-thats none of ur business

Jugnu-madam ji but sir ji sahi keh rahein hain na

Swara-kisi ko dhundhna hai

Sanskaar-kisko

Swara-nhi pta

Sanskaar-tum pagal waagal ho kya

Swara-yeah but not more than u...hippo

Sanskaar-hey my name is sanskaar

Swara-really waisey tumhara naam tumharey character se match nhi karta

Sanskaar-whatever...i just hate u

Swara-mutual feelings...i mean same here

Jugnu(monologue)-in dono ne mujhe pagal kar dena hai

(after 3 hours)

Sanskaar-jugnu ji gaadi kyun rok di

Jugnu-pta nhi sir ji koi problem ho gyi hai shayad

Swara-aisey raat mein yahaan aisey road par...kaisi jagah hai

Sanskaar-oh hello...we r stuck here...i mean in middle of the road n u r complaining about the place...u r weird yaar

Swara-not that yaar i mean m alone aisey

Sanskaar-tumhe dekhkar bhoot dar jaaye...kisiki himmat hai tumhe kuch kehne ki

Swara-shut up(with a tensed look)

Sanskaar-okk jokes apart u r not alone ok...main hoon

(swara felt some unknown feeling...something positive)

Jugnu-sir ji time lagega

Swara-kitna

Jugnu-4-5 ghantey

Swara-no

Sanskaar-what yaar jugnu

Swara-hey sanskaar woh dekho(she pointed towards a hotel)

Sanskaar-hotel

Swara-hmm...lets go...thoda so lengey...m feeling sleepy yaar

Sanskaaar-swara pagal mat bano...just look at this place...i mean this is so shady...dont know kaisa hotel hoga

Swara-so what...hamein sirf 4-5 ghantey hi toh rehna hai

Jugnu-jaiye sir...main bula loonga

Sanskaar-m still not convinced

Swara-sanskaar

Sanskaar-fine

(they entered the hotel)

Sanskaar-swara listen...its not safe

Swara-darr rahe ho

Sanskaar-swara shut up...hamesha majaak nhi hota hai

(a creepy n leech kind of man came there)

Man-ji sir ji

Swara-room chahiyey

Man(he glared at swara n smiled)-kyun nhi ji

(Sanskaar noticed that)

Sanskaar-room

Man-100 rs / hour

Swara-itna sasta aur hours ke hisaab sey

Sanskaar-will u plzz shut up

(sanskaar gave him 500 rs)

Sanskaar-room

Man-yeh lijiye chabi

(in the room)

Swara-not bad yaar

Sanskaar-mujhe yeh nhi pta ki kon jada bada pagal hai tum ya main

Swara-ab kya hua

Sanskaar-hum wapas ja rahein hain

Swara-m not coming

Sanskaar-swara we r going back...taxi was better

Swara-main nhi a rhi hoon

Sanskaar-fine raho yahaan m going

Swara-go...wapas mat ana

Sanskaar-never

(he goes from there)

Swara(after 15 minutes)-sach mein gya (she heard some loud music) ohhh god aadhi raat ko itna loud music...yeh doosrey room mein hai kon...dekhti hoon

(she goes to the next room n knocked...a gunda type of guy opened the door)

Swara-aap log plzz(she saw the environment of that room...bear...ciggarattes...5 drunk guys)m sorry(she just turned to go back suddenly a guy pulled her inside)chodo mujhe plzz

Precap-ragya meet

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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
First of all I want to do this🤗🤗🤗
Wow...amazing sonu👏👏👏👏
I don't know that u would write this much amazing stories
Caught all the previous parts in on go really awesome Sonu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
SwaSan nok jhoks 😳 and the hotel seems scary 😕 hope sanskar saves swara 😳 awesome update Sona 👏 😳

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